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Apr 11, 2021
Anonymous
12/17/25, 9:49 AM
Still waiting this saga
12/17/25, 7:50 AM
I have to ask. In this world what is the true benefit of being a sub? Are they permanently subs or will they work their way up to being a norm again. I fail to see why anyone would choose to be a sub and be used by others without a massive payout at some point. What is the advantage for companies to hire subs? I understand they are a source of stress relief for staff/execs at Silver level but what happens at Gold level? There has to be some benefit for the sub for this to work. I have a vague understanding of Dom/Sub interactions but the legal and economic issues of this world are not clear. I understand some people are drawn to being Doms and Subs here on Earth but in this world/company it is a business opportunity so I assume there is some corporate advancement from being a sub? This world does not make sense to me. Why would Steve bear so much abuse? Is it just to help Mark rise through the ranks? What does Steve ultimately get in this situation? I read all 17 parts and I'm still confused. It was an enthralling well written story but I still have questions.
MusclesWizard
12/17/25, 7:31 AM
God I wish I was a good boy! Love this story.
12/17/25, 4:39 AM
Such a great series. Really enjoyed this from start to finish. I think you did a great job of keeping things fresh and exciting as it went along, and I enjoyed how you brought it together in the end. Super hot, so many sexy scenes that each part had me edging throughout.
12/17/25, 3:29 AM
This was a hot series to follow. I'd love to learn more about how things go once he "graduates" from the supplements, but I think the ending works well. Nothing overstayed its welcome.
Anonymous
12/16/25, 7:05 PM
What I fantastic second chapter, I already loved the first one. Is a third chapter in the works? I thought the ending was extremely teasing xD

12/17/25, 1:17 AM
@Anonymous I like a good cliffhanger šŸ˜‰
12/16/25, 11:58 PM
I like it, but it feels like a big change from chapter 1, like it should have been another story? The first chapter was pretty much just hypnosis and now it's gone with what seem to be magical transformations? I just feel like these are good chapters but of two different stories now. I'm a bit sad if the commission led to that.

12/17/25, 1:15 AM
@[edhypnofan](/user/show/10002490) Hey! Thanks so much for reading. I apologize if it's a bit jarring, I tried to leave a couple of breadcrumbs at the end of the first chapter to indicate that something more might be going on as opposed to regular hypnosis. But I understand full transformation is a huge departure. It is at the request of the commissioner. It was always the going to be the direction of the story.
12/16/25, 9:25 PM
Spermed my spermies from my goonerdong.
9/25/24, 2:52 PM
Is it bad that this series makes me really really badly want to edge myself and then go to the Mormon church near me and say I'm curious about converting?

9/28/24, 2:08 PM
@GoodBoy Do it

9/28/24, 7:54 PM
@[BSuited](/user/show/10003178) I'm booked in tomorrow. They even have a thing where you can ask two missionaries come to meet you to take you there and walk you through the ceremonies. If I end up converted I'm blaming you lmao

d-boi
2/11/25, 9:02 PM
@[GoodBoy](/user/show/1900997) So what came of that?

d-boi
12/16/25, 8:57 PM
@[GoodBoy](/user/show/1900997) You haven't been seen in several months. Did you actually convert?
12/16/25, 7:30 PM
A very cute read! I’m curious to see how things will develop with the couple and their interspecies relationship!