Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/29/25, 10:50 PM
I hate to say and I mean no hate but this ending is so meh. The story didn’t build to this at all, there’s no payoff of the character arc and it feels like a rushed walk back to something much less interesting. Why even get kinky in the first place if you’re gonna abandon it last minute and become a generic romance ending without any consequences for the main character to face for basically brainwashing someone?
8/29/25, 9:33 PM
I loved this chapter. Your writing made it easy for me to see it all like a movie. A very HOT unpredictable movie.
Anonymous
8/29/25, 3:14 PM
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hauntedestheart
8/29/25, 6:03 PM
@Anonymous Sorry that you didn't like it but this is not a "self-hating heterosexual fantasy," I think the concept just went over your head (as did the direct warning at the start of the story). If you really feel that strongly about this story being removed, come off anon and request formally, but it's not gonna happen because this story is just one entry in a gay series that explores many ideas. Just keep scrolling if it bothers you that much.
Trimas
8/28/25, 1:35 PM
peak- whens the next chapter dropping?

8/29/25, 4:19 PM
@Trimas this saturday i think!
Tanner
8/29/25, 3:51 PM
This story just keeps getting better and better
8/29/25, 3:38 PM
I just found this little short story, and now I just wish you'd continue it! It's wonderful!
Anonymous
8/29/25, 3:17 PM
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7/31/24, 7:46 PM
This is another great tale of Paladin and Witch universe, but I've got to ask, is this universe from a book somewhere or did you create it? Or did someone else? I read your other story about the brewer. That was my first introduction to this world and I am loving it. I, too, was looking forward to Bradley's bend and creaming, but it was really hot nonetheless. This is definitely on my favorites list!

Anonymous
7/31/24, 7:57 PM
@[Grathocke](/user/show/10008532) Heya, thanks! The universe is from my first book, Paladin and the Witch: The Father's Path, which I published on Amazon last month. I posted the prequel story about the brewer to promote the publication. I'm not working on Book 2 and another free prequel story. And I feel ya about Bradley, but some good things take more time ;)

rayn
8/1/24, 9:51 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) I hope you meant "now working on Book 2..." instead of 'not'.

Anonymous
8/1/24, 12:02 PM
@rayn - yeah, lol, typo there. I'm definitely working on it. Had the most intense dream about it, too - helped me resolve a plot point. Always follow your dick!

8/1/24, 1:57 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) You P.G. Woodhoused! https://allpoetry.com/Printer%27s-Error-

8/1/24, 11:59 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Thanks. I've just gone and bought it. It looks like it will be a quick read, and thanks for the info on beautiful butt Bradley. I look forward to his deflowerment. :disguised_face:

Shades
8/29/25, 2:31 PM
@[Grathocke](/user/show/10008532) I have to agree with you 100%. This is my favorite writer. He has a couple of other stories I love better. My absolute favorite is, "Two Broke Arms". It was on that Amazon Kindle program that Amazon killed before I could finish. No good Bastards! lol. I'm hoping the author will repost and I can read the entire story.
8/29/25, 2:29 PM
Wonderful story! I love to see when a family gets together. :heart: Does Phil have sons of his own? Does John have any friends that need fixing or bullies to make friends with (maybe fix their family issues)? I love this series. Can’t wait for more. :smiling_imp:
8/29/25, 2:22 PM
The perfect story for a jerkoff