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5/26/19, 10:35 PM
I really like Demonic Sex. It's actually my favorite comic. While I was reading your story I could see the reference to it. The best parts are those were you describe the transformations and were you talk about the character's corruption. Hunks transforming into demons, being corrupted and corrupting others is my favorite fetish. Unfortunately, there aren't many stories, comics or movies based on this kind of things. I was sad when the movie adaption of Demonic Sex got canceled. Since you asked for ideas, I would like to see categories of people, who stereotypically fight for good, turning bad like cops, soldiers or superheros. I also like gyms and bodybuilders, power bottoms and alpha males. I have a thing for muscle growth, leather/rubber, sweat, cum eating, uniforms, pierced nipples so if you are interested in what an enthusiastic reader would like to see in the chapters to come here you have my personal favorites ;) I'm not really into demons with hooves or furry demons. I prefer devils like Patrick Fillion's Deimos but hey! you can't have it all ;p The transformations of Demonic Sex are all really hot especially those at the Street Fair and those of the cops. I hope there will be many chapters to follow. Thanks for that wonderful story and I can't wait to read your next installment!
adaptedman1944@yahoo.com
5/26/19, 9:02 PM
Brilliamt story, had to change my shorts three times whilst reding it..... thanks...... superb.
5/26/19, 6:49 PM
AWESOME! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART! I HOPE THERE WILL BE MANY MORE CHAPTERS TO COME! PLEASE KEEP UP WITH THE STORY! IT'S SOOOOO HOOOOT!!!!
Anonymous
5/26/19, 4:48 PM
love both parts. a suggestion for the next part. the theater program needs a inked up rock star type. maybe a classical music major taking the theater class. gets transformed.
Anonymous
5/26/19, 4:40 PM
Kudos! Another fine chapter.
Anonymous
5/26/19, 4:35 PM
Love the transformation, and the sex scene was brilliant.
5/26/19, 4:30 PM
Great story! Any chance for a role reversal in the next bit? Like a bearish football player and his bodybuilder bro swap bodies and become lovers? You are great at the transformations!
Anonymous
5/26/19, 2:58 PM
Wow! You're a really talented writer! Both parts so far were incredibly well-written and extremely hot! Can't wait do see what you'll do/write next!
Chadwick
5/26/19, 2:13 PM
I hope you will be writing more
LongtimeFan
5/26/19, 1:35 PM
HOT DAMN! Another brilliant chapter! The transformation is my favorite part--you do an awesome job establishing the previous version of David, so the "new" versions seems all the realer and hotter. But my GOD, your sex scene...you sure this is your second time writing this stuff? Because there have been people on this site for YEARS who don't write sex scenes that well. The detail, the language, the vividness...it's achingly sexy. You have a gift! P.S. Why oh WHY didn't my theatre program have this kind of dynamic in college? :p This is the ultimate fantasy for me!
Anonymous
5/26/19, 1:09 PM
Always enjoy a hot muscle jock with a nerdy mousey guy. I can see Benji assisting other jocks with a chapter two, three and four.
5/26/19, 1:02 PM
I've been busy and only got to your story now. Wow. Very nice idea! The way you present the difference voices from different eras is so distinctively nice. One can tell when a 1904 voice is speaker (and who), and one can tell the present characters. Your description of the surrounding adds so much to the setting that it feels like a classic novel. The plot is really interesting, leaving this reader constantly wondering will Alex ever find out what happened. (The initial chapters reminded me of the first Star Trek movie where Pia Zadora's body was assimilated by an alien, but so much so that the alien remembered that she was in love with another character...so too, maybe Joseph's memories might emerge... Good going!
Aug 15, 2010
Anonymous
5/26/19, 12:17 PM
Seems a chapter two would be a great addition. I like the characters, the set up.
Anonymous
5/26/19, 11:34 AM
I wish there were more chapters, this series is hot.
Caboose
5/26/19, 8:50 AM
Hot damn does this have some great imagery. i love a good rimming scene and this delivers!
Tass
5/26/19, 8:05 AM
nice plot. Like your transfromation stories since the first one Dominos
Apr 25, 2018
Anonymous
5/26/19, 6:26 AM
awesome, cant wait reading next
ShitPig
5/26/19, 3:51 AM
Fuck, this series was hot!
5/26/19, 3:22 AM
Great story. Intriguing to wonder if Samuels is the only fuckslave for the unit or if they have all been programmed as fuckslaves and the Sergeant decides who he wants at any given time. And I love how even the Sergeant's cum dominates all the others and Samuels can feel and taste the dominance. Great idea!
Anonymous
5/25/19, 10:42 PM
Very hot, is there going to be any more parts?
Anonymous
5/25/19, 9:04 PM
Soooo hot story, I love when a dad is a forced faggot slave, if only the son were the master.
May 24, 2019
5/25/19, 6:54 PM
I focused more on the transformation rather than their past history. I could have built up the relationship longer to end in a denouement but i like faster paced stories. I don't like doing scenes with harassment of gay or bi men.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
5/25/19, 6:16 PM
Always love being the slut for many men at one time. Not possible in a mall as in the story, of course, but there are places my true self can come out.
May 24, 2019
Anonymous
5/25/19, 5:37 PM
my critique is a positive one. The premise is good as is the process but it's too short and almost rushed. A longer history of antagonism by James and a former submission by Karl would lead to a more satisfying reversal of roles. And I'd have like to have seen James realise how bad he was and how much he enjoys the thought of being with Karl. And maybe a bit of animalistic need to go with the changes.
5/25/19, 5:20 PM
Wow, being a theatre major really has changed since I graduated.
5/25/19, 4:31 PM
I'm planning on continuing this. In fact I'm working on Chapter 3 right now. This was more inspired by the Demonic Sex gay comic. I was kinda planning on doing a gay version of the black Pharoh comic but with the wider DC Comics (this I'm planning on keeping it in the Arrowverse and crossing over with Supernatural and maybe Teen Wolf). For some variations on demon forms I'm going to use demonic furry forms (such as pigs/boars) and other ideas...If you guys have any ideas let me know of different demon forms or plot, comment here or message me on my twitter @tyl7897 Also to add some more variation, I'm thinking on changing Oliver's demonic form into something else. I have some ideas such as a demonic furry-based but wanted to see if you guys have any ideas that I haven't think of (either furry or other) :)
Anonymous
5/25/19, 3:35 PM
Man, that was interesting. This has a lot of potential too. it would be like the gay vers of Black Pharaoh's comic. please continue this...
Steve
5/25/19, 3:21 PM
So hot and so well written...I would like to sign up for the next seminar, please....
Dec 15, 2013
nyjogger4e@aol.com
5/25/19, 12:56 PM
A great seduction followed by amazingly hot sex. Wish there was a second chapter, but you write so many diverse stories that I guess you don't have the time. My sincere compliments on another brilliant effort.
5/25/19, 9:52 AM
>"Well, dog my shit, look at us!" > LOL -- I had a good friend, a bodybuilder who worked construction -- in a CAT diesel hat no less -- who said that all the time. I thought it was funny. I wonder whatever happened to him? Hopefully transformed like the Budd Bros...