Recent Comments

2/9/26, 3:56 PM
Very nice idea!
1/27/26, 2:55 PM
Update for those who may be interested in more chapters! I have not given up on this project of mine, I’ve just had some life stuff in the way plus my laptop stopped working and I much prefer to be able to sit down at my desk and write on my laptop. So yes, currently I don’t have a proper way to sit down and write more chapters. BUT MORE CHAPTERS ARE COMING!!! Maybe not soon, but eventually, I’m not gonna let this one go unfinished like a lot of these unfinished stories on here. I will also be working on improving my writing skills in the meantime. I do apologize that it may take more time than any of us would like it to, trust me. But I’m gonna see this one through to the end. ♠️

2/9/26, 3:15 PM
@[♠️TheWorldOfBNWO♠️](/user/show/697694) Love you!
2/9/26, 2:30 PM
What are you enjoying about the story the most? Let me know in the comments!
Anonymous
2/8/26, 11:28 AM
Ok fine I like Chris! Chapter did a very good job of hunanising them both. Their strengths and flaws on display. An oversight to send him into a sex shop on his own maybe, but also a valid way of letting a sub have agency so I adored it. My assumption was a pup mask etc to be able to hide. On that note chapter hit a little too close to home haha. The feelings of being boring/not submissive enough. I'd argue perhaps one of the more important chapters so far.

2/9/26, 12:14 PM
@Anonymous Yay! Glad Chris managed to win you over! Chris definitely realised afterwards that the task was a step in the wrong direction, at least for now. As cocky and self-assured as he is, he’s just a guy at the end of the day. And yeah, I wanted to strike a different tone with this chapter after the more lighthearted one prior. I hope folks can still enjoy it either way. As always, thanks so much for the feedback!
2/8/26, 1:20 PM
Absolutely beautiful chapter!

2/9/26, 12:10 PM
@[Cockaddickeddan](/user/show/995647) Thanks so much! Xxx
2/9/26, 6:50 AM
This story is amazing, damn having a hive mind and the slime controlling those bodies are really turning my libido on!
Anonymous
2/9/26, 4:47 AM
Great chapter
2/9/26, 2:26 AM
FINALLY! The protagonist gets smarter - and is way sexy because of/in spite of it. Wonderful story, bruh!!
Feb 6, 2026
2/9/26, 12:22 AM
This was a really fun and cute story, I liked it a lot! Agreed with the other commenter, I like the play of the "carelessly worded wish" and how it often backfires, but I guess here puny-dick got exactly what he was looking for. Good job!
John
2/8/26, 10:01 PM
Your stories are WAY too Hetero-Coded. What ever happened to just two MEN fucking? You know, GAY sex? Heck, it’s even in the name of this site…