Recent Comments

9/29/23, 4:12 PM
Love how this is going, but at the beginning I became a little confused who was who in regards to Alan and Noah

9/29/23, 7:12 PM
@[JayBean](/user/show/1019324) Thanks for the feedback! This has def been a little sloppy, so I’ll try to edify it a bit more clearly in future installments.

Anonymous
1/2/26, 11:49 PM
@[zguh](/user/show/908471) I really love this series…defenetly need more of this. At least one final story because this is so hot.
1/2/26, 11:41 PM
Can't wait to see where this goes!
1/2/26, 11:23 PM
Such an interesting premise!
GayCop2
1/2/26, 10:45 PM
Hey, I check my email and could use a deep throat and tongue with lips on mine!
1/2/26, 9:50 PM
Very nice!
1/2/26, 9:45 PM
Short but powerful story. First time reading that I feel the urge to be dominated like Peter. Very well written and hope to read more from **HMSL**
1/2/26, 8:37 PM
I'm really looking forward to what happens next
1/2/26, 8:06 PM
Du schreibst wunderbar einfühlsam und man hat in jedem Satz das Gefühl, dass Du selbst das alles erlebt hast. Und Du wirst mit jeder Geschichte besser! Nur solltest Du ab nochmal Drüberlesen (oder mit einem Tool kontrollieren lassen), an mindestens zwei Stellen hast Du ein oder mehrere Worte unterschlagen: "Nach wenigen Sekunden waren Schmerzen seine prallen Bälle und die Nippel wurden steinhart. " "Patricks wurden schmal und er zuckte mit den Schultern." Und bitte schreib unbedingt weiter!
1/2/26, 6:48 PM
Looking forward to taking more league members- green lantern (any one), aquaman, flash, even plastic-man. Even having the boys play with each other while waiting their turn to be used again. A new team dynamic training
1/2/26, 3:45 AM
The longer this tale continues the more it becomes like a greek tragedy; star crossed lovers separated then reunited through unlikely circumstances, only to be torn apart again. This chapter took a much more obvertly dark tone compared to those previous as well, very much playing into the utopia/dystopia themes. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what you have in store for our central pair and the peppering of other characters now in their orbit as this grand narrative concludes.

1/2/26, 6:26 PM
@[phillipsm](/user/show/919402) Thank you, Phillip! I truly love your comment; it means that we did something right!