Recent Comments

12/9/16, 4:24 PM
Seems a GREAT series is incoming! A "not so bad" villain with secret intentions, what will he do? And I sense a touch of romance here! Hope there will be a happy ending.
Guyinyourhead
12/9/16, 3:58 PM
Oh come on! It's 2016, if you can't deal your sub having a girlfriend or two and maybe even involved her or them as a submissive in your play occasionally, you really do have issues that need to be attended to.
Anonymous
12/9/16, 1:22 PM
Sería genial que abrieras un blog con tus historias! son buenísimas! (y, si aceptas sugerencias, podrías hacer alguna más sobre famosos, jejej)
Anonymous
12/9/16, 11:21 AM
Happy 1 year !!!
Anonymous
12/9/16, 11:15 AM
Huh imagine matpat doing a game theory on this XD
TimNJ
12/9/16, 9:48 AM
I love this story and I'm actually hoping that they really get together, lol.
Anonymous
12/9/16, 9:35 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY! Please keep the Hímringyó series going.
steve10185@hotmail.com
12/9/16, 8:27 AM
But is LeatherBear truly on the receiving end or is he about to enslave Jack -- damn I love stories where the tables are turned!
Anonymous
12/9/16, 7:51 AM
Another great chapter.keep it coming, PLEASE!!
12/9/16, 5:40 AM
This is the best story I have read on here in a while. Love the attention to detail you've put into the world and characters; brilliant. Looking forward to reading more.
Anonymous
12/9/16, 5:06 AM
Who the hell died in this story? Oh wait no one, so shut the hell up about it
Anonymous
12/9/16, 4:38 AM
First I want to say that I find this series very hot and I love reading it! But one question... Why have a whole part about this Tyler character then never mention him again? I was looking forward to the smart straight nerd being turned into a dumb gay whore haha
bimarguy
12/9/16, 4:14 AM
Any chance for a follow up on this Noticed Gino's dad is not mentioned now Gino is Inuus it would be fun
Anonymous
12/9/16, 1:19 AM
Sick. Fucking sick, nasty perverted disgusting filth with no socially redeeming value- keep up the good work. Reading this makes me wish this game actually existed, and l could become the next Himringyo.
Anonymous
12/9/16, 1:17 AM
Baralai, you're one of my favorite authors on here! I love all your series and the Himringyo stories are always fun, but this one is definitely the best yet!
Anonymous
12/9/16, 12:58 AM
This was so hot! Loved all the daddy, cub and leather stuff in this chapter. Please keep writing more! Maybe with some pup play?
Anonymous
12/8/16, 10:11 PM
Nice to see the LeatherBear on the receiving end. Personally I'd enjoy if he was finding himself acting less and less, and actually being redeemed... but we shall see. I'm curious as to the Director's powers, now.
Anonymous
12/8/16, 3:53 PM
Woof
TimNJ
12/8/16, 6:42 AM
Yes Hypnothrill you are right, I was wrong. The weak plot device has involved presumed deaths from bus and plane crashes, either way I lose interest at that point in the story.
Anonymous
12/8/16, 6:29 AM
This is amazing!
Anonymous
12/8/16, 6:19 AM
The story line is similar to the other stories, and yet, it is so fucking hot. I love these stories.
Willie Cici
12/8/16, 6:07 AM
Thanks for the comments, especially TimNJ and Hypnothrill, who are always encouraging. Lately, I've been finding these Tumblr pics and letting my mind wander. I won't apologize for the finished product. I'm writing for myself. For those who enjoy the read, you're welcome. For those who don't, keep reading. Maybe I'll write something that you will enjoy. At least the pics I'm posting along with the stories are some smokin' hot guys. Enjoy!!
Anonymous
12/8/16, 6:01 AM
Women are a part of the world. They have brothers -- hot sexy brothers -- who want to dominate and control their sister's hot boyfriends. I loved how you tied that together. And the ending, where you leave us hanging with the other brother coming over. Maybe Teddy's a step brother. The story is fine. The whole teddy bear thing is a stitch. It didn't upset to have a woman in the story. The mind control sex toy boyfriend was hot. It didn't piss me off. As for killing plans of people, I don't remember any story you've written that involves that story line. Your stories have some twisted aspect that makes one think. Like those stories you write with the devil. They're a stitch.
Anonymous
12/8/16, 5:10 AM
Super freaking hot!
12/8/16, 4:14 AM
Amazing, never stop adding to this series
wolfjock
12/8/16, 3:48 AM
Even before I read it, I knew I was in for something great. You never fail to deliver, man. This is top tier stuff - one for the history books.
Anonymous
12/8/16, 3:15 AM
HOT! Definately want more
hypnothrill@yahoo.com
12/8/16, 1:26 AM
In response to TimNJ's comment above, I can't recall anyone writing a story where whole teams were ACTUALLY killed in bus and plane crashes. I can think of several stories (including one I wrote) where teams were PRESUMED dead in such crashes but were actually alive. That's a very different situation. I understand that everyone has their "triggers," but reading comprehension is important.
TimNJ
12/7/16, 9:21 PM
Well it looks like you gave me a new fetish to get off to!! The hung reluctant boyfriend being transformed into a mindless baby talking whore was hot!!! One more thing.... While I would have preferred the Dad to the sister it did not bother me at all in comparison to other writers (not Willie CiCi ) killing off entire teams in bus and plane crashes. Now that an almost an entire team was killed in a plane crash in real life, Ihope that plot "device" is retired.
Anonymous
12/7/16, 8:06 PM
Love it. Super hot story.