Recent Comments

Daniel
10/24/21, 12:07 PM
Dude ! that was excellent, as they say "the devil is in the details". I am a fan of the struggle leading to corruption, by making Greg gay you took away some of that struggle. keeping him closeted might prove interesting. the rohypnol, spiral induction was hot, looking forward to more cops going under. thanks man...I.J.S.
10/24/21, 11:46 AM
Thanks for the feedback both of you! I know pacing keeps being one of my struggling points. I'm curious to see what you'll think of the next chapters! :)
Daniel
10/24/21, 11:09 AM
once again I agree with Hypnothrill. taking more time to transist, struggling before conversion would be hot dude. nice beginning though. I.J.S.
10/24/21, 10:08 AM
That was hot! I would love to see this become a series how Chuck becomes Rob's boyfriend and how they manage with him being an xcon trying to live a normal life. I can see a complication with his son and the uncomfortable situation of your best friend and your dad being lovers. The story has potential to be interesting, sexy, romantic and heartwarming.
The_Supernatural_D
10/24/21, 9:51 AM
Always love a good corruption story. This one feels like it'll have a slow-burn going, which is a nice bonus.
abc123
10/24/21, 8:17 AM
Robin, Please come back ;-;

10/24/21, 8:41 AM
@abc123 I'm not gone, just been having some health problems lately that've really interfered with my desire to write. There's a new chapter of Web of Trust with the proofreaders now, and I'm hoping to have a couple more things up in the near future, but we'll have to see if my body cooperates.
10/24/21, 7:59 AM
Great story so far, and I think that the transformations are really hot! The pace is maybe a little too fast for my taste; for me, Scott's transformation would be even hotter if it were more gradual.
Anonymous
10/24/21, 6:51 AM
hot. I like how this one wasn't about cyber roleplay. it's hard finding a good story with a hot stud who gets taken down by a younger/smaller guy. really hope there's another part where he gets slowly turned into a bitch in heat who needs dick. would be hot for the whole bar to 'Master Mark' in his new role as a slutty pussy sub. have him totally humiliated but also completely turned on by the change in his role.
10/10/20, 9:36 AM
I have not started chapter 3 yet might finish it over the weekend. been very busy nursing. I think after chapter 3 ill explore other scenarios for a couple stories then come back to this series. also who would you like to see hypnotized next? collins boyfriend or Darren or the group of new guys ?

10/24/21, 3:59 AM
@Anyonka would you be okay with someone else working on your story or course with your permission?
Anonymous
10/24/21, 3:10 AM
I'm still hard!!!