Recent Comments

Martin
9/20/20, 11:32 AM
Thank you for submitting your first story on GSS! I approved this story, but I'd still ask you to add more paragraphs. To separate two paragraphs, please make sure that you'll enter one empty line between then, otherwise they will not be recognized as separate paragraphs! Martin
9/20/20, 8:36 AM
This is getting better and better. I love the conflict and struggle between him being an alpha before and a beta now. Please make Bob involved all the time with his sons? Make him the beta of the family, a family slave. Please?
Lakritz24
9/20/20, 8:29 AM
Sehr interessant, ein stückweit wie Dath Wader. But it think it s not the Nicotin, but green leaf s and the Kohlenmonoxid. So its very important not to smoke via Fire with "Glut". J.J.Z.
9/20/20, 8:10 AM
The contradiction and struggle within Bob is amazingly portray. Bob wants it and yet, he knew it is wrong..... The flesh wins at the end of the day..... I am looking forward to the next chapter if Dan can push Bob over slowly but steadily....
EJG
9/20/20, 7:17 AM
Thanks. Right up my street 1 Gang-bang 2. unaware. 3.office 4. central character the submissive. Most of my boxex ticked
9/20/20, 5:37 AM
I don't know why I feel extremely hilarious 🤣 Comedy -porn? That must be the most talented invention. Your work is marvelous!
9/20/20, 3:20 AM
The sexual tension was so hot and intense that I didn't want it to end. Can't wait for more!
9/20/20, 3:04 AM
Nice, keep the feet, love it <3
9/20/20, 2:16 AM
Wow, this was really hot! I loved how you wrote Jim's obliviousness! Stories like this where there the target is completely oblivious to the mind control are so good when they're written this well!
9/20/20, 1:58 AM
I'd be lying if I said I didn't cry multiple times. I sincerely hope you continue this story, I think a lot of people need to read it. There is a lot of love in your heart for you to be able to write this. Thank you so much for sharing this. At first I thought it was insane how you pumped out so many chapters and it was a little intimidating, but once I started reading, it was hard to stop. Honestly, I think we all wish we could be whisked away by an angel to a place filled with as much love as Avalon. I cannot wait until your next story, whether it's another chapter of this amazing series, or a completely new story, I know it will be amazing and full of love!