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chasfarley53@yahoo.com
6/15/19, 1:33 PM
great idea
Anonymous
6/15/19, 12:33 PM
I loved this. I'd love to see more of it and the gypsy one.
6/15/19, 12:06 PM
> Too short > That's the first time I've ever heard those words.... Hahaha Truth be known, though this may be the shortest chapter, it took me the longest to write. Honestly, I slaved over this chapter -- now, it just so happens that I wrote it during an unexpectedly busy time at work, which slowed my already slow writing -- but that's just an excuse. In the end, I like the way it reads. And it gets us where we need to be plot-wise, so all good. What SHOULD concern you is that I've only got two pages written of Chapter 9....
Anonymous
6/15/19, 11:34 AM
I'm usually not a fan of superhero stuff but this was incredibly well done, good job!
Anonymous
6/15/19, 11:10 AM
Too short i want more loving this. Rex as a true god will be interesting, maybe he will convert time stalker too
6/15/19, 8:18 AM
Please write more.
Anonymous
6/15/19, 6:28 AM
Excellent work
Rik
6/14/19, 9:20 PM
Write some more please. Want to know what happens next!
Anonymous
6/14/19, 5:11 PM
Haiii, Kazuma desu.
Kevin
6/14/19, 5:11 PM
love the seris
Oct 28, 2018
Anonymous
6/14/19, 3:55 PM
Get it? Hundt? German for Hound? Get it?
Anonymous
6/14/19, 2:22 PM
uke aw :3
6/14/19, 9:21 AM
This was unusual. Clever, sneaky and manipulative. Not particularly hot at the moment of reading, but...
6/14/19, 9:15 AM
This was simply excellent. The lyrics were good, the mix of lyrics and action was perfect, the viewpoints of Blake and Camden managed to be both sympathetic and extremely hot. The _feel_ of a dance party with horny people feeling as one was very, very good. I loved this.
Anonymous
6/14/19, 8:58 AM
well very interesting story. some cool concepts. i was certainly curious as to the end and cheering for Peren and Huurkon. To be honest, overall the imagery of "slugs" and ovipositors and "worms" is pretty disgusting. Not hot at all. if they were brainwashed to fuck, ok. like to watch this would be like porn meets the Alien franchise. really interesting concept and i was interested but overall, grossssssss imagery. makes me want to barf .
Anonymous
6/14/19, 8:14 AM
nonna wasnt always frank though right? because he has a lot of manly sex with john in chapter 3 and its weird on a lot of levels if dead grandma was banging grandson's husband. enough so that itll probably ruin that sequence for me
Oct 28, 2018
Bloodle
6/14/19, 6:26 AM
I was looking for actual tf stories here and this didn't disappoint!
Luststallion
6/14/19, 6:13 AM
love it. can't wait for the next
Lustystallion
6/14/19, 5:48 AM
brilliant
Anonymous
6/14/19, 4:01 AM
well done
Connell
6/14/19, 2:21 AM
I like where this is going.
HntBoy
6/14/19, 12:49 AM
I think the story is incredibly hot. I disagree with that Seth dude. It was 99% perfect for me. I'm personally not into snuff, but it was expertly written i enjoyed it! Thank you fir posting!
Anonymous
6/13/19, 11:57 PM
still no new chapter ;( ???
Slave Abdamelek
6/13/19, 11:12 PM
Thank you very much. I will!
Anonymous
6/13/19, 10:52 PM
Another amazing story and really well written, thanks! I think you mixed it up really well. Interested in seeing more of the meta too - like how it works outside of a concert. And I really want see Skeet take down Adam!
Lustystallion
6/13/19, 10:47 PM
loved
Awesome
6/13/19, 10:19 PM
please continue its incredible
Anonymous
6/13/19, 9:39 PM
this was such an amazing story super hot. i really love a top to bottom switch with Camden, that being said i would have loved to see more of a transition for Camden going from a top to who never bottomed before in chapter one to a slutty bottom who love being fisted and double fucked in this chapter.
Anonymous
6/13/19, 9:05 PM
I agree with the people up top. It would be an awesome change of pace to see the bad guy lose for once on this site.
Slab
6/13/19, 8:21 PM
> Hypnothrill 5/31/19 3:23 PM Good story, but it needs a bit more editing, as you call Randy “Nicky” at several points. Yeah, good story, but there are indeed messups, it also was a bit confusing at times in general