Recent Comments

8/17/19, 3:06 AM
I'm glad this got listed in the selected archives and I found it. Hot story. Looking forward to moving on to the next chapters
Mdlftr
8/17/19, 2:50 AM
Guernsey is putting in the work -- to achieve the reward! Great writing - the details, the sense of "reality" - fantastic!
M
8/16/19, 11:44 PM
This is my Absman favorite story. I never get tired of reading it. So erotic and at the same time, sexual.
abrobdl@gmail.com
8/16/19, 9:59 PM
I need one of those crystals as well.
8/16/19, 8:50 PM
oh, more is coming ;-)
8/16/19, 8:19 PM
What a very interesting and fun and sexy reveal. I love this saga and would always welcome more whenever you feel like writing it.
Anonymous
8/16/19, 7:58 PM
This ended just as it started to get good. I enjoyed but feels incomple ;)
Dario Brando
8/16/19, 7:54 PM
What the fuck where's my son
Anonymous
8/16/19, 5:36 PM
Okay now that you’ve described someone as looking like TOM HOLLAND, he needs a bigger and sexier role in the story.
8/16/19, 4:31 PM
At the guy who was worried about sounding douchey: Editorial? Who is that? Do you imagine there’s an army of Editors working behind the scenes on this site? Or that the site moderators want to be the ones to determine what the minimum quality bar is, and deal with all of the flack that goes with that? “You censored my story!” “How many other stories have you censored?” Are you volunteering to act as the quality reviewer? Are you volunteering to help new authors by editing their stories? If you are, great, and all power to you. This author has hidden their email, but you could probably contact them to assist them indirectly via Martin. If you aren’t offering to do any of that, please shut up. The author might be ESL and need help. They might be starting out and have never posted anything online. They might have never taken a writing course of any kind. Be kind, and instead of shitting all over everything, offer constructive, useful, actionable criticism. Links to articles on story structure and grammar would’ve been useful, telling them to make the story longer would have been useful, pointing them at the forums or the Discord group to get feedback and editing assistance would have all been useful and helpful.