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7/21/22, 9:47 AM
Let me say it this way: In twelve hours I have to submit an important assignment for law school, but when I saw you posted the final part I knew I have to read it first. As I suspected it was worth every second. The mid part cliff hanger was great, I could feel the distress of the boys and was wondering myself would can they possibly do. I very much like that you took a small detail form the previous chapter and used it as a clever Chekov's gun. The happy ending was just what I wanted and I'm super glad it ended this way! As for future stories, I think I would really like to read about Ted and how he got his company back. There aren't many stories of payback after mind-fuckery and this is a great premise for both erotica and plot. So I implore you to write about him. I am way too curious to know how this one last plot line ends. Maybe Ted will contact the muscle milk company again? We don't know much about them but I really would like to know more, especially since their slogan is "be the bull" which maybe implies that their protein shakes do the opposite effect. Whatever you chose to write about next, I can't wait to read your next story!

7/21/22, 11:24 PM
@Reader well i hope you still got your assignment submitted on time! I've been "told off" before for leaving my chapters on cliffhangers that leave the main characters in their darkest hour, and i've recieved alot of good feedback that I decided to combine the 2 parts into 1 chapter so no-one is left waiting for the resolution for a week. With Ted, I could see him being sceptical about special weed and antidote poppers and just think he got too high and drunk at the party. Maybe Paul could issue him something like "the 12 labours of hercules" where if he wants his shares back he has to do what he says. Maybe Paul took some of the Q weed spliffs with him...
7/21/22, 4:51 PM
This is the ending we all asked for. The villain gets punished, the good guys win, and there’s an orgy. Actually, several orgies. So it’s all good. Right? Right…? :frowning:

7/21/22, 11:14 PM
@Exh8bslut and they all lived happily ever after :)
7/21/22, 11:07 PM
Solid start!!! Can’t wait to see where it goes!!
Lusty Stallion
7/21/22, 10:45 PM
Thanks @DuskSkullKing for another great story. I enjoyed the flow of and movement and didn't see the app backfiring as Arthur discovered it
Anonymous
7/21/22, 8:04 PM
Great story!
7/21/22, 7:56 PM
Hot!!
7/21/22, 7:01 PM
Well I discussed this story with my now ex boyfriend 😒, ANYWAY 😅 he helped me figure out how to make a part 2 to this story. It’s currently up on my Patreon and will be made available to all tiers on July 22, 2022
7/21/22, 6:26 PM
Very Hot. Still feels close to the original I read when New Guy in Town proposed his take but improved in many ways.

7/21/22, 6:44 PM
@BobbyBlobfish Thanks! I’m glad that’s what the general consensus seems to be as that was what I was aiming for.
7/21/22, 6:43 PM
So this was really hot, till the switch happened,why must there always be switches. Sigh. But yeah him turning his straight roomste into a subby good boy was getting really hot.
7/21/22, 6:29 PM
AMAZING! The onomatopoeia of the clothing was a particularly fantastic touch. There aren’t nearly enough preppification stories on here! You paint such a gorgeous picture of the visuals—the final image of Cole’s spiraling eyes in the mirror was incredibly hot. But what impressed, terrified, and turned me on the most was how *eager* Cole was to be converted. Seeing him go from absolutely against the idea to absolutely enthralled at being enslaved is a genius touch. Phenomenal work! :)

7/21/22, 6:38 PM
@Feed Your Head Thank you! I’m excited to rework the rest of the conversions from the original like some of the football players (the juxtaposition of some hunky football stud wearing the uniform is going to be pretty damn hot). I’m glad you enjoyed the eye spirals - I plan to have the character’s eyes start spiraling whenever the Spiral talks to them in their head.