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swngbthways
7/8/20, 2:28 PM
I've told you this before and I'm letting you know again. You have this uncanny knack of infusing HUMANITY in your characters that it doesn't take long for me to get reeled into their world. I LOVE THAT first and foremost. I also love that, even though it is on this site, sex is ONLY a part of your characters' lives. This is my ALL TIME favorite story of yours to date. I DO hope to follow Nate and Dave beyond high school. Moreso, whatever you decide, I would LOVE to read their happy ending (pun both intended and not intended ;) ).
7/8/20, 1:01 PM
i love this story! love how you're slowly hypnotizing him both to be confident and to be aroused all the time! The chalkboard hypnosis is amazing! Can't wait for the next part!
7/8/20, 12:08 PM
his story is so fucking hot.
Anonymous
7/8/20, 11:42 AM
Sexy. I want to be one of those guys and supply my cum
Anonymous
7/8/20, 11:33 AM
Hopefully this continues. So sexy and hot. Maybe Officer Madison goes home to his four boys and turns them
Pup Boner
7/8/20, 11:01 AM
I was hanging on every word and my throbbing explosive cock was too. Thank you
Anonymous
7/8/20, 11:00 AM
Amazing story! PS. are the Collelo twins a tribute to Oliverclaudiusdarcy? He wrote some amazing stories :)
7/8/20, 9:55 AM
I can credit you by putting your name on the title or at the start of the story if you wish.
7/8/20, 7:58 AM
You have some very hot ideas, but you not taking anything out to fruition. Why set the stage only to draw the curtain closed before you've even gotten to the middle, let alone the end. Great ideas and beginnings with your way. We hunger for more development of the characters and frankly- where's the sex? Where's the sweat and hunger, the transformation and the acceptance of the new reality? Keep going. And Love a big man with a cigar, so you already got my attention!!
7/8/20, 6:36 AM
I loved the son-switch and the new brothers relationship too. Can't wait to see Todd and Kyle performing more incest fun. I do agree with Hypnothrill, though. I think the new father-son relationship needs a a bigger impact to see that there's an actual change in the dynamic. It would be so hot if the sons just forgets their father in the next chapter, maybe really take advantage of them as slaves and treat them as lower beings? That would be hot. I also can't wait for the baseball team to join the fun as well. I hope the wait isn't gonna be too long. Please update soon! Really great job on this update, it was a pleasant surprise and I enjoyed every raunchy moment in this chapter, especially the armpits stuff. You did a wonderful job, PupScout!