Recent Comments

Ryan. R
4/19/20, 7:51 PM
With lock down I have so much more time to read all of these amazing stories on the website. I loveed this series so much and how it connected some of your previous work. Looking forward to when you put the next story out, reading the above I am hoping at some point in the near future. Hope you are safe and well. Ryan.
4/19/20, 7:39 PM
@Kully, you're very welcome! Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the nice comment. :)
Apr 19, 2020
swngbthways
4/19/20, 6:31 PM
BEAUTIFUL story! I hope there's a resolution to bringing them back together.
Jake
4/19/20, 6:27 PM
Absolutely fantastic story and writing from start to finish. Hope to see another chapter !!!
4/19/20, 6:24 PM
tigerwoods, Yes, only unit 2's get daily downloads, as their jobs change as more and more of this world are converted and the unit 1's and the Great Leader decide what is next... everyone else just works as designated at the time of their conversion
4/19/20, 6:05 PM
I agree with what everyone has written so far. This is a really intriguing premise and is the start of a very enjoyable story. Really looking forward to reading more!
4/19/20, 5:26 PM
Yes please a sequel!!! this story is so interesting!
Anonymous
4/19/20, 4:51 PM
Wow!
Down The Foxhole
4/19/20, 3:38 PM
THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT I HAVE BEEN CRAVING FOR. IT HAS EVERYTHING. THE SHADY BUT VERY WELL THOUGHT OUT AND PROTECTIVE TO THEIR WORKERS MIND CONTROL APP COMPANY. A CUTE SUBJECT. A RELATABLE PROTAG THAT DOESN'T WANT TO HURT ANYBODY OR FUCK ANYBODY'S LIFE UP. SHITTTT. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!!
4/19/20, 3:06 PM
I absolutely love the idea you've created here, it's such a cool piece of worldbuilding and makes me wish I knew more about the society and how coercive the tech actually is. Thanks for writing it.