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12/12/25, 8:53 PM
This is SOOOOO perfect. You never miss đŸ„°

12/27/25, 3:55 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) I AGREE! I love the storytelling in this - with the chapters. Its so exciting and interesting ... and keeps me so entertained!
12/27/25, 3:21 PM
me encantan tus historias y esta no es la excepciĂłn c: ojala continĂșes escribiendo!!!!
12/27/25, 3:11 PM
So hot!!! And very well-written!:heart_eyes:
12/27/25, 3:10 PM
So hot!! Loved it!!!
12/27/25, 3:04 PM
Hot!
12/27/25, 2:38 PM
How the mighty have fallen
12/27/25, 2:29 PM
WELL DONE ... and wonderfully written. It is wildly erotic and exciting because I love all the hypnotic phrases and the references to smells. It is so wonderful. I loved it.
12/27/25, 2:26 PM
Can't wait for more
J J
12/27/25, 3:38 AM
Intriguing. I can’t decide if this is good enough as a stand-alone or a great first chapter. What happened to Newcomer?

12/27/25, 1:07 PM
@J J I did mean this a stand alone, to the point of deliberately not creating a backstory to the situation. However, as is usual I did think about what happens next (but not enough to even write two paragraphs and stall as I normally do.) The problem is that what I thought of would not have answered your question; although, it may have encouraged more.
12/27/25, 12:53 PM
Awesome job. Merry Christmas to us and of course to you, Mafisto.