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7/25/23, 3:18 PM
Thanks for the follow up. I'd love to see the Sergeant sexually punish Buster while Junior surreptitiously watches. Hope the sequel comes out soon.

7/26/23, 11:54 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) We'll just have to see :smile:
7/25/23, 2:23 AM
Omg this is so hot and it just gets hotter, can't wait to read more!

7/26/23, 11:52 AM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) I'm so glad to hear you've been enjoying it!
7/26/23, 11:39 AM
I wish there was a part 2
7/26/23, 10:13 AM
Very cool use of that one single command, I hope we get more of this story soon, I’m hooked
Anonymous
7/26/23, 8:39 AM
I wanna see Steve made to wear slutty lace thong panties all the time. his tiny dick can fit in them perfectly, they will show off his hot ass, and the soft lace rubbing against his dick all day long will keep him rock hard and leaking into the panties like a slut.
7/22/23, 8:18 PM
The arousal level grows... and shrinks.

7/26/23, 6:52 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Yep ;) Although there's not a whole lot left of Wash, so they'll have to figure something out fast.
7/26/23, 6:44 AM
Good for Jimmy,honestly! It was time someone whisked his mind away and started thinking for him. He should only be concerned about being a muscle toy
7/26/23, 6:39 AM
So close yet so far with the coach. I'm curious about his sense of smell!
7/26/23, 2:57 AM
I saw that the "Unpublished edits" banner came down, so I re-read the story including the part with Rags the drunkard that had been missing. Great addition! Added nicely to Dirk and Deuce's humiliation and helpfully showed how the symbols worked on the brains of the sheriff and his deputy. On the second read, some other things caught my attention: the things on Dirk's to-do list! The doctor, the tailor, maybe a haircut, the fences... uh oh! Who knows what's going to happen to the big muscular cowboy, but those appointments might just turn into perilous predicaments... ripe for trouble and... humiliation. Hee hee hee.

7/26/23, 4:24 AM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) Hello again, my friend! a kind reader told me that a part of the story was missing, and I was just about to send you a message to tell you that the full chapter was already avaliabe. Thank you very much for read it again! You have a good eye, the list it's a foreshadow of things to come :smiling_imp:. A little change on my daily schedule will allow me to work more on this story and another one I have published, so hopefully soon you'll be able to read what's next for Dork and Dunce... oops! :hand_over_mouth: Dirk and Deuce, I mean :grin:.
7/26/23, 2:39 AM
This is one of the best stories EVER on this site. My heart jumped when I saw there was a new chapter and I’m still reeling from reading this one. I will come back for a proper review soon!!
Anonymous
7/26/23, 1:59 AM
this is boner nnnnnngh
Jul 22, 2023
7/25/23, 10:13 PM
I think this actually transcends smut, though it certainly has all the requisite features required, because I've left the story not only knowing poor drab Steve, but also knowing Liberace Ken, and both were fascinating studies. I liked how the transformations that took place were gradual and seemed to happen with the situations he was in. The only thing that confused me was the Future-Asher appearance. Was that literally just a random dream?

7/26/23, 12:04 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thank you for the nice words! The dream was meant to foreshadow not only the drastic transformation Steve would go through, but also the "butterfly effect" of it affecting everyone around him, including his family (and, I guess, his DNA!)
7/25/23, 11:52 PM
I would love to see this continue to other guys, jocks, homophobes etc.
7/25/23, 1:47 PM
Your characters are so real and so fucking hot. You sell their straightness so well that when we watch them doing gay things it feels all the hotter! Every little scene from beginning to end is fun as hell, one romp after another, and I love all the cum and pre Benito makes; that shit gets me going. You wrapped everything up perfectly. This is a real winner.

7/25/23, 10:53 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you for the kind words, Soren. I had a lot of fun outlining and writing the characters, so I'm especially glad to hear that folks enjoyed them. > and I love all the cum and pre Benito makes; that shit gets me going. Oh, I believe you! :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
7/25/23, 3:17 AM
That was terrific. Can't wait to see who the author is.

7/25/23, 10:48 PM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) We shall see! :wink:
Martin
7/25/23, 8:37 PM
What a fantastic and inventive story! Amazing!

