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Simon
11/10/21, 11:41 AM
Brilliant writing and terrific plot! Wouldn't it be great if this could happen for real? I'd love to meet Chaz and Nick and succumb to their brainwashing. More please!
Cutiepie183
11/10/21, 10:58 AM
another great chapter to a super hot story!! Wow can't wait to see what happens next...
Anonymous
11/10/21, 10:30 AM
This was amazing!
11/10/21, 10:02 AM
One of my favourite stories that I keep 'coming' back to. I love the fact the reader figures out the character is trapped in a spider's web before the character does (or doesn't in the case of Travis). I also like the fact that any female characters are written out before they even appear. Please keep writing!
11/10/21, 6:50 AM
Great chapter! I admit this is not my favorite story of yours (I think the complete lack of resistance and not much time being spent in the main characters' heads are reasons why), but a Hypnothrill tale is ALWAYS hot stuff. Write what YOU want, and the rest will follow! :)

11/10/21, 9:59 AM
@Feed Your Head Interesting point about the lack of resistance. I think that's not entirely true, because Eduardo is certainly putting up a LOT of resistance, but Juan and Andrew (the two gay boys) were certainly easy to turn, and even Daniel didn't put up that much resistance; he was just slower to change because he was initially straight. I'm still using a lot of free indirect discourse to get into the characters' heads (as I usually do when writing 3rd person stories), but I think the difference here might be that I'm not just limiting the perspective to a single focalizing character (as I normally would). Again, this is partly because of the photos I was working with, but I wanted to include some scenes in which Daniel wasn't present, and for that I needed to dip into Juan, Andrew, and Eduardo's heads as well. In the last part, I spend a bit more time in the Manager's head, which is unusual for me, in that I normally don't flesh out my mind controllers this much or give them specific motivations.
11/10/21, 9:58 AM
I want a winter holiday and spring break, halloween. 😂😂
11/10/21, 9:44 AM
I love how *wholesome* this chapter is in the middle. The Dad being made to turn his life around. And then the massage table, the bottom half dropping away, mirroring the flow of the story... I don't want this story to end for a long time.
Jul 28, 2020
11/10/21, 6:26 AM
Amazing! Your sex scenes are so well written. "There’s no resistance, you crave me penetrating you ... but your moans are proof that you’re a total hole-slut." Splooge man! Seriously, glad I stumbled on this story, merci man.

Martin
11/10/21, 9:14 AM
Thank you so much @Kypup! It was a pleasure to write, I had put myself into some kind of sexual haze back then and wrote most of this in a matter of an hour or two.
Titan
11/10/21, 8:18 AM
This was so good. It is of course right up my alley. The barber, Brody was like one of my ideal characters, and the age progression just right. Love the romantic tone to the whole thing, I wish I could do that in my stories. Bravo.
11/10/21, 7:52 AM
One of my fav kinky changes is a Mr Hyde like transformation sequence, so that's just wonderful! The humour remains, the image of a sexy invisible man and wolf man is also great and I can't wait to see how the creature from the black lagoon can get his rocks off XDXD This is probably my favourite one yet thanks to the slightly more outlandish transformations!