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8/10/23, 6:01 PM
This is great. Love a twink transformation. Would love to see a sequel where you transform other actors into young twinks
8/10/23, 5:59 PM
Hoping this is continued! Awesome premise and writing!
8/10/23, 5:37 PM
Really loved this story and the tie-ins to fairy tales, though hoo boy the racial slurs were hard to get through.
Apr 12, 2023
NY
8/10/23, 5:37 PM
Can you write one of the chapters where he body swaps into a girl and then has a threesome with two inexperienced straight guys who are best friends? I want her to totally control everything that happens. She tells them that she won't do any sexual act with them unless they're also willing to do that thing to each other *first*. She makes them kiss each other before she kisses each of them. If one guy licks his friend's nipple, then she'll lick his nipple. If he grabs his friend's dick, then she'll grab his dick, etc... A good setting for this might be on a cruise ship, and these are two random guys by the pool.
Jax
8/10/23, 5:33 PM
100% agree. This just left me wanting more
8/9/23, 1:20 PM
Another masterpiece! I love seeing how debauched these men become.

8/10/23, 5:05 PM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) Thank you!!
Gingcub
8/10/23, 3:47 PM
Love stories about guys being made into helpless gooners. Would love to see more of this
8/10/23, 12:09 PM
Gimp Gary sound like he was a low life but Tom wasn't. So at a certain point I expect Dylan, H and the others might get their due. As you Slaveboy good luck in your studies & don't stress out too much.

8/10/23, 3:36 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Thank you, mate!!
7/23/23, 7:26 PM
And at last, the prophecy has been fulfilled. Even though the title was a warning of Adam's demise, I had a small bit of me hoping there'd be a twist at some point where the lawyer could somehow become victorious. Yet nonetheless this was a great ending! I love this realistic approach of what happens after the prey has been haunted. I wonder how all these successful recruitment must be affecting Gabriel since, ironically, having everything you want can sometimes become a curse in itself. How long until nothing is interesting enough? How long until everything feels dull and colourless? He sure shall find his own downfall at some point in the line. I must say I don't agree with Adam in one thing. We'll never know, but I feel like Gabriel would have never stopped at trying to add Adam to his collection. If the honest lawyer had followed his wife's advice and stayed with her, I'm confident Gabriel would have grown obsessed to the point of finding one way or another to make the man his. In the end, Adam was the victim of a nefarious and gifted man. All of this was Gabriel's fault, and not Adam's natural and human flaws. Also, as a side note, I looooved the suggestion of listening to Rigoletto, and I think it helped building the atmosphere. Very original thing to do, addressing the reader and even adding a link :heart: Thank you so much for this series! It was really well written, original, and fascinating. One story that will have a space in my mind for sure :)

7/23/23, 7:56 PM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) I agree about the never ending hunt. Or at least I did until we were told otherwise by this story (even if by an unreliable narrator). I think it comes down to two questions: 1. For how long could Adam avoid Gabriel; and 2. What is Gabriel's patience limit/boredom limit. I am surprised that Adam never tried to work with the journalist. This would have been the first thing I would do in his shoes.

7/31/23, 12:20 AM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) It was originally planned like that, but the journalist was useless, his lawyer already converted. Also since Adam's firm was representing Gabriel, it would have been a no no, Adam is still a lawyer at heart, he's careful with these things. As for Gabriel's hunt, it's clear that we only have Adam's opinion on the matter. And he doesn't have a good track record for figuring Gabriel out.

7/31/23, 12:25 AM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) Adam is struggling to find agency in this whole thing. Thinking he could have prevented it helps him do that. His natural human flaws only made Gabriel's job easier, but of course he remains the victim in the whole situation.

8/5/23, 7:50 AM
@[Mafisto](/user/show/600927) I thought he would try to contact him after he had quit representing Gabriel, but I can see why even though he wanted revenge that was a line he wouldn't cross. Now I am really curious. As the author, can you tell us if Gabriel would've left Adam alone had he listened to his wife and let it go?

