Recent Comments

slave499508824
2/10/18, 7:45 PM
I want a red cock ring for this slave
2/10/18, 7:39 PM
I seriously enjoy your work! Please keep it up!
Feb 8, 2018
zim
2/10/18, 1:52 PM
Love to read the prequels.
Anonymous
2/10/18, 1:32 PM
This is just too hot! Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks alot for these awesome stories!
Anonymous
2/10/18, 1:18 PM
so hot!
Feb 8, 2018
Anonymous
2/10/18, 10:56 AM
Quite an evil twist. Love it!!
Anonymous
2/10/18, 9:15 AM
Wish we could see how Bobby had changed during the process. We only know through Eric and Conner’s view.
Anonymous
2/10/18, 5:43 AM
If I may ask, Robinhood70, is this already a finished story being staggered or is this an ongoing story that youre curreny writing?
Anonymous
2/10/18, 5:08 AM
It’s great to read this after seeing the Venom movie trailer : $
Anonymous
2/10/18, 4:03 AM
I wish the Great Ones also like brainwash and forced growth. Even prestine preppy genius boy needs to become a dirty jock whore, controlled via his cock. Yummy.
Anonymous
2/10/18, 3:56 AM
We are loyal to the Great Ones and hope you do xoxoxo
Anonymous
2/10/18, 3:24 AM
Dr. Wegner could recruit Bobby or another jock as one of his sadistic aide!!
Anonymous
2/10/18, 3:16 AM
Love new Bobby!!
Anonymous
2/10/18, 3:10 AM
No women? What will happen next? Compelling start!
Anonymous
2/10/18, 1:33 AM
Glad you decided to keep this going
Anonymous
2/10/18, 12:32 AM
Hope to see more stories like this piece, especially with different circumstances
Anonymous
2/9/18, 10:19 PM
Definitely a hot idea! Ray should target a really well-hung jock and zap him until he's sporting a super-cute tiny little dicklet jutting up from his groin. It'd be even hotter if that change happened first so there was a delicious contrast between his muscular body and his cute little junk.
Anonymous
2/9/18, 10:10 PM
Amazing chapter. Very well-written and well-thought-out.
Musiker
2/9/18, 10:08 PM
Great concept, excellent writing! ...... I’m on Team Bazz.......
Anonymous
2/9/18, 10:04 PM
good
2/9/18, 9:07 PM
Thanks, guys, I appreciate the compliments! Oh and the second link for Mr. C was working last night, but apparently it no longer does. Here's another copy of it: https://typeset-beta.imgix.net/elite-daily/2017/05/08034817/logan-shirtless-gilmore-girls.jpg
Anonymous
2/9/18, 5:29 PM
Another great chapter! Thanks for keeping this up, and for keeping up an amazing pace with the updates. Probably shouldn't be finding Diamond as hot as I do - but love the character and the descriptions. Can't wait to see what he's gonna do from here.
Anonymous
2/9/18, 5:27 PM
A nice change of pace to have something written as a full story. And now readers are even more on edge waiting for the next/final chapter!
Anonymous
2/9/18, 4:16 PM
I get what others are saying, and sometimes depending on the story it can get to me, but mostly I like to focus on the changes themselves, the problem is when the only change from hero to corrupted hero is straight to gay. Would be nice to see a story like this where the hero is already gay but shy and semi-closeted and "nice" and turns into a bad boy or a slut. That said I liked this story! Would love to see a continuation where Parker bleaches his hair blond like Eddie, frequents leather bars shirtless under the symbiote leather jacket and has public sex in the bathrooms, is a bottom boy for petty criminals, becomes a lazy stoner, uses his power for selfish reasons
Anonymous
2/9/18, 3:25 PM
wow what a heavy plot chapter. Solid narrative even without the sex. Still, looking forward to the sex next chapter ;)
Anonymous
2/9/18, 12:32 PM
Can't you corrupt him without breaking or stealing antiques?
screamingmoist
2/9/18, 12:07 PM
Thanks for reading everyone! @longtimefan - it seems like they’d be annoyed when someone asks them to do something that they could do for themselves.
Anonymous
2/9/18, 10:17 AM
Great addition! Not many stories show the conflict in the controller and their desire to fix things Most of the time they are just overcome by the power and darkness and IT makes them unfeeling almighty
LongtimeFan
2/9/18, 9:23 AM
What a great continuation of the story! Having read lots of tales of complete surrender to power, it’s interesting to see a character realizing the ramifications of his errors and trying to amend them...while still getting joy out of mind control. Can’t wait to see more. Great job! :)