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12/15/25, 10:45 PM
WHOA... this was fantastic reading. THANK YOU
12/7/25, 3:33 PM
I really like how you describe how is living with RSD. I'm enjoying this series so much! I hope to see more transformations. Looking forward to see what's coming in next chapter.

12/15/25, 7:48 PM
@[LTTL](/user/show/911183) Thanks! Always glad to hear! So, admittedly, I didn't intend to do many more transformations going forward. When I started this, I wanted to focus on the fallout of a transformation. Then I had some ideas for TFs down the line. But... well, I'll admit, this comment did make me feel a little pressured to include more. So I reworked my plans to include one more, which ended up rejigging a lot of stuff and deciding on what the ending will be like! I think I've made it work well enough, though I worry it overcomplicates things. To be clear, this is not me shaming you for expressing your hope! I just worry as a baseline state of being! LMAO So, I hope you enjoy the TF when it happens. I will footnote it and identify it as the one I put in for you when it happens. :P Next chapter... well... there's a snippet on my BlueSky [here](https://bsky.app/profile/did:plc:63757uh5jlrh3x2h7uoa2wiy/post/3m7w7w4hcp22o) if you're interested. This is not Chapter Five, but the first of some third-person interludes integrated into the main narrative called _Outside Ollie_. This particular one is a three-parter focused on Homecoming. I can confirm that there's mention of a Bahraini bodybuilder getting a blowjob. Anson has a big solo role which I'm mostly keeping under wraps. Though he does muse on the fact Leonard and Gabriel never adopted another kid and confirms they are registered foster parents. If this sequence doesn't show up in this next installment, it'll be in the second part for sure. Ollie also goes over to Drake's house and gets to see the model railway layout he and his dad built in their basement. Mo and Josh end up in a strange bedfellows situation when they have to help their mothers cater a Muslim post-funeral luncheon.
Anonymous
12/10/25, 12:31 AM
This has been one of my favourite reads on here. I’m very excited to see more! I really like your writing style and the complexity of emotions that he’s feeling, it’s honestly been eye opening and thank you for your candour around RSD struggles it gave me things to reflect on personally. The last few chapters truly had my heart strings in a knot was teary eyed for most of them, the end here has been a nice diversion from that. I’m very excited to see how you develop the story following this especially with the stalker and anonymous man being brought into the foreground a little more!

12/15/25, 7:35 PM
@Anonymous One of your favorites? Aaaahhh, come off anon so I can thank you properly! What a feather in my cap. :) I appreciate that my story has helped you personally, especially as RSD is such a pain to deal with. I had someone I considered a friend get really rude about things related to this story the other day, so I said I'd stop mentioning it. And he said, "Thank goodness, I was afraid I'd have to hear about your story again." Which, man, that hurt... I knew it was his problem; no fault of mine. But my brain still said, "Maybe you should take a break from your creative projects for a while. It'd probably be better." Thankfully, I was able to identify this as nonsense from the jump. Anyway... The stalker plot is... admittedly not going to be some big thing. That's solved very early next chapter. Though it's not who you might expect! And I figured out the Anonymous Man's whole deal recently while chatting with a close friend. I knew he was important, I knew I wanted him in, but couldn't quite piece it together. I'd gone over a few different notions since introducing him. I'll go over those in a footnote when the reveal happens... provided I remember to! Hahah. :P
Anonymous
12/10/25, 4:06 AM
This was such an amazing chapter and I loved reading it. You wove the main plots all happening at once together so well!

12/15/25, 7:27 PM
@Anonymous That's so kind of you to say! People who've edited stuff I wrote under my real name have noted that my knack for that. So it's nice to hear it here, too. LOL
12/15/25, 7:15 PM
I am always excited to see a new chapter! Can’t wait to see how the story will evolve.

12/15/25, 7:26 PM
@[Dregen](/user/show/1065159) Thank you! I have plenty of twists, turns, and upsets planned, believe you me! Hoping to have the next part posted quicker.
12/7/25, 10:20 AM
I am loving this and holding my breath for the next instalment.

12/15/25, 7:25 PM
@[BeastOz](/user/show/918544) Well, don't pass out. Would hate to lose you! Next installment is proceeding apace, I can assure you. Always nice to see you in the comments! (I tried to reply to this earlier, but for some reason it logged me out and posted the comment anonymously! Strange.)
12/15/25, 7:59 AM
Haha it's a pretty unique idea! I enjoyed it! Hope to see more stuff 😉

12/15/25, 4:44 PM
@[Whisperlouder](/user/show/2186797) Glad you enjoyed it. Working on more chapters right now.
12/15/25, 2:34 PM
That hit really hard I feel so bad for Elijah I hope he gets a happy ending :(
Dec 15, 2025
12/15/25, 2:31 PM
interesting concept. i enjoyed the story so far love to see some brawny paladins fall and become corrupt with pleasure in the future.
Dec 15, 2025
Anonymous
12/15/25, 1:56 PM
Wildly hot story, great work! Can’t wait for the next chapter to see what happens when they go meet Vinnie.