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6/12/23, 8:10 PM
For me this was what I was hoping for a relationship between Matt & Jake. However, I still want Matt to be Jake's slave trainer & get his chance to fuck Jake. Also Billy is a sick pervert & for me has no redeeming value. Any chance he will get his comeuppance? I almost forgot to thank you for this great chapter.

6/12/23, 8:23 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Jake is really starting to Dee a whole different side of Matt, realising he’s one of the few people who sees him as more than just fuck meat. I see where you’re coming from here about Billy. But he was a helluva fun character to write up
Anonymous
6/12/23, 8:21 PM
Excellent work!!
6/12/23, 8:10 PM
Really good premise. Was a fun read.
6/12/23, 5:49 PM
This was fantastic. Please don’t wait another four months before posting the next stage of Max’s transformation! Love what’s happening to him.
6/12/23, 5:18 PM
I always enjoy when you post a new story. Great job
6/12/23, 3:31 PM
You don’t have to put _(Oblivion!)_ at the end. You can just have it jus cut off with a -!
6/12/23, 3:21 PM
Loved this! Very neat premise too
May 14, 2023
6/12/23, 1:41 PM
I wanna hear about more of these big dicked alpha top virus victims 😈
5/29/23, 2:16 PM
When will you post stories again?

5/29/23, 4:05 PM
@[Snsdns](/user/show/917568) Yup! I’m just not the best at staying ‘horny for hypno’ all the time so never wanna write unless I’m feeling the horny to ensure my stories are as hot as they can be 🥰🍆

6/12/23, 11:50 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Waiting for your next stories.
6/12/23, 9:04 AM
First of all, I would like to congratulate you for writing, in my humble opinion, the best story in a series (at least among those that are being updated frequently), which is perhaps not worth much because many do not complete the stories unfortunately, but it definitely does because this is your first story and you write it so well. You convey the voices of the characters well, to the point that it is easy to differentiate the characters and your narrative is solid and in this chapter it was especially good, you managed to advance three plots in just one chapter and in a way that made sense. That said, I think there are divergences in expectations of what you write and what I believe the community expects based on the different feedback from the last few chapters. I, for one, thought that while Dexter rationally acknowledged that Cody is the best-looking guy in school (he's a very smart person after all), he had a much bigger crush on Rich, who is a handsome competitive athlete, "perfect" (in Dexter's own words) seemingly good-natured (Despite what Cody thinks, I theorize that Rich just seems like someone pressured, probably by his father, to be the best at every activity of his.) and hard-working enough to get grades as good as Dexter himself, instead of just being a hot, charming asshole like Cody. I'm saying this because, although like many I wouldn't conduct Dexter's modus operandi and his decisions the same way you do, I fully trust your ability to continue this story in the best way, as your responses to the questions in the first comments were very satisfactory. For me, even I don't agree 100% with them. I eagerly await the next chapter. Best Wishes.
Nov 26, 2021
6/12/23, 6:17 AM
That was a fantastic story, loved their transformation and how in the end their love was stronger. They emerged from the experience a better couple, that's great. I wish there was a sequel.
6/12/23, 6:07 AM
Much better chapter! I like this how Lennie’s pitting the jocks against each other, thats very hot. Yeah you definitely need to do part 4
6/12/23, 5:47 AM
Well that's a fun premise!
6/12/23, 5:39 AM
Interesting setup! Curious to see where you take this
6/12/23, 4:59 AM
Of course! Can't wait!
Jun 9, 2023
6/12/23, 3:34 AM
I enjoyed this one a lot. There's a sweetness to it.
Anonymous
6/12/23, 2:10 AM
Great story
5/21/23, 2:50 AM
This was a lot of fun to read, if a touch disjoint at times, though I'm not sure that took much away from it. I really loved the idea of sexual exploration via subliminals, which would take role playing that one step further. Of course it's fantasy, but it's one I'd love to be real in a lot of ways too :-) and on the other hand am glad it's not, because my god, the potential for abuse.

6/11/23, 11:56 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thanks so much for these thoughts! Definitely a risk with adapting RP, that disjoint. Glad that you enjoyed it anyway!
6/11/23, 11:26 PM
@GoJia It's not just some random story; it's a story that appears in the first chapter of the _Zhuangzi_ and is a staple of Zhuangzian de-stabilizing and undermining norms. It seems like you haven't read the source material. @Blazargus Get well soon; it's no fun being in the hospital. The story still continues to move like Westworld, but Westworld definitely had the hosts defying the human control to the point that the tables got flipped and the hosts ended up controlling. So the whole making the AIs subserviant to the Piper is a big letdown in my mind. You definitely could have played the scenarios out in different ways.

