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Jan 25, 2021
1/25/21, 5:48 PM
Well, well done for a first or even 20th attempt. I would like to see a sequel. Maybe Sven popping up in his mind. It would be a shame if someone who loved was deleted rather than integrating as well.
starvagon
1/25/21, 5:46 PM
Hot story! Can't wait for the next chapter.
1/25/21, 5:34 PM
i thought about a Fat Tony cameo -- as well as a cameo of one of the chap 2 coaches -- but I couldn't make it work. Let's just suppose they were victims of the Supply War ...
1/25/21, 5:16 PM
Yes. At first he was going to be a security guard to the scientist, but I've changed him to a private detective for the SAS church.
1/25/21, 4:42 PM
Please continue if ever, i like it with unaware teacher
1/25/21, 4:37 PM
will we see more of this?
1/25/21, 4:27 PM
is the detective the guard?
1/25/21, 3:52 PM
Wow. Amazing. Glad you stretched out #4 to 10K. Making Johnny J a priest of muscle was great. I kind of expected to see Fat Tony make an appearance but maybe he is still making sure Timmy Thompson doesn't say a word. I did not expect Superion's orgasm to summon Rex and open a portal. Talk about it feeling out of this world. I know Superion was elated to have his husband back but did the thought go through his head that if he had not denied himself for twenty years could he have brought him home sooner? Maybe it took the fight with Glen and bring Glenn off his high. Thanks for bringing it full circle. Happy ending for all.
Daniel
1/25/21, 3:51 PM
seriously wild, corruptive, well written narrative- bringing in the dude at the end was a nice touch I.J.S.