8/10/23, 2:26 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Adam's firm still represented Gabriel even if Adam no longer did. So there still remained a conflict of interest. Maybe Gabriel would have pursued Adam all the way no matter what Adam did. But Gabriel is flighty and dominates dozens of people a week. He cruises through life. He did not work for his gifts, he was naturally talented. So too much effort to put into something might bore him, especially if some new shiny thing appears around the corner. He was amused by not getting Adam right away, but even succeeding at making Adam hide from him means he had influenced his life anyway. Still, we'll never know.
7/22/23, 9:05 AM
Wow, this story was something else! The writing was excellent and the plot was captivating. I liked the opera theme a lot (though admittedly I didn't always recognize the connection to Rigoletto). As for the ending, I am torn. On the one hand, I always love a happy ending, this ending is more fitting to the story, especially when considering that the original Rigoletto is a tragedy. I really hope your name will be revealed soon because I can't wait to read other stories you wrote (also, I have a small hunch about who you are but I'll just have to wait and see)

7/31/23, 12:36 AM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) I hope you're not disappointed that it's me behind the story. Weirdly, I had not planned this story around Rigoletto at all. I was just looking for an opera that Gabriel would be in. Then it started to fit the story, and eventually dictated its shape loosely. At the end of Rigoletto, the Duke escapes justice and continues his life of debauchery. But even before Rigoletto, it was planned that Adam would fall.

8/5/23, 7:45 AM
@[Mafisto](/user/show/600927) Not disappointed at all! I loved this story and it was one of my favorites for this challenge. Even if it wasn't planned I think it suits Gabriel well and the part where he addresses the reader and recommends listening to La Donna é Mobile was a great touch. May I ask why it doesn't take part in it anymore?

8/10/23, 2:20 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) The competitiveness, as well as ratings in general, gave me too much unneeded anxiety.
8/5/23, 1:50 AM
I absolutely love day-in-the-life stories about hypnotists, the casual relaxed way he orders the men around like it’s nothing, making them his playthings, leaving them changed in hot but lifechanging ways as a lark, extremely hot!

8/10/23, 2:19 PM
@[Yourmind123](/user/show/221272) Thanks a lot! Yeah, Gabriel remains an artist even in the way he uses his power.
8/3/23, 11:23 AM
Travelling [with a hot statuesque tower of a man like Florian] can change your life! :grin: The essence of the scenes is really good. The humiliation, the dependency, and the growing submission of Ian marinate specially well. Reading it from the the vloger's point of view adds to the mix. His shortlived feeling of being back in control was a wonderful touch.

8/10/23, 2:18 PM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) Thanks Piko. Florian can give you the urge to be controlled.
8/3/23, 3:14 AM
Mafisto is on a roll! It's been a great month of stories. Alexander was for sure my favorite!

8/10/23, 2:18 PM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) Yeah, I have been rather prolific recently. Thanks!
Anonymous
8/2/23, 4:58 PM
Truly incredible ride, i will definitely come back to this once in a while to enjoy everything all over again~

8/10/23, 2:15 PM
@Anonymous Glad to know you will. Thanks!
8/2/23, 2:15 PM
Thank you for giving us another look at this work, and the links back to the source material. I’m not sure how I missed reading the series when it was first posted but I’m so glad this “highlight reel” of a posting got me to watch the full movie.

8/10/23, 2:14 PM
@[John Manning](/user/show/241691) Thanks, that was the purpose. Since it was in the contest, it was missed by a lot of people.
8/2/23, 12:15 PM
I bet Florian has an interesting background story. Hint, hint.

8/10/23, 2:13 PM
@[Morph](/user/show/919635) Oh, if you only knew! Or would you like to know...?
Anonymous
8/2/23, 4:05 AM
Loved this!!

