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2/13/18, 10:45 PM
Absman420 here! In my original concept, Tino wasn’t quite so innocent. But having Tino as a conspirator wrecks the loving relationship he has w Mick. It’s rare we see married couples in these type of stories, so I wanted to keep it nice. Besides, the last scene has a better punch w Tino as an innocent.
Blindseer0
2/13/18, 8:42 PM
Interesting concept and well written story. On one hand i feel bad for Mick. Saul ruined him once, then uses him a second time and basically takes away his free will. On the other hand, i like the karma that a guy who let his dick define him is now completely controlled by his dick. Definitely feel sorry for Tino though. If i was to continue this (definitely don't have the time) Tino would discover that he can now only cum from Mick's dick, but his cum soothes Mick to a state where he can sort of travel. They start travelling, with issues, and the effect wears off. Mick tops someone, and transforms them, and that person tops Tino, causing him to cum. Before that person can rampage Tino uses his cum on that guy and Mick. Mick is soothed and the other guy is now stablized (mind back and no longer infectious). Tino gets Mick to Saul, Mick tops Saul, and Tino gets the antidote, leaving Saul to be the hyper muscle top with no mind. But that would just be me.
Anonymous
2/13/18, 7:30 PM
continue, please
HyperMuscleMonster
2/13/18, 7:09 PM
Wow, that wrapped up fast! When Axel said the folks in his community wouldn't help, I figured we'd be looking at a 2-man infiltration into Diamond's kingdom. The musk solving everything is almost, yeah, a bit too deus ex machina. I'm sorry if my comments on the last chapter were poorly received, I really did enjoy the story overall, I was just disappointed that the masculinization and mutation elements seemed to fall away in significance. (The line about a "boner killer" was mostly joking around.) I really liked the piercings as a social trend in the mountain community, it seemed to hint at either tribalization of different survivor communities or a further trend of social deviation from the pre-virus baseline. I wish we'd seen more of that kind of expression.
Anonymous
2/13/18, 3:58 PM
I'm really sorry this has ended. What a great series. Loved the feminization aspects too!
2/13/18, 3:26 PM
Concerning your Author's Note: spoken like a true artist of words...sometimes it takes working on another project to spark inspiration on another. Concerning your work: I am a huge fan and you never let me down. Thanks!
ExhibSlut
2/13/18, 2:56 PM
I’m oddly disappointed in the ending. It feels too much like deus ex machina. I thought the hierarchy of musk would have overridden any feelings of love and eventually turned the society into a giant anthill. Darker but more sexually interesting, no? :-)
LongtimeFan
2/13/18, 2:29 PM
Dear M. Green, What a great ending! I do like it when things end happily. :) And this was a fascinating story—you wove an extremely large cast of characters together naturally, made them well-rounded, and looked at the whole picture of what a mutating world might look like. Excellent work! :D
Anonymous
2/13/18, 12:22 PM
Love this story so much! How does the 'zombie' facility work? On musk? Or with the eyes in some way? Totally want see inside. It'd be hot to see some resistance to Diamond's power - but not too much - secretly holding out that he will own Bazz
2/13/18, 11:29 AM
Absman420 here! If the worst criticism of my erotica is that it’s too cerebral, I’m ok. I like to think. I also like to read. No matter how good something is conceptually, if the story’s poorly constructed, it won’t do its job and get me off. Erotica is about mood — can’t have mood without words — so never fear. If there’s one thing I got, it’s words!
M
2/13/18, 8:18 AM
Hey absman. Thank you for your reply. I read and re-read your stories multiple times and while they are cerebral, they make me hard every time. I jerked off often to them. If some people they think they are too cerebral, Tough Shit. Please keep on writing and making it us hard
Anonymous
2/13/18, 7:13 AM
^^ you take yourself far too seriously, ""masculiphile"", femme-phobic, lol ok buddy. I'm not the biggest fan of the feminisation stuff either, but it's the author's story and you're not the only reader. Might not appeal to you, but it does appeal to others. Calling it a "total boner-killer" is unnecessary. Just skip past it like I do. Not that hard.
Anonymous
2/13/18, 6:08 AM
Loving this more and more as it keeps going. The corruption of Neville was so hot. Can't wait for more
HyperMuscleMonster
2/13/18, 4:49 AM
Gah, this is such a good story. (Though I hope the transformation aspect isn't over with... I'd love to see them 'evolve' further.) Gotta say, though, Diamond's sex slaves are both a cerebral and sexual downer for me. The feminizing aspect is entirely distasteful to me as a masculiphile gay man. (I admit to being a little femme-phobic, but here it feels somewhat justified.) And then, the knowledge that these walking sex-dolls are/were other people who were forcibly re-written is just despicable. (Plus, it feels like the only sexual action we've had is Diamond and his toys for the last few chapters. Total boner-killer.)
2/13/18, 4:18 AM
that Diamond just couldn't leave well enough alone .......... great story! I look forward to seeing where this goes!
relaxdreamfollow
2/13/18, 3:54 AM
great story and looking forward to the next twist
Anonymous
2/13/18, 3:48 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!
2/12/18, 10:45 PM
absman420 here -- thanks M! Often, I come up with the climactic idea first (sometimes it's an image, sometimes a situation -- always it's a sexual fantasy) and then I try to figure out a way to get there that "works". Ironically, the biggest criticism of my work is that it's too cerebral for jerk-off fodder.
M
2/12/18, 10:39 PM
I'm so glad that you're back Absman. Your stories are so well thought and written. I love every single one of them.
Trick
2/12/18, 8:30 PM
These stories were always my favorite from Psychtales. There's a definite pace difference between the two stories, so I've always liked Mike's Diary a little more (just personal preference). I think your the adaptation for the first story was great, so I'm pleased to see you went ahead and posted this anyways. Looking forward to the next installment.
Anonymous
2/12/18, 7:00 PM
Excellent!!!
Anonymous
2/12/18, 7:00 PM
Wicked and hot! Loved it!!
2/12/18, 6:47 PM
absman420 here! Thanks for the comments, Tattcub. I always feel like the set-up is my best thing. If I were on a writing team, I would always get exposition. (Although, honestly, I think this is my best title in a long time!) Like I said, I have a couple of ideas for separate chapters, but no desire to write the whole novella.... Jump on in and write one!
Anonymous
2/12/18, 6:10 PM
Great thank you!
2/12/18, 6:02 PM
Hole-eeeeeeee (See what I did there?)shit! That was fun and hot as all buggery. Love this idea and so glad you're hanging about Absy (You don't mind if I call you Absy do you ?) So glad you're back and feeling the urge. Absolutely inspiring me to have a go too. I might have a play with this world myself. Thanks so much.
mgreene70@yahoo.com
2/12/18, 4:16 PM
It's those olive green eyes and the musk...
2/12/18, 3:10 PM
... and he stole another man’s man. I finished reading the part where Sven tells Axel he’s lucky to have Neville and thought: I bet something bad is going to happen to Neville. I kind of wish I hadn’t been right. I like that part. Of course, the scene where Diamond takes Neville was hot. Along with the new names of the Diamond’s slaves. Asshole not acknowledging he ever had a different name was hot too. Did Diamond’s musk make him forget or is he just unwilling to contradict his master?
Anonymous
2/12/18, 2:43 PM
Any news on the next installment? Pretty please with a cherry on top?
fan
2/12/18, 1:15 PM
is this nuance? I LOVE! keep it up!
Anonymous
2/12/18, 1:12 PM
More stories please! Love the mindless baby talk of a muscle boy toy!