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9/13/23, 11:41 AM
LOVED the way you used this part of the story to really hammer home Jafar's power over the sultan. SO hot. though i kept flipping back and forth between the Live and animated versions because the live sultan is hotter to imagine with the live jafar over the tiny man where he looks mostly like a ball.

9/15/23, 1:50 PM
@[Mind Labyrinth](/user/show/910312) Thanks, looking back at the scene years later where Jafar hypnotizes the Sultan (aka, the ball ;)) it's nuts how homo-erotic it is, thanks for reading me exorcising those scenes rather than just being teased by them.
9/13/23, 11:39 AM
i just found this story and i HAD to go through it. Jafar is one of my favorite villains to root for and it's just so obvious that he story had to cheat for the heroes to even have a chance of winning. LOVED this chapter where we establish Jafar's power over all the guards, highlighting the captain, but i keep mentally flipping between the animated versions and the live versions of the characters. i cannot wait for the whole story that goes through the whole movie! i feel like you'd do a FAR better job of it.

9/15/23, 1:48 PM
@[Mind Labyrinth](/user/show/910312) :innocent:
8/30/23, 3:37 PM
a note on vocabulary : "crone" isn't a generic term for old people, it's only for females, so it doesn't fit in the context of Jafar.

9/15/23, 1:46 PM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Thanks! I'll be mindful of that now.
9/15/23, 1:31 PM
Hi everyone! Sorry for the delay in getting this out. I got distracted with some major life events. I will be coming back to this series shortly to complete it. Thank you for your patience!
9/15/23, 12:18 PM
i got so involved... THANK YOU! GREAT fun
Anonymous
9/15/23, 11:08 AM
We’ll done! You have a gift. It’s truly an original piece. Good luck with the next stage. Looking forward to reading it. Best.MH
Anonymous
9/2/23, 2:28 PM
New Chapter this month?

9/3/23, 6:17 AM
@Anonymous Yes. There will be.

Anonymous
9/8/23, 11:07 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Can you give an exact date?🥺

Anonymous
9/14/23, 4:41 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Will the next chapter be in the end of the month or earlier?

9/14/23, 11:04 PM
@Anonymous Hi. I’m pretty busy at the moment so it might have to be by the end of the month.

Anonymous
9/15/23, 10:30 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) No problem, thanks for the great work! Please continue and hope that everything goes smoothly in your end ;)
9/15/23, 7:57 AM
For a series that halfway through its story was cooling down, running in circles and even losing its senses, this ending was incredible. Very good indeed. The last two chapters were very agile, objective and included epic battles of magic and a very interesting ending that leaves room for a sequel. I'm already looking forward to the next "season".

9/15/23, 8:11 AM
@[Sexcrab](/user/show/10027159) thank you so much for the comment, I would like to know which parts or chapters you found redundant or not well developed in order to improve my writing skills. It's the first time I've written such a long story so I still have a lot to improve and learn but I'm glad you liked it overall. P.s the first episode of the new series has already been published "The Carabinieri Academy", enjoy reading
9/15/23, 6:28 AM
Hope there won't be too long a wait for the next part. The suspense is killing me!
9/15/23, 3:59 AM
Fuck perfect chapter man! This was everything I wanted and more!! I vote 2 and 3!!
9/15/23, 3:38 AM
Thanks! And yes, my writing does deserve more praise, he he. Thanks for telling everyone! Two more chapters I think
9/15/23, 3:36 AM
Cada vez mas atrevido el chico... aunq la vdd me quede con ganas de saber mas en forma que le paso al papá :P aunque parece que habra mas al respecto en el proximo cap :3
9/15/23, 3:32 AM
A hot, hot story.
Chasm
9/15/23, 3:24 AM
Absolutely love your writing. You manage to make Travis’s transformation sound so appealing as he submits to black cock. This chapter was even better than the last. I don’t know how many more chapters you plan to write but I know however Travis ends up, I’ll enjoy it. Thank you for an incredibly hot story, this series and your writing deserves far more praise.
9/15/23, 3:20 AM
Wow, that's a lot of interest in the story, thanks everyone! I think I was unclear. GSS has a nifty "Choose-your-own-adventure" type branching-paths option to use for stories such as this. I have already written all 3 of the outcomes. I will post all 3 of them together after I finish editing, and you will get to chose which of the 3 to read. (Or you can read all 3 ;) )
9/14/23, 2:18 PM
Absolutely option #1. If there's a second choice, option #3 as well!

9/15/23, 2:57 AM
I agree with @[Terinas Tiger](/user/show/77652): option #1. If there’s a second choice, option #3
9/15/23, 2:44 AM
I've read both chapters of this so many times this week waiting eagerly for chapter 3!
9/15/23, 1:50 AM
Faggification of jocks is more interesting than further jockification of dudes who are already jocks, so, 1. If the other two were nerdy twinks first who got jockified, though, then that'd be better.
Sep 14, 2023
9/14/23, 11:24 PM
This was a lot of fun to read, especially the line "as if in an example of bad comic book writing." Thanks for sharing it.

Throne
9/15/23, 1:33 AM
@[Wrestlr](/user/show/1233047) And thank YOU for spotting and commenting on that. I couldn't resist including it and some other bad jokes.
Anonymous
9/15/23, 1:33 AM
i'm so mad i have to choose, they all sound great! but if i must, 1 is for sure my favorite and 3 is a close second. awesome so far, keep up the great work!
Sep 14, 2023
9/14/23, 11:29 AM
I cant find your deviantart profile anymore

Throne
9/14/23, 2:57 PM
@[zekekb11](/user/show/10004339) I was recently kicked off Deviant Art for posting extreme fetish material. The details are in my profile, here on GSS. It was quite a shock when it happened.

9/15/23, 1:29 AM
@Throne Oh gosh I'm sorry to hear you lost all that material! I made a point of dumping text copies into an archive I could get to after losing some of my early writing that was basically fanfiction for quite a while until I found it in the way back machine.

Throne
9/15/23, 1:32 AM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) I do have copies of my Fiction Mania stories, because I sent them as emails and then moved the originals to a file I created. Sadly, with Deviant Art, because I created everything right on their site, I have nothing.
Sep 14, 2023
9/15/23, 1:30 AM
I was very amused by this story. I could only think of it as someone deconstructing the utterly serious superheroes like The Boys and turning it into gay porn.
9/15/23, 1:03 AM
Fckk i want more!!
9/14/23, 9:53 PM
This is excellent!!! I hope there’s more to come!!
9/14/23, 9:21 PM
What a great story. I vote 2 and 3.
9/14/23, 8:26 PM
Maybe B with some A (Bodyguards in dress uniforms with tall black boots)
9/14/23, 6:44 PM
All are good, but 1 especially!