7/25/23, 10:32 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you!
7/25/23, 6:42 PM
Oh wow, another great chapter. Siege turned to sex doll or i mean robot. It would have been fun calling him The Sexbot. But ehh, Cockbot is also hot. Simon being a Simon Says hero/slave is a great touch.

7/25/23, 9:58 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Cheers! Glad you liked it! :D
7/25/23, 9:55 PM
The load I worked out of my cock salutes your writing skill
Martin
7/25/23, 7:58 PM
That's such a hot story! Because of you, I'm starting to really discover another trait in me...

7/25/23, 8:02 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Yay, I’m helping!! I’m super glad you like
7/25/23, 7:36 PM
this series is amazing, and i cant wait for you to explore the awesome potential it has!!!! :DDDD
7/25/23, 6:32 PM
So Stephen accidentally made something to help with the coach’s endeavors better. Oh this is gonna be good.
7/25/23, 5:37 PM
Wow, a very good chapter, the combat description is also very detailed, I can see that The Subduer almost lost, and now only Gold Force is left, and I think he is a bit lonely. However, I hope that The Subduer will face a bigger challenge, and I hope that Gold Force will find a helper on par with The Subduer!In addition, I hope that the previous Glen can continue to appear in the story. The encounters of ordinary people in heroic stories are often more attractive than heroic stories.

7/25/23, 6:29 PM
@[GoJia](/user/show/23538) Thanks! Maybe some of what you're looking for is coming up soon,... :3
7/25/23, 6:12 PM
HOT!! definitely want to read more
7/25/23, 2:02 AM
Still in awe over your ability to publish such hot, interesting works so quickly! It definitely feels like it's all doom and gloom for the heroes since the element of surprise is gone. It's a little sad that no one got to enjoy Siege's twunk body before his modification, but I'm sure he's doing great now :) I realize that you keep the heroes in their costumes as an extra humiliation, unlike the Azure Defender. A shame to keep their sexy hero bodies hidden like that, but the Subduer probably enjoys it better that way. Feathertouch is definitely going to do a number on Gold Force, and I can't wait to see what happens.

7/25/23, 8:42 AM
@[Larry](/user/show/494946) Thanks Larry! Yes; The Subduer has learned his lesson after devouring The Azure Defender too swiftly. Now he keeps his new 'treats' in their wrappers until he is ready to savor them,... After all, any collectible should be kept pristine and in their original packaging to maintain value! Oh, and don't rule Gold Force out yet! He's managed to escape and has time to regroup, only now he's even more determined!

7/25/23, 2:44 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Gold Force is going to have a rude awakening when he finds out his helicarrier has been stolen. Inviting more heroes almost seems like a disastrous step to take, but will Gold Force sacrifice even more heroes to save his man?

7/25/23, 2:51 PM
@[Larry](/user/show/494946) Who knows what will happen? :3
7/25/23, 2:08 PM
This was one of the best I’ve read in a long, long time. Bravo!
7/25/23, 2:06 PM
I really wish I was around in the days of SlaveNow so I could've read all your other stories as well... this is some of the best erotic slave fiction I've ever seen and it's a shame it's all lost to history :(
7/25/23, 9:13 AM
This was really great, I can't wait to see how this continue.
7/25/23, 4:00 AM
Bravo! A fun concept. I encourage you to keep at it.

7/25/23, 8:37 AM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) Thank you very much! I'm already working on the next chapter!
7/25/23, 7:46 AM
Incredible opening chapter. Hyped for the next.
The Sugar Cat
7/25/23, 3:50 AM
Like it so far, see some good potential: wild west humiliation! I'm interested in seeing just what sort of embarrassing hijinx are in store. From the sound of the graffiti, the two of them are about to become a couple of cowards, which is definitely an interesting fate for two rough and ready heroes. Only critique is a technical one. Not really sure where the old man comes into play, it is just suddenly stated that they two of them cannot understand "what the old man was yelling at them." Up until that point, I wasn't aware there was an old man watching them.

7/25/23, 6:22 AM
@The Sugar Cat There's lots of humilliation coming for our brave heroes, Sugar Cat! If humiliation is your thing, I think you're gonna like the rest of the story :yum:. Thanks a lot for telling me, about that, you made me realize there's a missing part of the story!! :flushed: I'll fix it and hopefully it will be visible soon. It's not too big, but it explain a bit more of the scene. Thank you! :blush: