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bbfmtok@yahoo.com
6/5/16, 7:26 PM
great story would love to see what happens as kyles trainging is done and how he and seth live together
Anonymous
6/5/16, 6:40 PM
It's too rare to see twinkification and bearification done at once. Nice to see it here While this story felt like it went by a little briskly, it was still hot.
6/5/16, 5:16 PM
Pretty damn hot. The bulk of the transformation descriptions are all around the beard and hair, which doesn't usually do it for me. But it's done so well in this story that I love it. Really hot and really well executed.
me
6/5/16, 2:31 PM
Great story keep it going. would be also cool to see more dumb jocks around
Anonymous
6/5/16, 11:02 AM
Would love more of their stor sooo hot.
Anonymous
6/5/16, 8:36 AM
Can't wait to see Ty become a dumb jock bro and join Brandon. Execution is great !! Keep it going!!!
Ponko
6/5/16, 6:10 AM
This is getting better and better with each chapter! i love the subtle changes, and I love to see Ty's deterioration in the bathroom. Too bad that my financial situation isn't good enough to ask you for a story. You are so talented!
Anonymous
6/5/16, 5:24 AM
Yeah!
Texmandex
6/5/16, 4:47 AM
I will definitely continue the story. Stay tuned. Thanks guys.
xORRiNx
6/5/16, 4:43 AM
Just submitted part 3. It'll get approved soon hopefully!
Anonymous
6/5/16, 4:39 AM
This was a great story. It would be brilliant if you could do a third season Texmandex, and maybe make it a trilogy. I'm guessing Aaron is Chris' assistant but it would be fun to see how it all plays out as I'm assuming you have your own ideas on that or at least had your own ideas on it when you wrote it.
Darmani
6/5/16, 4:20 AM
Glad to have you back. this is concluded. you do sequences of transition well. As well as the incest. Only negative is the setup exposition but we're WELL on the way to tense implication and action as things go on. Only complaints is wanting more (when they leave, go shopping, or whatever) but what is there works. thank you.
Anonymous
6/5/16, 3:51 AM
I'd love to see a continuation of this. The lockdown takes place after school, so even if they convert everyone then there's still a lot of room to go around with the cult spreading. New POVs could come from jocks who missed practice that night, nerds studying late, all kinds of people. In the following days, maybe some people start to notice the hot new fashion trend and wonder or find spandex hanging in their lockers. What happens when the converted team has a game with another school? Or there's a new transfer student? How does the cult work on people who already wear spandex for sports? And I agree with Spandexlad's suggestions too.
Anonymous
6/5/16, 3:34 AM
Good story!!
Anonymous
6/5/16, 3:04 AM
I love this Age progression!!
Anonymous
6/5/16, 2:55 AM
Loved the part when jack shit what was left of his human shelf Keep writing please
Ink_Nerd
6/5/16, 2:54 AM
hope there is more coming form this story. ether more of David and Ben, or even better more storys of customers that come for a trim from Trace.
6/5/16, 2:07 AM
Me he encantado esta historia hasta aquí. Las descripciones son bellas, y el desarrollo del argumento tuvo buen ritmo. No tengo quejas, solo que te disfrutes de escribir tanto que nosotros disfrutamos de leer!
Tox
6/5/16, 12:46 AM
There, I put my handle in for this comment (my first one for this story). This story, and just, all of them so far Orrins, you have quickly added yourself to my favorite authors on here. Not only are your stories well written, but even the ones that are intentionally vague like this one spark the imagination. Your imagery is very vivid and it's quite easy for me to just get lost in it. Love your work, simply cannot wait for more! :)
Jun 4, 2016
Anonymous
6/4/16, 11:25 PM
This reminds me a lot of a sequence on furaffinity called "A Change of Truths." You're quickly becoming one of my new favorite authors, and I hope you keep gracing us with your stuff--it's hard to pull off reality change as convincingly (and sexily) as you do! The shift from kind and conservative to callous and slutty was especially nice. :)
Anonymous
6/4/16, 11:15 PM
I really loved this series too and would love to know what happens next after the lockdown. I'm assuming you never carried on with the story texmandex? It would be great if you did so we can find out what happens. I do agree with Spandexlad as well on some of his points about it sometimes being confusing as to whom is on what side. I also find some of the descriptions of the slaves confusing too as sometimes they appear to only be in spandex shorts, yet other times appear to be clad fully in spandex. But I think I can speak for a lot of readers texmandex when I say please do break out that "red pen" as I and many others I'm sure would love to know what happens during that lockdown.
Jun 4, 2016
xORRiNx
6/4/16, 11:05 PM
I've read some memory change themes before but you my friend take the cake with skill. This was written sooo well!!!
Jun 4, 2016
Anonymous
6/4/16, 10:43 PM
So hot!!! More memory change stories, please!
Jun 4, 2016
Anonymous
6/4/16, 10:01 PM
Another absolutely amazing story. Really one of the best contributing at the moment! Other authors might be able to drum up comments based on controversial topics but your stories are the real deal well written AND sexually satisfying. Well done!
bbfmtok@yahoo.com
6/4/16, 9:02 PM
please continue and change the whole team.
cutlerfan
6/4/16, 8:10 PM
Keep writing this. I would love to read more of Kyle's transformation.
EricJ
6/4/16, 8:03 PM
Matt turning into a dominant rough Alpha was hot. Backfire for Hannah..Makes Matt abusive towards' ----natter natter,yak yak repeat----- 'is submissive role,Matts dominance. THERE...I'VE PUT MY SIGNATURE ON IT,HAPPY NOW :}
xORRiNx
6/4/16, 4:18 PM
Yea I've always found that annoying... Even somebody lile you (Ragnarok) could be writing things with no signature. But I guess as long as at least one person likes my stories I'll be happy :)
Jun 4, 2016
Anonymous
6/4/16, 4:08 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!
Anonymous
6/4/16, 4:00 PM
Substance of the story is interesting. This was a good start. Form of the story -- you've got to spend time editing. Writing the story is creative. Editing the story is crucial. There were hiccups in many of your sentences and paragraphs. If you're using MSWord, use the Spell and Grammar check. It will help.