6/11/23, 11:51 PM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) This 'ending' isn't the absolute ending for the setting. Originally I'd planned on progressing down a path like the one you're suggesting, but having had a rough time writing in recent weeks I decided on this ending for Kevin and Carter. The 'real' final act can happen later with a different main character, when I'm back on my feet (mentally speaking). As far as Kevin and Carter go, they aren't 'heroes'; their focus was on each other, that was their priority. Fighting back and turning the tables became less and less important to them as time progressed. Piper even 'wanted' Kevin to fight back, which complicates things for him. So, while this arc may not end satisfactorily for you, I hope the continuation that follows does.
6/11/23, 9:50 PM
Loving this story! Keep it up!
Anonymous
6/11/23, 8:43 PM
Great story! Loved it!!!!!
6/11/23, 10:21 AM
This was such a beautiful story. I could feel Matt’s anxiety and can remember feeling like that lately. Reading through and experiencing the scare and then relief and understanding and joy was a cathartic release. The sexiness helped a lot too :). I really enjoyed it and I hope there is more to come.

6/11/23, 8:18 PM
@[Drone NG5](/user/show/681310) Thank you so much. I really appreciate you sharing this with me. I'm so glad it offered some catharsis for you and you enjoyed the sexiness and story as a whole.
Kippers
6/11/23, 7:12 PM
I knew it would be the slut's best buddies who would be giving him his first meat fest, but I would have liked the reveal to come a bit sooner. Then they could feed his cocklust in further chapters, inviting their disbelieving friends to help flood him with cock in their garages. Such a hot scene, inviting a bunch of beer buddies over to use some hot pussy.
Jun 7, 2023
Anonymous
6/11/23, 6:43 PM
What an incredibly hot slow burn. If you write any more, I’d love to see more foot worship/ sweaty feet 😍
Jun 11, 2023
6/11/23, 3:34 PM
Damn. This made my dick ache.
6/11/23, 12:44 PM
absolute GOLD!
6/10/23, 3:35 PM
My God, that's 20,000 words, and I've been coming to this site almost every day for two weeks eager for your updates. Thank you for writing such a great ending, I love this romantic story with an open ending! In your story, you mentioned the word "butterfly". There is a story in China called "Zhouzhuang Dream Butterfly", in which a man dreamed that he was a butterfly. After he woke up, he began to wonder whether his life was a butterfly dream or just he dreamed of butterfly. This is a story worth thinking about. Thanks again for your writing!And I'm a big fan of yours now :heart_eyes:

6/10/23, 11:44 PM
@[GoJia](/user/show/23538) Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it through to the end! I'm sorry it took so long, I've been in hospital and in no state to write anything. I'm also really happy you got the Zhouzhuang reference :) I felt Piper was the sort of character who would allude to it, but not explain his reference. I'm happy to see it still shone through. Thanks again for your earnest support!

6/11/23, 7:24 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Are you ok? hope you recover soon

6/11/23, 9:35 AM
@[GoJia](/user/show/23538) Just some really bad flu and the knock-on effects from that. Should be on the mend now :)
Leo
6/11/23, 9:31 AM
This is so hot! One of the best stories I’ve seen on here in a LONG TIME. Please hypnotize Brad and Chad’s dad!! We desperately need a daddy slave!
6/11/23, 6:44 AM
Hi guys! Thanks again for everyone who left a comment. Much appreciated! I have to prepare for a test so I don't know if I can spend time this week for the next chapter. It might come out near the end of the month. I normally don't like to address suggestions since it might spoil the next chapters, but here are some that I'd like to comment on. 1) I did consider turning Brad's home into the HQ for their porn operations, but given that Dexter is looking forward for a university life outside his home town, I think it is a bit out of character. Maybe there's another way they can be together wherever Dexter goes? 2) Dexter did not hypnotize Justin because he's the only person he considers his equal, and tampering with his will contradicts that. Justin still does not know how Dexter hypnotized those boys, he just knows they are hypnotized, so he doesn't really pose a threat yet. And a struggle-for-control type story sounds complicated. I would not attempt that on my first try. 3) Dexter's parents not having sex is not part of the original set of commands Brad was programmed with. It was added when Dexter saw that Brad's inclusion may cause some problems within the family. If, however, he was convinced that Brad having a threesome with his parents can be good for their marriage, he just might revoke that restriction. Is a threesome involving a straight woman and a still-straight man something the community even want?
6/11/23, 4:23 AM
So excited to see where this goes

6/11/23, 4:33 AM
@[Lusty Stallion](/user/show/10012213) You’ll either have to wait for my Patrons to vote when it gets posted here, or sign up for my Patreon. I’m still waiting for more of your work lol.