8/10/23, 2:12 PM
@Anonymous Thanks!!
8/2/23, 1:52 AM
I hope someday someone will write a story about how a hypnotist or a person with the power of mind control unconsciously tries to take control of another person in order to make him his sexual partner. But this man turns out to be suffering from a split personality, and he has many personalities, like Billy Milligan. And in the end, the Hypnotist thinks that he has taken control of this person, but he does not know that he could not completely take control of him, but took control of only one personality. As a result, other personalities unite and "teach" how to take revenge on the hypnotist for trying to enslave)

8/10/23, 2:12 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) You can be the one to write that story, Zander!
8/2/23, 1:04 AM
Thank you so much for this amazing and inspiring story. I believe that sooner or later Gabriel will fall because of his arrogance and character, as his father did. Sooner or later he will meet his end, just like his father. It's only a matter of time before his next victim is smarter and more successful than his other victims he has enslaved, used as toys (ruining their lives) and abandoned. When this person is found (when the time comes), he will be finished (I'm afraid to imagine what such a person can do to him).

8/10/23, 2:11 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thanks Zander. Gabriel is certainly not immune to all his past behavior catching up to him.
8/1/23, 9:41 PM
Lovely series of vignettes. Really liked this idea.

8/10/23, 2:10 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thanks absman. They were fun to write.
8/1/23, 9:22 PM
I hope you will continue this series. It‘s really hot. I really appreciate your work. Would also like to se more suited content too.

8/10/23, 2:09 PM
@[Suitlover](/user/show/10017376) Thanks Suitlover. Suits are cool. Although the series is not likely to continue, Gabriel might reappear at some point.
8/1/23, 2:24 PM
This was like a tasting menu prepared by a master chef! I thoroughly enjoyed every 'course.'

8/10/23, 2:08 PM
@[stimle](/user/show/969716) Thanks stimle. I'm honored for the opportunity to have served you this menu.
7/31/23, 7:32 PM
As always a great story. I especially liked the ending because it is open to Florian and closed to Jan (because he was already enslaved by Florian). We do not know what Florian will do next, whether he will take someone else under control or not, or maybe he already enslaved someone before meeting Jan? The ending of this story allows us to fantasize about the future of the characters in this story.

8/10/23, 2:07 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thanks Zander. Yes, the story covered only the trip itself, it's anybody's guess what happens after that.
Tanner
7/31/23, 1:47 PM
Great story! Loved the slow build up. Thanks for the work that you do.

8/10/23, 2:06 PM
@Tanner Thanks Tanner. I'm trying different things, like this slow build up.
8/10/23, 1:20 PM
Good story with a great premise but I felt some parts were rushed like the smoking bit as there were not many details given about that part of his transformation.
Anonymous
8/10/23, 12:53 PM
I need to be Sterling !
8/10/23, 12:40 PM
thanks for the feedback lol, agree first crack and rushed through. Part 2 is coming and made sure to do a cleanup
8/6/23, 11:47 PM
Surreal story and very hot. The doctor leveraging the new gay guy in the group to help manage the condition is a win for everyone.

8/8/23, 7:22 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thank you for your kind words. Love your work especially Good Behaviour. Glad you picked up the surreality I wanted to something feverish about how through losing control the main character comes to terms with his deires. More to come

8/10/23, 11:55 AM
@[Whitechap_e1](/user/show/219792) Thank you! You definitely accomplished the feverish sort of feeling. He had no idea whether he was awake or dreaming and we're not totally sure either. But, he found his purpose and accepted his desires.
8/10/23, 10:51 AM
I'm loving these stories, but they could use a bit more careful proofreading; it randomly switches from a 3rd person narrator to a 1st person "I" at one point (then promptly switches back). Also, although I liked the symbolism of the scene with the rings, it also made me laugh, because I was imagining that the men's 9-inch dicks had to be incredibly skinny if they were the same girth as a woman's ring finger.
8/10/23, 9:19 AM
This is an amazing derailment from the previous chapters. Having no concept of subtext, or even connotations of English words is genuinely hysterical in the best way. I love Abe much lmao.