Recent Comments

6/11/18, 2:16 PM
Oh wow nifty. Nice ending. Nice story. Sweet and adorable and oh so enjoyable.
6/11/18, 2:04 PM
I really liked the concept you've set out here, and there's some great visuals. I do love a man in a mockery of a uniform. A couple of parts you've got different characters speaking in the same paragraph, which makes it a little confusing to follow, I think putting them on new lines would really help out with that. Very fun, thanks for sharing!
Anonymous
6/11/18, 1:50 PM
This is such a good story! Many thanks :)
Anonymous
6/11/18, 1:32 PM
Beautiful ending
Anonymous
6/11/18, 11:37 AM
Let's see what Brad will do in front of his master. Maybe Daniel or some others will be there,too
Anonymous
6/11/18, 11:26 AM
please continue the chapter
Jun 10, 2018
Anonymous
6/11/18, 9:26 AM
I really liked the first half or so but I felt the transition from caustic nerds to himbos was a little too swift. A lot of the description of the dumbing down I liked... I'd enjoy reading more extended material about that in another future story if you're so inclined.
6/11/18, 9:15 AM
I loved the ending!
6/11/18, 8:54 AM
Awesome story!
6/11/18, 8:54 AM
Cheers, the story was initially going to be a one-parter, but I had a few more ideas that amused me too much to leave. There'll be one more shortly.
Anonymous
6/11/18, 6:25 AM
Welcome back! You've had some of the best material on here and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. You've been missed!
Anonymous
6/11/18, 5:27 AM
Fantastic story
Anonymous
6/11/18, 5:26 AM
I like this concept! The best part is thinking about all the other fun childhood games that can be in store for them next!
Anonymous
6/11/18, 5:11 AM
Good first two chapters. I think I liked the first chapter a bit more (because Brad cumming on command is really hot), but this chapter also did not disappoint.
Jun 10, 2018
Anonymous
6/11/18, 5:08 AM
GREAT STORY!!! I agree with the previous comment about 3% (yes, he was referring to the TV show). This was definitely the type of story I enjoy. It reminds me a bit of "Hymringyo" and "Party Games".
Jun 10, 2018
IvorySilk
6/11/18, 3:55 AM
@Lenny I'm glad you enjoyed the change up. I'll do another Romera Manor soon, but I didn't want to seem like I only write one thing. XD And I'm glad you appreciated the diversity, cause that's something I personally felt we could use more of around here. @Anon I googled the 3% and came up with a TV series. If that's what you're referring to, I actually haven't watched it, but I'm not surprised that someone else came up with the same puzzle. It was literally the first thing that came to my mind when I thought computers, lol.
Anonymous
6/11/18, 3:53 AM
While a little shorter than the 1st too, those are definitely just as hot, hope this series don’t ends soon
Anonymous
6/11/18, 3:40 AM
So glad for you to keep this is story, this chapter was pretty hot, keep they coming!
Jun 10, 2018
Anonymous
6/11/18, 2:56 AM
I hope you liked the 3%. I noticed the puzzle from there
Anonymous
6/11/18, 1:42 AM
I like the muscle growth and that he kept his mind intact. Muscles and brains - very sexy!
bitchyboo19 (snapchat)
6/11/18, 1:28 AM
I need more!!! Please let me know when you update again! ...and Hopefully it is like 20 chapters tomorrow!
blankbot
6/11/18, 12:53 AM
PLEASE continue this story!
Max
6/11/18, 12:04 AM
Can't wait! I'm honestly really enjoying your storytelling - you really have a great sense of narrative flow that keeps the reader interested and a knack for characterization and dialogue. Of course the idea is super hot but it's a well-told story above all. Keep having fun with it!
6/10/18, 11:53 PM
Hiya Max. I want to keep this going just building in some other people as well as adding a few twists. Trust me the transformation stuff will still be there. I have plans for Mack and Jimmy don't worry. As well as Saul.
Max
6/10/18, 11:51 PM
Interesting! You're really good at writing exposition in a way that seems natural, same as in the earlier chapters. Retconning a character like this into the story is definitely a surprise but I see it opening up a lot of story possibilities. But I really hope we'll get a look at Mack and Jimmy's new lives as Priapus Pictures exclusives sooner rather than later. And I hope bringing Saul Bennett to justice doesn't bring the hot transformation fun here to too soon a conclusion. Are you looking to wrap it up in the next chapter or keep things going?
6/10/18, 10:42 PM
Oh cool. Nice stuff. I like how he kept the intelligence.
Anonymous
6/10/18, 10:28 PM
Really happy you are posting again. And an end to Possession with Intent would be fantastic!
EdyRobles
6/10/18, 10:14 PM
This is very hot, more please. A question, what happened to the order that Brad was given to ejaculate into his shoes
Jun 10, 2018
IvorySilk
6/10/18, 10:10 PM
Thank you both for your lovely feedback! And @LongtimeFan, I will take all those things into account for future stories and am really glad the escape room came out realistic as I've personally actually never gotten play any before. Hopefully in the near future. XD
Jun 10, 2018
Lenny
6/10/18, 10:07 PM
Love the escape room, nice change of venue. I also liked the diversity.