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8/10/23, 12:40 PM
thanks for the feedback lol, agree first crack and rushed through. Part 2 is coming and made sure to do a cleanup
8/6/23, 11:47 PM
Surreal story and very hot. The doctor leveraging the new gay guy in the group to help manage the condition is a win for everyone.

8/8/23, 7:22 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thank you for your kind words. Love your work especially Good Behaviour. Glad you picked up the surreality I wanted to something feverish about how through losing control the main character comes to terms with his deires. More to come

8/10/23, 11:55 AM
@[Whitechap_e1](/user/show/219792) Thank you! You definitely accomplished the feverish sort of feeling. He had no idea whether he was awake or dreaming and we're not totally sure either. But, he found his purpose and accepted his desires.
8/10/23, 10:51 AM
I'm loving these stories, but they could use a bit more careful proofreading; it randomly switches from a 3rd person narrator to a 1st person "I" at one point (then promptly switches back). Also, although I liked the symbolism of the scene with the rings, it also made me laugh, because I was imagining that the men's 9-inch dicks had to be incredibly skinny if they were the same girth as a woman's ring finger.
8/10/23, 9:19 AM
This is an amazing derailment from the previous chapters. Having no concept of subtext, or even connotations of English words is genuinely hysterical in the best way. I love Abe much lmao.
Jake
8/10/23, 9:14 AM
I’m in love with this series. Can’t wait for the next part!
8/10/23, 5:33 AM
Hot, too bad it was not happening for real on Onlyfans, to watch it.
8/10/23, 4:54 AM
Si hay adultos siendo esclavos de jovenes, me apunto
8/10/23, 2:26 AM
Great start……wondering where it goes?
8/9/23, 2:50 PM
Yeah, great imagery, great use of dominance, and I love that we're only getting a piece of what's happening to Jason, and can fill in how he's being controlled ourselves. I can't wait for more, is your plan to release during the weekends? I'd love to know when we'll get the next chapter...I crave it so! What I like from this chapter: I love how Marcos is using intimacy and physical contact to tease and dominate his roommate. The thong scene was amazing, I love that throughout the story, Jason doesn't really know or articulate what's happening to him...he's just experiencing it in real time, and feels dominated by his smaller roommate's powers. Can't wait to see what Marcos does to him next!

8/10/23, 1:55 AM
@[Enthralledo](/user/show/10022568) Hey my original plan was to translate and edit the whole story over the weekend, but somethings came up and I had to delay that. But I already submited the next chapters and I'm checking up the final ones. So you just have to wait until they get approve
8/10/23, 1:52 AM
I really hope you will continue the story soon :) really like it
8/10/23, 12:50 AM
I keep returning to this story every now and then cause it's so hot! Such a shame it never got continued
8/10/23, 12:35 AM
Very hot! Would love to see a continuation of this. Maybe Ry’s next big role
8/9/23, 11:55 PM
you are my new favorite.
8/9/23, 3:32 PM
Oh wow another interesting chapter so many twist and turns. Im bouncing back and forth if i should cheer for Subduer or hope for his downfall. I wonder what will happen next since its the other war around now. Subduer got Goldforce and Feather is now free. I wonder who will save the heroes or be the next victim. And i enjoyed Siege and feel bad that his plan to save Gold is foiled. Cant wait to read the next one.

8/9/23, 9:51 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Ha, yeah,... it's a tough one, and you aren't alone there! On the one hand, I want Feather and Gold to be okay and share their happiness together. On the other,.... well,... I'm sure The Subduer wants the same for them! All they'd have to do is submit,... I hope you enjoy what's to come ;)
Anonymous
8/9/23, 9:21 PM
love this story cant wait for more
8/9/23, 8:46 PM
This is really getting good. Can't wait to see the next part!
8/9/23, 7:09 PM
I hope Levi gets Charlie. This was a very hot and erotic chapter.
8/9/23, 6:20 PM
The class seems like fun. Wish I was there. Also I wonder what will happen with the new Saint?
Nov 30, 2021
mic
8/9/23, 5:04 PM
fucking hot story!!! please write more and in next story collect hot white jocks , so everybody is happy
mic
8/9/23, 4:51 PM
fucking hot, please more, cant wait how the gamer gets more tricked, please trick more stoners and gamers
8/9/23, 4:39 PM
God if I could've experienced that I'd been in heaven. Thank-You for that.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
8/9/23, 3:44 PM
Incest is always a great basis for a story. The young son taking control of the household is also always a great basis. Including cuckolded mother in the mix made this especially hot. Waiting for the next chapter to see all that Drew has planned.
8/9/23, 3:35 PM
A good surprise to see. I love dilfs enslaved. Next stop is Grandpa Ken!
8/9/23, 3:05 PM
I hope the Saint get corrupted and join the fun
Elm
8/9/23, 3:02 PM
Me gusto! Siempre hay que apoyar las historias con papis jajaja. .
Anonymous
8/9/23, 1:44 PM
More clownification stories are always welcome! Don't let others tell you otherwise. If they don't like it they don't have to read it.
8/9/23, 12:31 PM
loved it
8/9/23, 12:09 PM
Loved it! Hope you write more with this kind of premise. I love brainwashing stories!
8/7/23, 1:27 AM
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8/7/23, 5:36 AM
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8/8/23, 11:37 AM
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8/8/23, 12:05 PM
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8/9/23, 11:13 AM
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8/9/23, 10:57 AM
Fuck that's hot Short and sweet Thanks for writing !