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Anonymous
11/24/15, 4:00 AM
Awesome... i actually like how he's aware of what's going on but powerless to resist. I hope he spends a lot of time worshipping his father's feet, and vice versa.
Anonymous
11/24/15, 3:41 AM
What a fabulous brainwash scene! I love how Dan struggles and how it's such a nice long extended scene! -- and someday I hope you return for the conclusion of the best story on this site, "Bargain"!
autoDream
11/24/15, 1:00 AM
I've definitely considered how to best bring out the hypnotist thoughts in the story, but I haven't found a way that I am comfortable with yet. By default, i try to keep things pretty loose, in away to let the reader better fill in certain details for themselves so that they better fit in the world. In one of my stories I kind of came close to a way of going about it, where I switch the directive once Jese slips under. We get his side of things until *PING* "The boy was all mine, I could see his last thought disappear as I ordered him to sleep..." I'd probably have to introduce that in a spin off though as to not confuse things on the Island. My next writting will probably be something random, and I could easily see such a technique work.
Carl
11/24/15, 12:03 AM
Oh my lord those story ideas would be totally super hot and stuff. I adore the idea of a Jesse finding himself enthralled even after the island. And it being his boss, either current or new, is great. The fact that publicly his life is even better than it was (new job, more money, maybe even better home and stuff) means its hard for him to consciously choose to get out of the situation, which involves a lot of him slipping into a happy blissed out state of mind where he is willing to do whatever the dominant masterful boss wishes for him to do. Him doing reports for his boss and then going to the office where he thinks he is just reporting in but really he is stripping naked, bending over the desk, having his ass eaten out, and then bouncing on his boss master's cock, as just a standard daily activity - would be so awesome. hehe Soo sexy. Very cool. So much potential. (As a question, if its possible, maybe more snippets from the dominant's mindset could occur. I know you find it easier (and maybe even more enjoyable) to be Jesse, but its fun sometimes to read the dominatn's thoughts as he wins and takes down the sexy Jesse, making him into a good boy.)
Anonymous
11/23/15, 10:59 PM
Chapter 4 please
autoDream
11/23/15, 10:14 PM
A boss inviting Jese to his company office to talk, or apply for a lucrative job...
Anonymous
11/23/15, 10:13 PM
Oh, there is definitely a plan to have Jese run into hypnotist after the Island. I'm actually considering writing a story like that before I even finish the Island. It could be a chance meeting, but it would probably be something where they discussed meeting again, Jese not properly understanding at the time why they would want to talk to him after the island. I already have a decent list of other stories I would like to write, and a few of them would easily work with such a story line.
Carl
11/23/15, 9:39 PM
That's cool on the rimming, looking forward to seeing it. Story is really good the whole hypnosis and mental play is fun. Who needs actual bondage when hypnosis makes Jesse relaxed and obedient. :)
Anonymous
11/23/15, 9:37 PM
I think it would be hilarious if Connor, Kevin, and I think Paul are all in on it together to get people like Jesse into being their submissive sluts. It would be even more awesome if st the end they go home, only to discover that a neighbor or boss or someone is actually one or all three of the dudes. So the party does not even end with the island being over.
autoDream
11/23/15, 7:27 PM
Rimming definitely got left out there!! I am a fool, but I'll make sure to get it in there next time. Promise (might forget, but will try really hard to get it in there!) And bdsm is definitely on the way, just planning out a good encounter.