Recent Comments

1/12/23, 6:11 AM
Wow, absolutely wow. A magnificent sequel and up to what I expected. The second encounter has always been my favorite and I can say that you have kept me interested all the time while reading. I loved the way you've followed the script of what happens in the second encounter, but you've given it your own way. I make a special mention of Kaa's song, it's very original that Kaa doesn't sing exactly the same song as in the movie. Very good. I really like the fact that if Mowgli and Kaa reach orgasm make Kaa's spell eternal by putting Mowgli into an eternal trance. In addition, I also liked how Mowgli keeps his eyes open for most of the encounter to look at Kaa's eyes while following the colors. This chapter is an exquisite read.
1/12/23, 6:01 AM
Wow, I love your story. Writing in second person is quite complicated but you have done it very well and the reading is very interesting. I love your way of writing, it has a lot of potential.
Rodrigues
1/12/23, 6:01 AM
please continue with this story but making it more erotic 🔥
Anonymous
1/12/23, 3:52 AM
Read this years ago and it's still one of my all-time favorites! Would love to see more of your work.
1/11/23, 10:59 PM
I wish this story wouldn't end. lol

1/12/23, 2:09 AM
@[Kerrija](/user/show/912452) Unfortunately it will end. I am also likely to write other stories.
1/12/23, 2:07 AM
Such an interesting and sexy method of induction! Never thought of this but I’m now obsessed!! Can’t wait to keep reading!
Anonymous
1/12/23, 12:21 AM
Great finale - any chance of an epilogue?
1/11/23, 10:05 PM
I’ve been enjoying this series a lot lately. Good job!

1/12/23, 12:19 AM
@[Terinas Tiger](/user/show/77652) Thank you! I hope to drop another chapter this weekend. 😊
Connor
1/12/23, 12:10 AM
Thanks Martin! I'm new here & you just popped my "Comments" cherry - lol more stories cuming - 7 are being approved...
1/11/23, 11:14 PM
What a cliffhanger! If you don't want to write the sequel, can you then tell us what you had planned? I'll admit I was more interested in Alonzo's story than the twins', but I want to know what's happening in this house. Also, what happens to the men who don't make Bottom come, do they just leave with no memories of this place? What about the two guys fucking Alonzo, are they going to change too, or just keep Alonzo for them? Who knows!