Recent Comments

6/17/19, 6:48 AM
This is well-written, dark and very promising. The viewpoint is original. Please continue this.
Angell Kitty
6/17/19, 6:27 AM
Me alegra encontrar una historia en español. Buen trabajo
Aura
6/17/19, 6:19 AM
Oh please, god, we don't have enough Greaser transformations. Give me this oneee thing.
LongtimeFan
6/17/19, 6:19 AM
Phenomenal story! Like Hypnothrill and Willie Cici said, I love the "slow burn" and gradual transformation. Plus you do a great job of depicting the mental transformation by playing with the fourth wall--it's painfully obvious to the READERS that there's something in the water (and likely the coffee too!), but Jet gradually losing that awareness perfectly reflects his mind being drained. Plus your description of the commune and its men...mmmmmm. ;p Fantastic stuff!
Anonymous
6/17/19, 5:41 AM
Okay, i guess im just a shallow person, but it wasnt the dark tone that bugged me. What disappointed me is the lack of male sex in this chapter. I wish we got to actually see the sex between the coach snd Hal instead of just hearing it. Other than that though, i do like the whole hopelessness of the athletes and being able to see in to their psyche, how broken they are and how the mastr's programming is even messing with their heads. I just wish it was paired with hot, steamy sex too. Thats just my opinion though
Anonymous
6/17/19, 5:33 AM
Man! I just found you! I loved this. I can't wait to see more of it. I definitely want to see more of the gypsy one! You're awesome!
Anonymous
6/17/19, 5:31 AM
I love your stories. I can't wait for the next one
Anonymous
6/17/19, 5:03 AM
Reminds me of Plato lol. It's annoying the first common thing people associate with Plato is his lusty Symposium fanfic, rather than his pretentious advocacy for a society resembling a caste system/proto feudalism lead by enlightened despots and his romanticized depiction prior philosophers.
Chyro
6/17/19, 4:48 AM
Hey there pup echo. Cool to see I can find your stories here now, used to follow you on tumblr. Keep it up with your kinky goodness ^^
Elm
6/17/19, 2:46 AM
I like this story more and more... its refreshing to see the darker side of this site often silly stories. It makes them more real in a way. Thanks again for posting!
6/17/19, 2:14 AM
Aw shucks. You guys are making me blush. I definitely might write a sequel to this one given the interest. :D.
Anonymous
6/17/19, 2:01 AM
love feminization!
Anonymous
6/17/19, 1:53 AM
Smoking hot!!! Subtle transformation always a turn on for me.
Anonymous
6/17/19, 1:51 AM
Loved it!! Classic!!!
Cigarjock18
6/17/19, 1:13 AM
Yes more please!! Wanna read about him trying his first big maduro and the effects it has on him and how he becomes a NASTY gearpig
David S
6/17/19, 1:10 AM
Very good start, I definitely want to see where this is going. Can't wait for some good leather transformation!
Anonymous
6/17/19, 12:40 AM
wow awsome story! i wish he didnt die though, it would be cool if he would have to ajusst to living in the suit from now on. but other than that its really good.
6/17/19, 12:33 AM
This was much hotter than I was expecting. I’m not a huge super hero story fan, but this was very well done. I loved that Thanks used the power to convert him and make Steve worship him. I’d love to read more. Especially if all of the Avengers become his loyal disciples, eager to serve and please him.
fleporepen@gmail.com
6/17/19, 12:20 AM
Really nice! id love to read more
Anonymous
6/17/19, 12:08 AM
I hope Hal and Barry come out of this on top, I mean I'm all in for punishing homophobes, but that was just sick, I think this was just taking things too far, I think Hal and Barry should be free, but learning their lesion
M
6/16/19, 10:00 PM
This story is so well written and erotic. It flows so well and there's not a forced moment. I would love to see a follow up to it. Thanks for writing it!
Listystallion
6/16/19, 9:37 PM
can't wait to read part 2 man. great story!
Anonymous
6/16/19, 9:25 PM
Quite good. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
Anonymous
6/16/19, 9:08 PM
OOOOO love a man with a plan. Can't wait to see what's install with the next installment. I really loved the way you managed to put Thanos in an all powerful spot but he still read like a man with a crush. Such a cool and unusual balance.
Anonymous
6/16/19, 8:58 PM
im waiting for mancubus man !!!
Mutabear
6/16/19, 8:45 PM
Hot story. I always like ones where the victim has to reorient himself in new surroundings.
Anonymous
6/16/19, 8:29 PM
this flows very well and is written superbly! Really looking forward to more!
Anonymous
6/16/19, 8:19 PM
^ it's not up to you to determine what the story could do with or do without just because you personally don't share an interest in a theme. You're allowed to not like it but don't try to dictate the story.
screamingmoist
6/16/19, 7:53 PM
THANK YOU! For real, I very much appreciate the support and all the help from Martin and Hugh along the way. Also, if anyone picks up a copy and enjoys it, reviews are a big help in spreading the word on Amazon.
Anonymous
6/16/19, 7:36 PM
Well what can I say. I bought it, and it's great.