Recent Comments

Tf fan
8/26/19, 8:31 AM
More stories plz! And keep the reference pics hehe
Bulk
8/26/19, 7:49 AM
Very hot idea, but too abrupt ending! I really hope we see more of this.
Anonymous
8/26/19, 6:02 AM
this story is really hot~
Alexander
8/26/19, 5:54 AM
this is probably my favorite story on this
Anonymous
8/26/19, 5:54 AM
THIS IS SOO GOOD it deserves all caps would love to meet him irl (or use relivit mine self-
Anonymous
8/26/19, 3:32 AM
I dont know if I it's just me or not but who is Callum?
firesix
8/26/19, 1:00 AM
To be honest, this chapter felt sort of weird. I'd really gotten into the new world order, with men on top and bois on bottom, and now within a few paragraphs it's all twisted around again. Giacomo and Tom are suddenly men, their lovers are suddenly bois (and I'm still not sure how that happened) and for whatever reason Marco still works his job despite being a boi, and all that. It just doesn't make any sense, considering the rules of the story as they had been lined up before. I feel like I'm missing something. Sorry. Don't mean to be negative. Just was a confusing chapter for me.
Anonymous
8/26/19, 12:51 AM
I'm happy to see this story continue! Hopefully the next update will be soon!
DIO
8/25/19, 11:52 PM
Ho, mutete kurneno Ka?
UchihaDEMS
8/25/19, 11:19 PM
Wow, so many good options in his troop! Thanks for the new chapter <3
Lusty Stallion
8/25/19, 9:52 PM
Brilliant!
HyperMuscleMonster
8/25/19, 9:26 PM
I loved 95% of the story, but I'm sorry to say that the scene of Jersey's beating made me sick to my stomach. Everything else was great. (I like dom scenes, but both of them have to be into it.)
Anonymous
8/25/19, 8:58 PM
So glad for the new chapter ! can't wait for him to get more soldier slaves :)
Anonymous
8/25/19, 8:51 PM
This is such a nice love story en sexy too what more does a guy want ( o and don't forget the leather leather is always good)
Anonymous
8/25/19, 8:33 PM
loving this
Anonymous
8/25/19, 7:22 PM
great update, I've been looking for this
8/25/19, 5:02 PM
I too loved the original and am glad it's being continued by one of my favourite GSS authors! Would like to hear more about what happened to the infected of the first harvest but I'll be happy with anything!
TheD
8/25/19, 5:01 PM
I believe you made the right choice. It's a beautifully-written, very satisfying end to a very engaging story. There's something almost *too* 'meta' about an author having doubts and multiple alternatives for the ending of a story about a man who wonders 'what might have been.' ;)
8/25/19, 4:30 PM
Nice ending!
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
8/25/19, 4:08 PM
Oh good, the bots are out. Comments like the above (from a different "person" but with the same link) on every chapter of the story. sigh
8/25/19, 4:05 PM
> I just need an underdog to prevail once in a while - if that’s worth writing about. This ending has the same feeling like “Cycle One” > I've written plenty of "happy" endings -- though certainly not the majority, I get that. Part of the "fun" of a mind control/ domination story (like CYCLE ONE) is that, in order for it to justify its length, one has to keep upping the dramatic ante. To me, the protagonist succumbing to their fate is far hotter than prevailing over the "bad guy." (And you clearly have never read APPOLYON, my "novel", because that does the exact same thing -- in a FAR MORE sinister way -- I guess I'm a sucker for that ending.)
Anonymous
8/25/19, 4:04 PM
aw so beautiful....sexy as fuck, but also heartwarming. Well done, Pup. :)
B-A
8/25/19, 2:43 PM
LOVED your writing style for this series. Can't wait to see what your next story will be. :)
Anonymous
8/25/19, 2:38 PM
I need closure! I know it's not my place to demand the author to write how I want; I just need an underdog to prevail once in a while - if that's worth writing about. This ending has the same feeling like "Cycle One" where the protagonist has enough freedom to choose what he wants to do with his changes: become further indoctrinated or break the cycle, so to speak. Don't get me wrong, your entire collection of stories, especially this one, hit my interests too well for it's on good.
Anonymous
8/25/19, 12:36 PM
Really loving this story! 🐻 WóÓÔÒòF BIG BEAR!
Anonymous
8/25/19, 12:22 PM
This was so hot and everything I fantasize about. I want a strong hairy manly daddy to take me and make me his.
Argavo
8/25/19, 12:11 PM
Excellent story! I can wait to read the next chapter
Anonymous
8/25/19, 12:03 PM
Regardless, if it's a one off or a series it'll be a lot of fun to read.
Anonymous
8/25/19, 11:30 AM
whoa. excellent. more, please, and more mind control if possible......
8/25/19, 11:13 AM
That was great! I especially loved the scene where the symbiote was speaking through Tom and Henry's bodies.