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3/3/26, 1:40 PM
i love the hypnotic instruction during each part of the changes. Well written. THANK YOU
3/3/26, 1:12 PM
Omg this is totally up my alley! Can't wait to read what's coming next.
3/3/26, 12:59 PM
Awesome, please continue the story
3/2/26, 8:04 PM
Wow, ehrlich. Du bist echt weit gekommen, mit Abstand Deine beste Story. Fängt so harmlos und fast brav an und wird dann richtig krass.... Und auch Dein Schreibstil ist richtig gut geworden! Ich freu mich auf die weiteren Kapitel!

3/3/26, 10:42 AM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Danke für den motivierenden Kommentar. Das mein Schreibstil seit der ersten Geschichte einige Fortschritte ist mir beim erneuten Lesen er alten Sachen auch ins Auge gefallen. Ich werde daher alle Texte nach und nach "überarbeiten". Die erste Serie "Aus den Fantasien eines Sklaven" ist mit seinen 9 Teilen bereits "aufpoliert" worden. [Aus den Fantasien eines Sklaven - alle überarbeiteten Teile](http://www.gaykinkystories.com/series/show/10001809)
3/3/26, 9:32 AM
Hot start 🔥 Welcome back 😄
2/27/26, 1:37 PM
I liked it! It's a pity, though, that little time was given to the characters.

2/27/26, 2:22 PM
@[Ed79](/user/show/10061131) Thank you, I am glad you liked it. The amount of time given to characters is intentional for two reasons. Primarily because I wanted to fit in a number of scenarios and giving each character a back story or development would make a short story into a novel. And secondly - these are hotel guests whose presence is fleeting - I feel their characters are mostly irrelevant! But I appreciate the feedback and perhaps some extra details would add more to the story next time.

2/27/26, 2:50 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) You're good at creating fascinating stories. Reading your stories, I get attached to the characters and want to learn about their further actions and interactions with each other. I especially liked your work on demons - I often reread this work.

2/27/26, 5:44 PM
@[Ed79](/user/show/10061131) Thank you! I really, REALLY enjoyed writing the Demon story! I am so pleased to hear that my stories draw you in :D My writing style I think tends towards lots of different scenarios in different places and like that I never get much chance to explore characters in any depths. I always tend to shy away from stories with fewer characters where we follow them and their personal connections - but maybe this is something I should ecplore and see if I am any good at it! I do have a potential future story where it would just be max 8 people trapped on an island so that might work. Again - I really appreciate the kind words and feedback.

3/2/26, 8:07 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) Perhaps it's fine for the guests, to have a short montage sequence. But the Attwood family, the additional staff they hire, etc. could be your main through line of the story. Dan never shows up again, Luke only gets mentioned, and Mikey has like two lines. It felt weird to just drop the Attwood family halfway through the story. Also, and it not a big deal since Dan is a fairly common name. But it was slightly jarring to suddenly be reading about a second, unrelated Dan, to the Dan that we spent the first half of the story reading about.

3/2/26, 8:43 PM
@[Anon-756](/user/show/950122) Well...this story was never about the Attwoods. They are merely the device used to introduce the scenario. The story is about the goings on at a cursed hotel. Once the Attwoods have blown their loads, their usefulness is finished from a writing perspective. From an in world perspective, the guests would have little interaction with the staff so in their stories....they wouldn't appear. Also...who says there are any other staff 😅 I do accept the Dan criticism however, that was a big mistake on my part! Pure careless error and not checking my notes properly!

3/2/26, 11:40 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) It wasn't necessarily a criticism. Just a way you could have had it your way, with the multiple stories from the guests, and given more time to some characters as @ed79 suggested. I used the Attwoods just because I would imagine that they would have stuck around to run their business.

3/3/26, 8:00 AM
@[Anon-756](/user/show/950122) No honestly I really appreciate the feedback. It is good to know what would have made this a better story and I will certainly bear it in mind for future stories, I thank you! :D
3/3/26, 7:03 AM
Will Anthony be the one that finaly pop Lukes boypussy cheery ass
2/26/26, 6:26 PM
I liked this one.

3/3/26, 6:03 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Thanks man. High praise 😁
3/3/26, 5:33 AM
This has been incredible.
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3/1/26, 3:51 AM
Hey, this is awesome! Definitely going to keep an eye on this~

3/3/26, 5:22 AM
@TotalTwink Thank you!!