Recent Comments

Pupwhositso
8/12/24, 7:22 AM
Such an excellent story.
8/11/24, 10:53 PM
The description of the artifacts... even re-reading for the third time, it really looks like Benny finds three rings that were on a single string, and then there are two rings remaining after he takes one. But then it's stated they were three *necklaces* plus an additional ring. Kind of annoying such an important moment is confusing as heck, because otherwise, the chapter is VERY sexy and well-written.

8/12/24, 6:33 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) I had to reread it, too—I think what happens is that Benny opens the trunk, finds a bunch of chains with padlocks on them, then notices the small bag that contains the three magic rings. For me the trick was realizing that the chapter initially refers to the find as “chains,” then switches to “necklaces” to signify that they can be worn, with the rings as separate. Hope that helps!

8/12/24, 7:18 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Yeah, it's made a lot clearer by the description of tge same scene in chapter two. Honestly, not a deal-breaker, but it's kind of an important scene, reading it the first time, I thought those were chains holding back the chest opening fully.
8/12/24, 4:59 AM
digging this one big time!
8/12/24, 4:18 AM
I agree with the comments. With the original story I did like how he used his powers on the person and what words and stuff and I am a little disappointed that the original story was left on a cliffhanger of sorts
Pupwhositso
8/12/24, 3:45 AM
What an excellent story!
Anonymous
8/12/24, 1:25 AM
Chapter 4 please! Don’t leave it like this :sob:
8/11/24, 11:08 PM
Please continue writing. I love this story !

8/12/24, 1:02 AM
@[naturellementsoumis](/user/show/1193036) Don’t worry! I’m still working on it!
Anonymous
8/12/24, 12:58 AM
Awesome story! I want to see more Asian dom stories, especially Chinese. I’m one of those who are “starved for that content”. Please write more!
8/12/24, 12:53 AM
Nice job. Glad you are back.
8/1/24, 1:18 PM
This was awesome AND hot! At one point you have too much dialogue followed by too much narration, but other than that, it’s pretty good! Great job, Mysterious Author Who I Totally Dont Know Who It is!

8/1/24, 9:25 PM
@[Twan Andersen](/user/show/10018149) Me? Writing a hot story? If you knew who I was you'd be stunned :wink:

8/2/24, 12:07 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Really? I didn't think JD Vance could write porn, but live and learn! :innocent:

8/12/24, 12:51 AM
@[Twan Andersen](/user/show/10018149) Surprise it was me all along 🤯