Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/2/16, 10:12 PM
I need to get those trainginfiles 😀
Anonymous
11/2/16, 7:37 PM
I so wanna see the chapter StoryLove mentioned. Please consider it!!! I totally wanna see more of this story
Anonymous
11/2/16, 5:34 PM
Very hot, just love the dehumanizing aspect of the story, and the sealing up in rubber part as well. Can't wait to see whats going to happen to Derek! And surely aren't people going to start asking questions about Devon & co.
Anonymous
11/2/16, 4:46 PM
Wonderful settings, very intriguing. Reminded me another great series " The Change" by gymmuscle.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
11/2/16, 4:32 PM
Reminds. Not remits. Sigh.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
11/2/16, 4:31 PM
Damn cool. Remits me of the old mysteries (Agetha Christie, etc.) where a group of people slowly get bumped off one by one. But here they are bumped off. They are being converted / changed. And the whole one twin has now been taken angle is so very hot.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
11/2/16, 4:25 PM
Well done. Great wrap up.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
11/2/16, 4:08 PM
Very good story. Well done. Lots of cool angles to explore if you continue (which many of us hope you do).
Anonymous
11/2/16, 3:39 PM
Would also love to see Alex really make the cop's really corrupt, turning them into real 'bad guy's, who get their kicks beating-up others, robbing, breaking & entering, etc. Since Alex was into drugs, they could become drug pushers as well ! ???????
Anonymous
11/2/16, 3:28 PM
I totally agree with the comment of StoryLove Write about a married hunk in awere mode! And also, i fantasy about a big "party" of many rich people that hire many "aware guys" to act like their waiters or like their couple and present them to their friends.
Anonymous
11/2/16, 2:55 PM
Wow...what a great story...Love the "Sliders" references
Master C's slave
11/2/16, 1:34 PM
wish i was either Matt or Nate and be taken over by Jax the Satyr
Anonymous
11/2/16, 12:14 PM
part three PLEEEAAASSSSEEE
hypnothrill@yahoo.com
11/2/16, 9:47 AM
Wow! You are a longtime fan, LongtimeFan, because I didn't even realize I was reusing the name "Coach Briggs." I was actually thinking about calling the character "Coach Riggs," but something about the name "Briggs" must just appeal to my subconscious. And yes, I enjoy doing the slow build of erotic tension...and over the next two sections, the erotic content of this story should build and build.
Anonymous
11/2/16, 9:26 AM
This is an awesome story! Can't wait to read more!
LongtimeFan
11/2/16, 7:43 AM
Me again! This is another great story--as the above poster said, the slow transformation is incredibly hot. Plus, the way the drugs are affecting the players one by one, spreading gradually...yes. Also, fun little question: you mention that a "Coach Briggs" has left the school in the first part of the story; that's the same name as the coach in "Musclehead: Tyler's Journal" ("Coach Briggs came out in nothing but these tiny blue satin shorts..."). Was that intentional? Or do you just like the name? :p
Bateriam
11/2/16, 7:20 AM
Hey Man. Really liked your story. Made me hard more than once. You handled the mind control well It mixed the fear element with the satyr(s) not being aggressively violent. He/They did not simply "plow into" the satyr-to-be to finalize the transformations.
StoryLove321
11/2/16, 5:41 AM
I loved this concept for the story! Please write more! I'll be looking forward to it! Personally could we see (out of the options you wrote above) A Young, Married Hunk with Kids on "aware" mode! OMG something like he'd leave in the middle of family dinner or better yet... his KID'S SCHOOL PLAY in the MIDDLE OF HIS KID'S PERFORMANCE!!!I would LOVE to read that! that's literally my FAVORITE thing but aren't a lot of stories like that... if you know any more stories like that let me know :D
Anonymous
11/2/16, 5:16 AM
It's the slow transformation that makes it hot!!
Anonymous
11/2/16, 4:01 AM
Excellent! Perfect End to a great series! Really enjoyed every bit of it!
Anonymous
11/2/16, 3:41 AM
Oh, it's so chilling... love this kind of thrilling stories. Choosing a third-person narrative makes the story really cold-blooded and looks so effective plus hot!!
11/2/16, 2:39 AM
Awesome!! Keep it going!!!
Anonymous
11/2/16, 2:37 AM
Spectacular story! Great job! The perfect amount of brainwash and mc, and of course, I always love a good hairy transformation! Well done
bimarguynj
11/2/16, 2:04 AM
Thanks for a great story enjoyed it very much The offer to let Matt turn Nate over was excellent Look forward to more from you Would love to see a follow up of them in their new lives sometime down the road
bklyn_cub
11/2/16, 1:54 AM
Mmmmm, both guys fussy about their appearance for different reasons and in different ways -- a hot story!! *catcall*
nyjogger4e@aol.com
11/2/16, 12:33 AM
I was rock hard during the hypnotic seduction - what a great story!
M.
11/2/16, 12:05 AM
Great story and I really love the ending! Keep on writing. I can't wait to read your next story.
Anonymous
11/1/16, 10:18 PM
great work! loved the story and mental changes. Looking forward to your next story!
UchihaDEMS
11/1/16, 9:02 PM
Mark's Boys, oh boy, I do remember that, it was one of the hottest stories I had ever read. I liked your story (btw, you put wife instead of gf in one opportunity). This can continue and I would love to continue reading. Keep it up.
Oct 24, 2016
Titan
11/1/16, 3:22 PM
Wow! This is great...... please,, please continue.