Wow. Great stuff. Can't wait to read more!

bros.. so HARD... Hard 2 think... Straight.... dugghhh.... HARD... Must STROKE DEEPER... duugh... 4 MASTER.... Master coach.. said he turned the green goo virus into a cumputer virus... He called it... jocknotized... wait convert2jock.exe ... bee wear bros.. There's no cumming .. uhhhg... coming back from it... fuck... can't resist... Must cum.... obey Master.. dughghuuh... This GOOD JOCKBOY... Ready to GROW MASTER'S TEAM... fuck yeah bro!

I think I caught the virus too bro! ... shit.. Every time I resist and take my jock off... a few hours later my head gets all fuzzy and I feel all horny and I teach down to adjust and suddenly I realize this GOOD JOCKBOY is wearing his JOCKSTRAP again!!! .... wait who did this good jockboy say that!?!! .... fuck bro!.... This GOOD JOCKBOY.... GOOD JOCKBOY am Trevor... wait! .... duuuuh.... so confused.... sumthin wrong... GOOD JOCKBOY... am.... GOOD OBEDIENT JOCK BOY... Trevor is gone now... There is only this GOOD OBEDIENT JOCKBOY now for MASTER-coach.....

i love this story so muchhh

Looking forward to it! Been jacking off to the CYOC story a lot over the years! Bring on the hairy men.

There are some hot ideas and kinks in here, but it felt really rushed. You should take time to explore the events of the narrative, and don't be afraid to give us details.

Dammit thats why i usually wait till stories are complete its to good and i want more.

I love how you are blending the real men take cock theme. It's always been a natural thought for me, that masculine energy homosexuality is the utmost of manliness. Glad to see you putting it in a story.

like the idea of those harness. also i did like how it jett and the other 3 bouncers. Wonder if jett will end up being another bouncer

This was so, so fucking hot, and I feel like I'm committing a crime saying it, but we all have our kinks. Our certain things. I'm a black man too, and I've gotta admit this thing appeals to me. Others can take offense but at the end of the day it's your story and your desires. Very well written and hot.

Wow you have to continue this. Please!

Loved the story! Very gradual changes building to some hot scenes! Maybe he was named Chernobyl because he was born in 1986? The same year as the disaster.

I really hope a fusion of both would walk out of that machine.

thanks Nicky for keeping this story going , as always good work

Great start to a hot transformation!

Oh man, I loved your Tumblr stories! The wishing service concept you were exploring there, as well as this idea, are some of my favourite there are in the world. I find it so unbelievably hot, and you do a great job with it. One thing I will suggest is to take the time to really describe the before and after. Looking back at DW's original stories (and I swear there's another plus three story that I read once but I can never find it...) the fantastic thing is how many minute details there are to the ways that people transform. That is what really elevates folks like Derek Williams to being absolute classic reads I return to regularly.

@blindseer0 - That's a pretty apt summary of it all for sure--thanks for reading it with such depth and attention to detail!

Yes I wrote the basics of this story many years ago in CYOC and decided to re-write it and publish it here for your enjoyment. I have 2 more chapters to work on and then it will all be new transformations. Taking into consideration the preferences of my readers and my own dark fetishes...

Love that one of my favorite stories of cyoc.net is getting a second life here <3

hoooot. please continue this!

Cool, but who are the patrons? Men? Women? I would have loved a first hand account of Jay's first time sucking cock and getting his ass plowed.

fuck kinda parent calls their kid Chernobyl

the ideas are hot, but this reads like a 15 y/o's wank fantasy line of thought. try practice more, and youll get better. also, manginas are hot.

(Ryuhei) "Ugh the Loki plot twist is so cliché imo. If only JARVIS is the one who behind it all would be more interesting, because I think JARVIS served Loki is a bit illogical" I'd agree.

oh my god this was amazing! please write more!

Quite a fun concept... Seems about right for an AI too, stop button problem and all~

what happened with the DJ, did he went to the house too?

Sorry this review came so late, been thinking a lot about this chapter. I'm really liking this story. It's very much a supernatural horror story, but also very real. On the surface we have two men, both of whom have been perverted from who they were, trying to figure out who they are. Steve thought he wanted to go back in the closet, have a family and kids, the things he had always dreamed of, but had been denied to him. When given the chance, he slipped into the role easily. He became a deputy, a pillar of his community, known and liked by everyone. Until he re-met Kevin and realized there was a void in him none of these things could fill. So he has sex with him, and the void is filled.But he can't ride off into the sunset, because that would mean leaving behind everything he has, everything (he thought) he wanted. Kevin on the other hand, has basically always been out/ known he's gay and resigned himself to it. Its the only thing he knows. He comes off as callous and dismissive, but he's shown to be empathetic (not wanting to subject kids to a dying world, asking about the gay kid who committed suicide). When he's forced back into the closet, he rebels. He hates his wife, and being with her feels wrong. His kids are a constant reminder that things are very wrong (and one of them that his wife is as miserable as him). Unlike Steve, he's not a pillar of his community; basically the exact opposite. He lives in a MOBILE home, on the edge of town, and rides a motorcycle everywhere. He's talented enough at auto repair that he can't be fired easily, but doesn't care about his job and spends most of his time drunk. He's very much into performative masculinity, and homophobia, to hide the fact that yes gay. The exact opposite of the original Kevin. His life is in a death spiral... until he meets Steve and the void is filled. Unlike Steve, he loves it and dreams about running away with him. He immediately falls head over heels for this guy... until he's rejected. Then he reacts violently, raping Steve. Embarrassed at being romantic, he rewrites his own memory (or the magic does), something he's been shown to do before. He's not gay, he's not in love with a guy, oh no, he just enjoys fucking him to show off his masculinity. To show HE'S in charge. And as soon as he does this, everything clicks into place. He cleans up, drinks less, treats his wife and kids better, and generally gets his life together. But he does this by setting himself as more masculine than Steve, and "taking his wife back" from his boss. He stops harming himself, but externalized that harm towards Steve and by denying his own feelings. And this doesn't just hurt the guys, but the women in their lives as well. Michelle especially is constantly suffering, and trying to find love while in a dead marriage. This review is getting long, but there's definitely something to be said about the men in the first chapter that know what's being done in town is wrong, but feel like they have no choice. What's the suffering of one or two compared to the death of their town, after all.

I really enjoyed this! Very hot, great transformations, and I appreciate you not messing with marriages! Well done!

Damn, I wish the HBO series was more like this.