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12/27/25, 3:04 PM
Hot!
12/27/25, 2:38 PM
How the mighty have fallen
12/27/25, 2:29 PM
WELL DONE ... and wonderfully written. It is wildly erotic and exciting because I love all the hypnotic phrases and the references to smells. It is so wonderful. I loved it.
12/27/25, 2:26 PM
Can't wait for more
J J
12/27/25, 3:38 AM
Intriguing. I can’t decide if this is good enough as a stand-alone or a great first chapter. What happened to Newcomer?

12/27/25, 1:07 PM
@J J I did mean this a stand alone, to the point of deliberately not creating a backstory to the situation. However, as is usual I did think about what happens next (but not enough to even write two paragraphs and stall as I normally do.) The problem is that what I thought of would not have answered your question; although, it may have encouraged more.
12/27/25, 12:53 PM
Awesome job. Merry Christmas to us and of course to you, Mafisto.
12/27/25, 12:18 PM
Oh wow another hot chapter. The whole hypno with his lil bro Blake is so hot. Love that he remembers everything. Im excited whats gonna happen to the family, especially during their "bonding" time. And i cant wait what where would his connection to Derek would go, especially with both of their powers.
12/27/25, 11:59 AM
Great start. I like it
Anonymous
2/13/25, 12:25 AM
Made my asshole wink

12/27/25, 10:41 AM
@Anonymous wish my tongue had been on it
12/27/25, 10:41 AM
horny for the story, and a neighbor like Earl. am submissive for the taste of a sweaty hole