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Anonymous
5/26/18, 3:40 AM
Hot stuff! Would love to see some of these fleshed out a bit :)
Brock11752
5/26/18, 3:12 AM
I don't get it. There is so much here to work with. Definitely enough for a second chapter. Hopefully you'll change your mind.
OLIVER
5/26/18, 3:05 AM
WELL, I GUESS THAT MEANS I CAN STOP CHECKING HERE EVERY DAY FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. THANKS ANYWAY.
Anonymous
5/26/18, 2:12 AM
Finally someone writing good times too. Please keep writing more!!
Anonymous
5/25/18, 11:59 PM
Great start the endless stories could be fun
Anonymous
5/25/18, 10:22 PM
Great ideas
Anonymous
5/25/18, 9:29 PM
Wonderful story
LongtimeFan
5/25/18, 8:51 PM
AWOOGA! This stuff is hot hot hot, and scary, too—love the idea of there being nowhere to run. And I really liked the foreshadowing with the description of the mall’s stores as “empty, dried-out husks” sucked dry by Amazon. You’re amazing! Now, to your second question. Unsurprisingly, I looooovveee mind control movies (the fetish manifested early...) so here are a few possible suggestions! -“The Faculty”—this 90’s horror film is about aliens taking over a school and making everyone brainless drones...actually, it’s very similar to your own “Musclehead: Tyler’s Journal.” So maybe not that one. :p -“The Stuff”: 80’s Classic about an impossibly delicious goo that bubbles up from the ground. One bite makes people hopelessly addicted...and literally hollows them out. I can see you doing a lot with that! Plus the “stuff” pun writes itself. :p -“Disturbing Behavior”: a young James Marsden (HOOOOO boy) plays a “bad boy” at a school where the mindless preppy elite “Blue Ribbon” society seems to be abducting kids like him and turning them into identical, empty-headed popular kids. -“A Nightmare on Elm Street”: I can see you doing a lot with this one. A gay man is put to death in an ultra-conservative town, and uses his powers of dream manipulation to take revenge on his killers’ male descendants. Fall asleep and wake up a new man... Those are my thoughts, such as they are. Hope they help!
Anonymous
5/25/18, 8:22 PM
Make him be a part of the football team
Anonymous
5/25/18, 8:18 PM
Nice