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Anonymous
11/6/15, 4:53 AM
Great idea - I too would like to see it turned into a full (longer) story.
Anonymous
11/6/15, 4:23 AM
Would love to see that bear of a dad submit his ass up high.
Anonymous
11/6/15, 3:32 AM
Its a nice concept. Id like to see it fleshed out into a full story.
Anonymous
11/5/15, 12:21 PM
The main reason I look at the site! Love all chapters... Would love another wrestler to dominate him..and find the but plug- then have his way- showers? Or tied with arms above his head and arm pits and groin shaved.... Coach could take him on an away weekend training session - ends up in gay bar in next city- Brady is walked naked around gay area naked collared hands tied to neck- anyone is allowed to fondle him...Brady has to thank everyone who touches him- coach raises money ... Or he ends up in woods with coach and a few ex college wrestlers ( coach has done this before) and Brody is kept in heat- chastity belt? , naked and drugged - while everyone uses him- but one guy is tender and Brady starts to look forward to being with this guy.... Definitely give the anal/ nipple drug to dad- in water after exercise session with coach and brody- ( coach will help get 10 kg off dad- still no woman in his life!) Dad spanked brody for catching brody jerking off when he enters house with reverend..planned by coach- caught on laptop, brody cums on his father- with hands tied behind back- gets disgusted with son doesn't want to see him. coach comes in at right time...and convinces father to let him take brody for the night.....brody spanked by a few of coaches mates - introduced to doggy humiliation.... Would like brody to take another drive home with the wrestler teammate- hands tied to headrest- open access to his body- hard the whole way to secluded spot- and edged on camera phone while his butt plug is found...so brody becomes his bitch at school... ;)
Anonymous
11/5/15, 11:47 AM
great story love to see you do it with a speedo swim team
Anonymous
11/5/15, 4:07 AM
Great start! Looking forward to following chapters!
Anonymous
11/5/15, 2:23 AM
I really enjoyed your story and look forward to more.
Anonymous
11/4/15, 11:51 PM
great story...can not wait for part 2
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Anonymous
11/4/15, 7:54 PM
Wow this was such an amazing story. I can't wait to see how it goes! More chapters please!
Anonymous
11/4/15, 6:55 PM
Yes....please continue the story
Sep 22, 2011
Anonymous
11/4/15, 6:53 PM
Would have loved to read a second part
Art
11/4/15, 4:52 PM
Very hot! The best story that I've read on our site in a long time! I can't wait for more chapters!
Cliff
11/3/15, 1:28 PM
Always like a good, hot gym hypno story with many muscles ! Maybe it would be a "made my perfect lover" story ?
Nov 1, 2015
Cliff
11/3/15, 1:18 PM
It's hot, but how the patients hypnotized James? Seems like they used an old trigger word, but if Hillman was so good at hypnosis, that the trigger word remained effective for many years, he could have gotten his revenge long time ago, or at least could prove he's right without the wager. For that matter, I thought the ending would be James is Hillman's unknowing plaything for many years, but I'm wrong.....
Anonymous
11/3/15, 9:30 AM
This story is so weird! Yet so hot! This must totally have a continuation!!!
Anonymous
11/3/15, 7:09 AM
Hot!
The guardsman
11/2/15, 7:03 AM
This is just a fill in but has to be there so that people understand what's happening. I'm always open for suggestions
Anonymous
11/2/15, 4:17 AM
Interesting, hope to read more from you
Anonymous
11/2/15, 2:29 AM
That was pretty hot. I'd love to see him change more!
Anonymous
11/1/15, 9:56 PM
Coach should recommend the father give Brody a regular prostate massage (with a vibrator?). This will stop Brody getting erections in training and he'll feel much happier and relaxed!
Anonymous
11/1/15, 9:17 PM
Dull and repetitive. No character development.
Nov 1, 2015
Anonymous
11/1/15, 8:57 PM
I'm not sure about this story... The main character was raped, wasn't he? Will there be a sequel?
Nov 1, 2015
Anonymous
11/1/15, 6:40 PM
Incredible story! Very well written and very hot!
Nov 1, 2015
MonsterMash62
11/1/15, 6:25 PM
Wow! Very hot story. I loved the twist.
Nov 1, 2015
TimNJ
11/1/15, 5:20 PM
Frigging hot, I hope there's a sequel making him a fat pig of a Dad from all of his special ice cream cones.
Anonymous
11/1/15, 8:38 AM
So glad my favorite writer came home again with his latest work! Brilliant and Exciting as always. I have to agree that it may be a little distracting if Zaid and his father are still aware of their hypnosis, but still arousing when seeing new characters as slaves! I am really looking forward to seeing the next chapter! Possibly we will see another 2 more characters as well then? Like former chapters, will those sexy 4-4 spaghetti sucking toe plots appear again. Let's see! I have prepared my popcorn!