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Jun 10, 2018
Anonymous
6/11/18, 2:56 AM
I hope you liked the 3%. I noticed the puzzle from there
Anonymous
6/11/18, 1:42 AM
I like the muscle growth and that he kept his mind intact. Muscles and brains - very sexy!
bitchyboo19 (snapchat)
6/11/18, 1:28 AM
I need more!!! Please let me know when you update again! ...and Hopefully it is like 20 chapters tomorrow!
blankbot
6/11/18, 12:53 AM
PLEASE continue this story!
Max
6/11/18, 12:04 AM
Can't wait! I'm honestly really enjoying your storytelling - you really have a great sense of narrative flow that keeps the reader interested and a knack for characterization and dialogue. Of course the idea is super hot but it's a well-told story above all. Keep having fun with it!
6/10/18, 11:53 PM
Hiya Max. I want to keep this going just building in some other people as well as adding a few twists. Trust me the transformation stuff will still be there. I have plans for Mack and Jimmy don't worry. As well as Saul.
Max
6/10/18, 11:51 PM
Interesting! You're really good at writing exposition in a way that seems natural, same as in the earlier chapters. Retconning a character like this into the story is definitely a surprise but I see it opening up a lot of story possibilities. But I really hope we'll get a look at Mack and Jimmy's new lives as Priapus Pictures exclusives sooner rather than later. And I hope bringing Saul Bennett to justice doesn't bring the hot transformation fun here to too soon a conclusion. Are you looking to wrap it up in the next chapter or keep things going?
6/10/18, 10:42 PM
Oh cool. Nice stuff. I like how he kept the intelligence.
Anonymous
6/10/18, 10:28 PM
Really happy you are posting again. And an end to Possession with Intent would be fantastic!
EdyRobles
6/10/18, 10:14 PM
This is very hot, more please. A question, what happened to the order that Brad was given to ejaculate into his shoes