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1/5/22, 1:19 PM
This is
1/5/22, 12:28 PM
Also confused by who was who. ". In fact Howard looked so hot that Bruce could see Howard tenting in his pants." If Howard was hot, wouldn't Bruce be tenting?
1/5/22, 8:28 AM
Dang, Jack... SO good!

1/5/22, 9:06 AM
@stimle thanks bud, means a lot coming from you
1/5/22, 8:18 AM
God this was so beyond hot, I could read about heros cleaning uncut cocks all day, probably the only baths those goblins get 🤤🤤🤤
1/5/22, 7:04 AM
Holy crap, I came so hard to this story. I'm usually not into the age progression beyond 60, but hot damn you could sell this scenario to me in a heartbeat—bravo and thank you!
1/3/22, 4:58 PM
one of favs being retold ! can't wait for more chapters

1/5/22, 6:05 AM
@eastbay thanks man!
Anonymous
1/5/22, 5:15 AM
GREAT
1/5/22, 4:16 AM
This is awesome MORE!
Anonymous
1/5/22, 3:41 AM
Would Sergeant Taylor get aware of Troy’s transformation?? Can’t wait to see where the story go!! Very nice story so far. Thank you so much!!
1/5/22, 3:37 AM
In my opinion, the entire story should be first person, or 3rd person. Or at least the first person narrator should have whole sections that are visually delineated from the 3rd person sections. Being primarily third person but occasionally shifting to a first person narrator for single lines embedded within the 3rd person text is not an effective use of first person.