Recent Comments

stimle
6/10/18, 4:50 PM
Awesome story. Great plot, pacing and buildup.
Throne
6/10/18, 4:19 PM
Nice job on the transformations. I particularly liked the twink makeover of the narrator and how the piercings advanced it. Glad you allowed him to remember his old self the entire time.
Buffy67
6/10/18, 3:12 PM
Great story. Looking forward to further chapters
MalSkin
6/10/18, 3:09 PM
its good to see that you have put something new up on here. missed your writing . I always enjoy seeing cops taken down and well written how he was - look forward to new chapters
Apr 24, 2018
6/10/18, 1:54 PM
Thank you, and thanks for commenting! Brevity is something I try to work towards. Granted, it's not always the best choice for fiction, but I find it helps me focus.
6/10/18, 1:36 PM
It's definitely how it should be played, it's just lucky these guys had someone handy to teach them the rules. Thanks for the comments on these, too. I'm happy to hear people are enjoying them, and what they'd like to see. And not to worry, no game night is complete after just one game.
EdyRobles
6/10/18, 12:54 PM
Please continue, I am a fan of this series
Anonymous
6/10/18, 11:54 AM
is it a sequel to a ertic story with the same name? Great! please continue!!
Apr 23, 2018
Mr Cavanaugh
6/10/18, 8:59 AM
Absolutely loved this! I'm a big fan for "the villain wins" scenario and throwing in some identity theft where the Joker replaces Batman is even hotter so thank you for this great story. It's straight onto my annual list of favorite stories. I'm sure you're inundated with requests but something similar happening to Superman would be hot as hell.
Anonymous
6/10/18, 8:05 AM
Awesome. This is my jam. Always love your stuff, Hypnothrill, but if I could offer a suggestion of making the conversions a bit slower, with a bit more will-they-won't-they tension? Still enjoying this heaps.
Anonymous
6/10/18, 6:21 AM
A whole bunch of chapters of slow buildup then "bang bang all done"? ..... Sigh. x2 It was... IDK kind of predictible at the end
tomozco
6/10/18, 5:22 AM
Another hot one! Keep it up!
Apr 24, 2018
tomozco
6/10/18, 5:21 AM
Great story, TickledPink! Didn't get a chance to read some of your recent work until now, but totally enjoyed it! Concise and to the point, very hot! Love the innocent ass play! Thanks and looking forward to reading more of your work!
6/10/18, 2:45 AM
Honestly I just wanted to comment a second time to say that this is really a great idea. So go you for writing it.
Anonymous
6/10/18, 2:32 AM
So hot!!!!
Anonymous
6/10/18, 2:24 AM
I loved it!! Hokey and hot!!!
Anonymous
6/10/18, 12:49 AM
While the premise was good, the story needed a lot more editing and formatting. We also got the idea that all the guys were going to be converted, so maybe the story could have extended the conversion of a few guys rather than rush as many conversions as possible with basically no narrative. None of the guys were shown fighting it really.
Anonymous
6/9/18, 11:23 PM
A whole bunch of chapters of slow buildup then "bang bang all done"? ..... Sigh.
Anonymous
6/9/18, 9:02 PM
Really great build-up. Excited to see where things go next...
Anonymous
6/9/18, 8:59 PM
Take what these people say with a grain of salt. You'll never impress everyone. Find your own voice.
Anonymous
6/9/18, 8:58 PM
I thought this was awesome --the focus on the butt growth had me dying. Congratulations and can't wait to see the next one.
Nero
6/9/18, 7:25 PM
Dude I was just thinking about this story! Your happy endings have quickly become some of my favourite stuff on the site, and I can't wait to see what Dale's looks like.
Anonymous
6/9/18, 6:53 PM
Such a shame JR lost Paul.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
6/9/18, 5:42 PM
Isn't that how Twister is supposed to be played?
6/9/18, 5:28 PM
Hmm sexy. I really like the set up and I hope it leads to sex.
Anonymous
6/9/18, 2:54 PM
Waste of time to read
6/9/18, 2:08 PM
Oh that's hot. Love it. Would like more games. Expect containing assplay.
Anonymous
6/9/18, 1:56 PM
Great story Super descriptions Thanks
Anonymous
6/9/18, 12:33 PM
Please more games
Anonymous
6/9/18, 9:45 AM
Rude as s comments with no purpose other than 1:38