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rbbrboy
7/7/20, 11:10 PM
Hi. I recognised the title and looked and it seemed very familiar. I wrote this back in 2005 when I should've been working at a job I was progressively loathing day by day. It was originally posted on Rubberzone and then again in Instigator magazine. It was something like 15 years ago, as the line 'I bet that you’d look good as a cock whore' was a nod to the then-recently released Arctic Monkeys' I Bet You Look Good On The Dancefloor. I'm an old man now, and so I'm sufficiently flattered to think you thought it was good enough to re-post, and admire that you don't claim credit for it. As is the nature of the modern internet way, things get re-shared and re-used (and it crops up on the rbbrpigmen tumblr, then I've 'reclaimed' it) but if it gives people pleasure, entertainment and ultimately a hard-on, then all cool. X
7/7/20, 10:21 PM
Very nice; has the air of Dracula in the way the missionary gives into the Master. Very good job.
7/7/20, 9:47 PM
What a really great story :D
7/7/20, 8:58 PM
This goes into things I taught in a class a few years ago, so rather than place the explanation here (and to be respectful to Martin who has come to my defense) I'm going to put my explanation of things on the forum in the Supernatural discussion. Please take a look over there (https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/story-challenge-2-supernatural-discussion/1590/16).
7/7/20, 8:58 PM
@Ken, I'm not sure if you're familiar with Nacho's work but he usually ends an installment in "arcs." So while this particular chapter in their lives will end on ch 10, it doesn't mean that their stories are over. At least this was the case in Pine's story. I'm hoping I'm correct in thinking that there will be more after the next chapter. There's still so much potential between Nate and Dave. I wanna see their lives after high school, I wanna see them get married and adopt babies and raise a family together, theres so many possibilities!
Ken
7/7/20, 8:41 PM
WHY does it have to end??? You could continue on for at least another 10, and even more...it IS high school after all....lol BUT, if this ends so quickly, I hope you have some new stuff in the works. LOVE your stories and ideas. They are AMAZING.
Anonymous
7/7/20, 8:40 PM
i loved the son-switch. i think its really hot how master mike makes clear that he's taking away his son as his will... and it was even hotter cause i was also hoping that Todd has a brother and so he did! Please continue this story!
Eclipse
7/7/20, 6:39 PM
Thank you for reading and for the kind words! Hypnothrill, my goal was to joke about them a bit, since each story seems to have them, but we love them for it ^_^
7/7/20, 6:20 PM
Lol that's awesome, what I would give to see those two muscle beasts parading around like that :) I hadn't thought of it but I do suppose coordinating outrageous outfits like that between them would take a lot of grooming. I always imagined a huge hairless muscle beast in a singlet to be the opposite, only decision maybe is what color singlet and boots to wear for the day, no hair to groom no worries about the musk. Check out my story MSCL on here if you havent, has plenty of muscle growth, spandex, and big hairless beasts :)
7/7/20, 4:53 PM
Yeah, this series makes me want to have a sweet, buff puppy jock boyfriend lol. I'm glad Nate finally said the L word and realized how great what he had was. And im also glad that he finally realized the efforts that Dave has been putting in for his approval. I still dont know whats gonna happen with their lives after college. Whether they remain together, or go their separate ways, I'm hoping they at least have a great high school year. And who knows, maybe Nate and Dave can find each other when their older and starting their own careers.