Recent Comments

6/9/23, 12:35 AM
I love this series and Ethan so much. There's something almost sinister about Ethan's combination of traits, as if a trickster god had placed a particularly subtle curse on him. I adore it. It's also got this fun little slapstick/farce thing going for it. Anyone who was giving you low marks for writing must have been confused at the lack of typos or bad grammar in the story....

6/13/23, 5:28 PM
Eh, there’s no accounting for personal taste. I’ve got no grudge; just enough vanity to make a public plea for clarity ;) @[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419)
6/4/23, 1:37 AM
This was so damn cute. I had a blast reading it, and I think you may have had a blast writing it. ;-)

6/13/23, 5:27 PM
Thanks, @[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419)! This was a fun one to piece together for sure. Glad you enjoyed :)
Apr 18, 2013
6/13/23, 1:37 PM
You failed to remove the slaves body hair as all slaves are hairless!
Anonymous
6/13/23, 12:31 PM
Best story in all of GSS Martin can vouch ;5
Anonymous
6/13/23, 10:47 AM
Very appropriate title: how far the mighty have fallen! I too am enjoying this very much. I keep reminding myself that Billy WAS, at some point, a VICTIM -- Jake's VICTIM. I would LOVE to see a flashback of that exact moment. I want to see when Billy turned from a willing participant (he must've been at some point), to the point when he said 'enough' but Jake didn't listen, to the point that he vowed to take vengeance on Jake to meticulously plan his downfall. Without these background for me, Billy is just annoying after he pop Jake's cherry. Just my take.

6/13/23, 12:03 PM
@Anonymous I do get what you mean. Billy has taken his to a whole other level. This has always been Jake…and now Matt’s story and I’ll probably stick with that for now, but Ia spinoff/flashback tale is definitely something to consinder
6/13/23, 11:38 AM
Yesss been waiting for this. Genuinely the best story on here - plenty of plot without sacrificing sexiness, and perfect justification for why a drone life sounds like heaven
Jonanator
6/13/23, 4:36 AM
Hot
6/13/23, 4:28 AM
Absolutely lovely and I am happy to see the story continue!
6/13/23, 3:11 AM
I love Jamie's dream sequence at the beginning. I wonder if Master used the actual memories of DH-03 to form the dream? We get to see a Brute in action for the first time. We also get hints of two new drones types - DCs and DGs. Then there's that great "daily conditioning" sequence. The rest is exposition and setup, but good lead in to what's to come. Yet another superb chapter.
6/13/23, 2:34 AM
Really good premise, can't wait to see where you take the story next!
6/13/23, 2:29 AM
Yay! You’re back! Made me so happy to see this update!
ZackGreeny
6/13/23, 2:08 AM
I love how it went in this part 3, one year has past and where are the next parts ? I'd love to see it ! It's making me so horny
6/13/23, 2:05 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter
Anonymous
6/13/23, 1:55 AM
Oh gods it’s so hot please let 005 and 013 be a couple
6/13/23, 1:44 AM
Solid premise.
PromethiumJPM
6/13/23, 1:25 AM
Let them CUM! I feel like I’m not allowed by proxy! 🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤 damn Im gettin stoopid! Where my hairy furry horny fuckers with the COCKS and Scents from Ass juice?!
6/12/23, 11:39 PM
They have evened the scales and see each other for what they are: slaves. Its a humbling moment. Ans well written. I have no doubt that Gabe will be keeping both of them on 'short leashes' as it were. And Billy will always be there to provide that extra torment. He is devious wild card. And thank you for the longevity of these series so far. And thank you for being so consistent in providing the next chapter! Its really appreciated!
5/2/23, 8:02 PM
This could be quite a journey for Travis.

Throne
5/2/23, 9:21 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Some folks say that prolonged chastity can make a guy submissive and desperately eager to please. Hmmm.

5/3/23, 3:58 AM
@Throne True. I’ve also heard it can cause some diminishment physically and redirecting one’s focus to other areas.

Throne
6/12/23, 8:30 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) The sex drive is so powerful, that if it becomes focused on satisfying others, the results can be life-changing.
Jun 11, 2023
6/12/23, 3:34 PM
Just a small detail, you could make the end trail off as more rebellious. Adding the little “or the next time after that” part made seem like he’s giving up.

Throne
6/12/23, 8:29 PM
@[Allan Weiss](/user/show/472888) He's not giving up, but he is in a state of denial about his chances of succeeding. I made his situation really difficult to get out of, if not impossible. Sometimes, I give guys a bit more of a chance.
6/12/23, 8:27 PM
Yes, I can see that. Pure evil!
Jun 11, 2023
6/12/23, 10:37 AM
Loved this, super hoping for a second part.

Throne
6/12/23, 8:27 PM
@[Subearmerian](/user/show/929928) While I don't plan to continue this one, I have some others you might like on Deviant Art. You could try DORM NERD SERVICE. My page on there is under the name Subthrone, though the stories are shown as by Throne.
6/12/23, 8:10 PM
For me this was what I was hoping for a relationship between Matt & Jake. However, I still want Matt to be Jake's slave trainer & get his chance to fuck Jake. Also Billy is a sick pervert & for me has no redeeming value. Any chance he will get his comeuppance? I almost forgot to thank you for this great chapter.

6/12/23, 8:23 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Jake is really starting to Dee a whole different side of Matt, realising he’s one of the few people who sees him as more than just fuck meat. I see where you’re coming from here about Billy. But he was a helluva fun character to write up
Anonymous
6/12/23, 8:21 PM
Excellent work!!
6/12/23, 8:10 PM
Really good premise. Was a fun read.
6/12/23, 5:49 PM
This was fantastic. Please don’t wait another four months before posting the next stage of Max’s transformation! Love what’s happening to him.
6/12/23, 5:18 PM
I always enjoy when you post a new story. Great job
6/12/23, 3:31 PM
You don’t have to put _(Oblivion!)_ at the end. You can just have it jus cut off with a -!
6/12/23, 3:21 PM
Loved this! Very neat premise too
May 14, 2023
6/12/23, 1:41 PM
I wanna hear about more of these big dicked alpha top virus victims 😈