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Anonymous
11/6/15, 10:55 AM
This could make a reasonable story. Maybe you should post an e-mail address, in case someone interested in collaboration would like to contact you. Some criticism: It's just a fantasy, certainly, but the store still seems to exist in a void. No-one has families or friends who come around asking for them and local culture apparently ignores public displays of programmed boytoys. A more important thing: I don't quite get which part of Zack's experience you intend to focus on. The obliviousness? The suspicion? The terror? The reprogramming? (Any of these singly or in combination can make a fine story - I'm just not sure about your intent.)
Anonymous
11/6/15, 4:53 AM
Great idea - I too would like to see it turned into a full (longer) story.
Anonymous
11/6/15, 4:23 AM
Would love to see that bear of a dad submit his ass up high.
Anonymous
11/6/15, 3:32 AM
Its a nice concept. Id like to see it fleshed out into a full story.
Anonymous
11/5/15, 12:21 PM
The main reason I look at the site! Love all chapters... Would love another wrestler to dominate him..and find the but plug- then have his way- showers? Or tied with arms above his head and arm pits and groin shaved.... Coach could take him on an away weekend training session - ends up in gay bar in next city- Brady is walked naked around gay area naked collared hands tied to neck- anyone is allowed to fondle him...Brady has to thank everyone who touches him- coach raises money ... Or he ends up in woods with coach and a few ex college wrestlers ( coach has done this before) and Brody is kept in heat- chastity belt? , naked and drugged - while everyone uses him- but one guy is tender and Brady starts to look forward to being with this guy.... Definitely give the anal/ nipple drug to dad- in water after exercise session with coach and brody- ( coach will help get 10 kg off dad- still no woman in his life!) Dad spanked brody for catching brody jerking off when he enters house with reverend..planned by coach- caught on laptop, brody cums on his father- with hands tied behind back- gets disgusted with son doesn't want to see him. coach comes in at right time...and convinces father to let him take brody for the night.....brody spanked by a few of coaches mates - introduced to doggy humiliation.... Would like brody to take another drive home with the wrestler teammate- hands tied to headrest- open access to his body- hard the whole way to secluded spot- and edged on camera phone while his butt plug is found...so brody becomes his bitch at school... ;)
Anonymous
11/5/15, 11:47 AM
great story love to see you do it with a speedo swim team
Anonymous
11/5/15, 4:07 AM
Great start! Looking forward to following chapters!
Anonymous
11/5/15, 2:23 AM
I really enjoyed your story and look forward to more.
Anonymous
11/4/15, 11:51 PM
great story...can not wait for part 2