Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/2/24, 10:58 PM
This rules! Really sweet story, and the vengeance is perfect! Also, the description “the Father must pay for his sins” made me giggle for some reason lol. You’re a very good writer!
6/26/24, 1:23 PM
Really cool! Tho, I am confused by you saying you didn't have time. I am commenting on June 26th, the contest ends on **July** 29th.

6/26/24, 1:54 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thanks for the comment. I don’t have time due to work demands and learning disabilities that require I give myself time to edit. I don’t have a perfect system in place for writing. Hope that clears up the confusion.

7/2/24, 7:14 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) :+1: understandable. Will be interested in reading more from you, once the names are revealed, it's a really good story.

7/2/24, 10:26 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Great!
thesaxcat
7/2/24, 8:48 PM
Nice start. Hope the next part comes Soon.

7/2/24, 9:17 PM
@[thesaxcat](/user/show/10005285) Already working on it. Glad you enjoyed
7/2/24, 8:33 PM
A very intriguing start!

7/2/24, 8:46 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you. We'll see what happens 🤫
7/2/24, 8:27 PM
Incredibly hot story. The extended build-up is amazing and has me desperate for more.
7/2/24, 8:19 PM
Ugh reading that while in a cage was painful in the good way. I have to start using the phrase "cage-gasm" and look forward to reading more about gay supremacist societies. It was an excellent read, thank you.
7/2/24, 7:02 PM
So hot!!!!💖💖💖
7/2/24, 6:40 PM
So freaking hot! Can’t wait for the next chapter!!
7/2/24, 6:21 PM
This is super-well written!!!! I hope those three becomes a throuple once they realizes the tapes mix-up. Have you thought about cross-posting this story on Gay Cupid? It would fit great in there!💚
hypnosub
7/2/24, 4:30 PM
This chapter is so good! I love the introduction of the “Himbo” trigger and the reveal that Jace is listening to Adam’s files. I wasn’t expecting Adam to be pan, so that was a fun surprise! The way you’re developing Jace’s friendships (and perhaps more) with Dylan and Jace is so well-done. You’re really taking your time to show them all let down their walls and get closer with each other. And of course, the hypnosis in this story is amazing! It was really hot to see Jace stop thinking so much. He’s gonna make a great dumb himbo. I can’t wait to read more! Thanks for sharing this story with us