Recent Comments

8/21/18, 2:14 PM
Mice stuff. Sexy premise. Looks like it's gonna be fun.
malskin23@hotmail.com
8/21/18, 1:55 PM
I'm liking this story so far, seems a great deal of promise in t, so please carry it om
8/21/18, 1:50 PM
Oh my god, that was amazing! That story hit every one of turn ons! I love it when the tops are smaller and average while the subs are big and muscular. And the whole scene with delivery guy and the jockstrap was so hot! PLEASE keep updating this!
8/21/18, 3:41 AM
PupScout, I would vote for hole slut. Dude or group of dudes who need there holes played with constantly sound hot. Hehe
Aug 19, 2018
Fawkes
8/21/18, 2:57 AM
It's not often that I have to look up a word (cruciferous, by the way). I enjoyed this story- there was a lot of truth mixed into the fiction. I'm looking forward to the next one.
8/21/18, 1:08 AM
Great story! I liked how you narrowed in onto a specific body part and how it needed attention and made others crave only that. But you expanded too with some fucking and hole eating. Leaves the possibility of a continued series with future male patients becoming hole sluts, ball sluts, pit sluts, etc.
8/20/18, 8:47 PM
“Leave comments to validate me.” I can totally relate to that! I loved this story. I loved Cody’s cluelessness, I loved how the badge affected others, and I loved how it ended with Cody having a stud boyfriend. Thanks for writing and posting it!
Anonymous
8/20/18, 8:12 PM
Hot! Did not see that coming
Jun 4, 2015
Danielffsggggggggg ggggggx
8/20/18, 7:38 PM
Creative,too short.c...
Aug 19, 2018
Rodready1
8/20/18, 7:30 PM
You write really well - the quality shines in comparison to so much of what I find in here, and absolutely no disrespect to others when I say that. I follow you on Tumblr - I'm Rodready1 in there. Glad to see you posting here now, too.
Daniel
8/20/18, 7:14 PM
REALLY wanted to see at least 2 more slaves created !you'reGOOD dude, don't be afraid of expansion of your narrative, your olorful characters and imaginative descriptions can support it!! I.J.S .
Daniel
8/20/18, 6:44 PM
Couldn't be hotter for me, if I'd written it myself! Dude, you're a natural I.J.S.
Apr 18, 2015
Daniel
8/20/18, 6:18 PM
Yeah dude ! Very much like a fantasy I had in high school I. J. S.
Daniel
8/20/18, 5:39 PM
This is really good! Well plotted, sexy, colorful descriptions agents being corrupted can't wait for more
Daniel
8/20/18, 5:12 PM
So f*****g hot ! Like a gay version of THE MAN FROM U.N.C.L.E. mote please I.J.S.
Daniel
8/20/18, 4:57 PM
Terrific! Loved the blanker/hypno being used on the two agents...more please I.J.S.
Anonymous
8/20/18, 3:02 PM
Any news?
Anonymous
8/20/18, 12:30 PM
I love it man, thank you!!
Anonymous
8/20/18, 12:22 PM
This is one of my favourite stories on this site. I'd love to see the hoodie's adventures continue!
Anonymous
8/20/18, 10:56 AM
*We found orgasm in a flaccid place * That was so hot Tkhon ! Always love the minor daddy characters. Would be interesting to see a series from you one day xx Keep it up <3
ForgottenCradle
8/20/18, 10:52 AM
Loved it! Hoping for a second part with his boyfriend
Aug 19, 2018
LongtimeFan
8/20/18, 8:37 AM
Hi! I absolutely LOVE your stories—I have since you were maxhockeyjock. You have a great gift for writing both supernatural stories (the one about James and Jake), plain-old revenge tales (the one with the guy who kidnaps his sister’s abuser and mentally breaks him), and then—my favorite—ones like this, that straddle the line between fantasy and realism. Is the narrator going to use magic, or simple hypnosis? Positive thinking, or transformative spells? I can’t wait to see! :)
LongtimeFan
8/20/18, 8:24 AM
Well done, Hypnothrill! Another good, sexy story. I will confess, though, that it was not one of my favorites by you—I think the addition of the wedding plot and my subsequent thoughts about poor Gemma kind of pulled me out of it? So stop being a good writer and creating emotional stakes. :p But seriously, the transformations into mindless muscleheads is on point as always, and your descriptions are the sexiest here. Keep it up! :)
Anonymous
8/20/18, 8:09 AM
Really enjoyed your series
Daniel
8/20/18, 8:07 AM
Great jOb dude! Tlrjyl someth.ing. syfy. Bikera & Cops vs alien iinvasion I.J.S
Daniel
8/20/18, 7:45 AM
NOW we're gettin sweaty muskyslippery steamy mind b.endingl mind controllin' DOWN & DIRTY GREAT STUFF DUUUDE, THANKS I. J. S.
Anonymous
8/20/18, 7:35 AM
This series was wonderful, and u wrote a perfect ending, really loved the whole thing.
Daniel
8/20/18, 7:10 AM
Hy.pno, cops,corruption, down & dirty that's theway uh huh uh huh. I like it....I.J.S.
Daniel
8/20/18, 6:52 AM
There are so many really hot ways this could go, do it up right dude! I.J.S.
Daniel
8/20/18, 5:53 AM
All the elements for a hot gay sex tale are there- you neehd to find a way to stop hav ing so much h.appeen witkh.out, detkailing it for your readers, as of now it's a bit white bread -c'mon hot young jocks, where's the shtruggling, the c orruption? I.J.S.