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Anonymous
11/9/15, 6:04 PM
Look forward to next chapter
Anonymous
11/9/15, 4:37 PM
I miss the bubble stories. if someone could repost them....
frstone
11/9/15, 1:20 PM
I love this story soo much
Anonymous
11/9/15, 5:35 AM
I've been looking for the Bubble stories as well. They were great.
Anonymous
11/9/15, 3:29 AM
Sexy story, love seeing things from the dominants perspective, it seems so much rarer than the pov from the submissive. Anyway it's sexy and hot. Nice job.
Thom21 Eroticgayhypnosis.com
11/9/15, 2:54 AM
This story is my favorite style of hypno story. Way to go mw! Please keep us up with more of your work. Also, for all who like the the stories on this site please pledge $2 to Hugh on patreon https://www.patreon.com/hughmichelsen
mw-scot
11/8/15, 4:04 PM
I know this story got deleted along with the original Bubble series, however I'm re-uploading this as I'd love to make contact with the original author, so if anybody has their details, I'd be very grateful if somebody could email me (mwscot < a t > gmail . com)
The Syrme
11/8/15, 3:11 PM
Glad you liked it!!!
Oct 7, 2015
Anonymous
11/8/15, 1:13 PM
Dude please tell me there's a part 2
Anonymous
11/8/15, 10:48 AM
An excellent concept. I loved the idea of cumming once he let go of thinking and will. That letting go and cumming as a sign of submission. Well done.
Hyphap
11/8/15, 7:13 AM
Also, the title was reminiscent of the chorus of David Bowie's "Cracked Actor", which meant that 1) I had that song running through my head while I read it and 2) I could imagine Bowie as the man. All to the good.
Axel
11/8/15, 3:41 AM
Woo your back! Loved this xhapter and how the Reverend planted seeds in brodys dads head now coach needs to force them to grow making dad strip down and maybe even make brody go nude. I can see brody and his dad hanging out and doing somethibg like bonding through wrestling. Then brody throws a boner and his dads finds out forcing him to his room for a good spanking infront of the Webcam. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Axel
11/8/15, 3:38 AM
Great chapter! This is now one of my favorite series here! I cant wait to see what master has planned next for his two puppets. I can see him making the two compete for his attention. Looking forward to the next one!
Anonymous
11/8/15, 2:42 AM
wonderful. please flesh this out
Nesto Riviera
11/7/15, 2:01 PM
Thanks for your comments. It's just an idea. I really appreciate if someone want to team up with me. So we can improve this story (and maybe make more) If any interested please write to nestoriviera@hotmail.com
Anonymous
11/7/15, 12:12 PM
Shame that it had to go the incest route. It was hot until then.
The guardsmen
11/7/15, 9:07 AM
More
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
11/7/15, 6:48 AM
Pleasure and obedience. Listen. Pleasure. Obey. Fuck ya!
Nov 1, 2015
Anonymous
11/7/15, 6:12 AM
Very good story.....loved the twist...love to see where you go and in the in between periods
Anonymous
11/7/15, 3:54 AM
Wow. That. Was. Awesome! I loved the detail, and father-son "bonding" between a (relatively) young buff dad and his buff, clearly-gone-through-puberty is my dirty pleasure. (Speaking of dirty, I'd LOVE to hear some dirty talk, especially if it involved a dominant (but not sadistic) dad and his son.) I know, I'm a total perv, but only in fantasy land. Also, I hope the grandpa isn't covered with wrinkles and liverspots. Eww...
Anonymous
11/7/15, 3:23 AM
Quite hot and erotic. So much potential, very nice.
Hyphap
11/7/15, 2:49 AM
Simple and just about perfect.
Anonymous
11/7/15, 2:11 AM
awesome
Anonymous
11/7/15, 1:13 AM
Another hot installment. Looking forward to more...
toughluck
11/7/15, 12:01 AM
Ridiculously hot scene. Really hit a spot for me.
Anonymous
11/6/15, 10:19 PM
I simply can't wait for Lucas' enslavement. Love this story!
Thom21 eroticgayhypnosis.com
11/6/15, 10:06 PM
You have a great concept with this story and I easily got the ideas you were trying to present. I loved reading this despite gramatical issues and think a team up with another author would take take your story and a series of stories to the next level.
Anonymous
11/6/15, 6:03 PM
Lovely, simply lovely. The dad is so hot, it's awesome to see him under control.