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8/2/23, 1:52 AM
I hope someday someone will write a story about how a hypnotist or a person with the power of mind control unconsciously tries to take control of another person in order to make him his sexual partner. But this man turns out to be suffering from a split personality, and he has many personalities, like Billy Milligan. And in the end, the Hypnotist thinks that he has taken control of this person, but he does not know that he could not completely take control of him, but took control of only one personality. As a result, other personalities unite and "teach" how to take revenge on the hypnotist for trying to enslave)

8/10/23, 2:12 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) You can be the one to write that story, Zander!
8/2/23, 1:04 AM
Thank you so much for this amazing and inspiring story. I believe that sooner or later Gabriel will fall because of his arrogance and character, as his father did. Sooner or later he will meet his end, just like his father. It's only a matter of time before his next victim is smarter and more successful than his other victims he has enslaved, used as toys (ruining their lives) and abandoned. When this person is found (when the time comes), he will be finished (I'm afraid to imagine what such a person can do to him).

8/10/23, 2:11 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thanks Zander. Gabriel is certainly not immune to all his past behavior catching up to him.
8/1/23, 9:41 PM
Lovely series of vignettes. Really liked this idea.

8/10/23, 2:10 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thanks absman. They were fun to write.
8/1/23, 9:22 PM
I hope you will continue this series. It‘s really hot. I really appreciate your work. Would also like to se more suited content too.

8/10/23, 2:09 PM
@[Suitlover](/user/show/10017376) Thanks Suitlover. Suits are cool. Although the series is not likely to continue, Gabriel might reappear at some point.
8/1/23, 2:24 PM
This was like a tasting menu prepared by a master chef! I thoroughly enjoyed every 'course.'

8/10/23, 2:08 PM
@[stimle](/user/show/969716) Thanks stimle. I'm honored for the opportunity to have served you this menu.
7/31/23, 7:32 PM
As always a great story. I especially liked the ending because it is open to Florian and closed to Jan (because he was already enslaved by Florian). We do not know what Florian will do next, whether he will take someone else under control or not, or maybe he already enslaved someone before meeting Jan? The ending of this story allows us to fantasize about the future of the characters in this story.

8/10/23, 2:07 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thanks Zander. Yes, the story covered only the trip itself, it's anybody's guess what happens after that.
Tanner
7/31/23, 1:47 PM
Great story! Loved the slow build up. Thanks for the work that you do.

8/10/23, 2:06 PM
@Tanner Thanks Tanner. I'm trying different things, like this slow build up.
8/10/23, 1:20 PM
Good story with a great premise but I felt some parts were rushed like the smoking bit as there were not many details given about that part of his transformation.
Anonymous
8/10/23, 12:53 PM
I need to be Sterling !
8/10/23, 12:40 PM
thanks for the feedback lol, agree first crack and rushed through. Part 2 is coming and made sure to do a cleanup
8/6/23, 11:47 PM
Surreal story and very hot. The doctor leveraging the new gay guy in the group to help manage the condition is a win for everyone.

8/8/23, 7:22 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thank you for your kind words. Love your work especially Good Behaviour. Glad you picked up the surreality I wanted to something feverish about how through losing control the main character comes to terms with his deires. More to come

8/10/23, 11:55 AM
@[Whitechap_e1](/user/show/219792) Thank you! You definitely accomplished the feverish sort of feeling. He had no idea whether he was awake or dreaming and we're not totally sure either. But, he found his purpose and accepted his desires.
8/10/23, 10:51 AM
I'm loving these stories, but they could use a bit more careful proofreading; it randomly switches from a 3rd person narrator to a 1st person "I" at one point (then promptly switches back). Also, although I liked the symbolism of the scene with the rings, it also made me laugh, because I was imagining that the men's 9-inch dicks had to be incredibly skinny if they were the same girth as a woman's ring finger.
8/10/23, 9:19 AM
This is an amazing derailment from the previous chapters. Having no concept of subtext, or even connotations of English words is genuinely hysterical in the best way. I love Abe much lmao.
Jake
8/10/23, 9:14 AM
I’m in love with this series. Can’t wait for the next part!
8/10/23, 5:33 AM
Hot, too bad it was not happening for real on Onlyfans, to watch it.
8/10/23, 4:54 AM
Si hay adultos siendo esclavos de jovenes, me apunto
8/10/23, 2:26 AM
Great start……wondering where it goes?
8/9/23, 2:50 PM
Yeah, great imagery, great use of dominance, and I love that we're only getting a piece of what's happening to Jason, and can fill in how he's being controlled ourselves. I can't wait for more, is your plan to release during the weekends? I'd love to know when we'll get the next chapter...I crave it so! What I like from this chapter: I love how Marcos is using intimacy and physical contact to tease and dominate his roommate. The thong scene was amazing, I love that throughout the story, Jason doesn't really know or articulate what's happening to him...he's just experiencing it in real time, and feels dominated by his smaller roommate's powers. Can't wait to see what Marcos does to him next!

8/10/23, 1:55 AM
@[Enthralledo](/user/show/10022568) Hey my original plan was to translate and edit the whole story over the weekend, but somethings came up and I had to delay that. But I already submited the next chapters and I'm checking up the final ones. So you just have to wait until they get approve
8/10/23, 1:52 AM
I really hope you will continue the story soon :) really like it
8/10/23, 12:50 AM
I keep returning to this story every now and then cause it's so hot! Such a shame it never got continued
8/10/23, 12:35 AM
Very hot! Would love to see a continuation of this. Maybe Ry’s next big role
8/9/23, 11:55 PM
you are my new favorite.
8/9/23, 3:32 PM
Oh wow another interesting chapter so many twist and turns. Im bouncing back and forth if i should cheer for Subduer or hope for his downfall. I wonder what will happen next since its the other war around now. Subduer got Goldforce and Feather is now free. I wonder who will save the heroes or be the next victim. And i enjoyed Siege and feel bad that his plan to save Gold is foiled. Cant wait to read the next one.

8/9/23, 9:51 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Ha, yeah,... it's a tough one, and you aren't alone there! On the one hand, I want Feather and Gold to be okay and share their happiness together. On the other,.... well,... I'm sure The Subduer wants the same for them! All they'd have to do is submit,... I hope you enjoy what's to come ;)
Anonymous
8/9/23, 9:21 PM
love this story cant wait for more
8/9/23, 8:46 PM
This is really getting good. Can't wait to see the next part!
8/9/23, 7:09 PM
I hope Levi gets Charlie. This was a very hot and erotic chapter.
8/9/23, 6:20 PM
The class seems like fun. Wish I was there. Also I wonder what will happen with the new Saint?
Nov 30, 2021
mic
8/9/23, 5:04 PM
fucking hot story!!! please write more and in next story collect hot white jocks , so everybody is happy
mic
8/9/23, 4:51 PM
fucking hot, please more, cant wait how the gamer gets more tricked, please trick more stoners and gamers
8/9/23, 4:39 PM
God if I could've experienced that I'd been in heaven. Thank-You for that.