Recent Comments

Martin
9/3/19, 4:08 PM
@Drake Nightstorm: Do you realize that you've made a typo in the series name? "Revebge" is probably not what you intended (series names are shown on the main page only!). You can edit the series name by editing the story (there's a separate field for the series name). Just wanted to let you know! And welcome to the illustrate group of GSS authors
9/3/19, 3:24 PM
Very nice, very very nice. Oh yes, make his hole sensitive. Make it itch with need when he's around his future master. I could see some training being done, maybe with a target whose not as nice as Sloan seems to be. But the idea of rewarding good boy and subby behavior with positive feelings and arousal is hot.
Anonymous
9/3/19, 3:05 PM
This was hot! Can't wait for more changes and sex explosions!
Anonymous
9/3/19, 2:45 PM
Where is the baseball team?!?!?!
Anonymous
9/3/19, 2:03 PM
Excellent story! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Anonymous
9/3/19, 1:34 PM
I love this! I can't wait to see what happens next. what if you made his hole sensitive.... nothing outrageous, but just enough that he feels it pulsing in pleasure? or just twitching through out the day. Please make more
9/3/19, 12:55 PM
Wow thanks for all the responses. I plan on using the same name in the future. I have tentative ideas for the next story in this series. I consider it a bigger win that someone that isn't normally into something liked it here. This was very encouraging so it makes me want to write more. Look for the next revenge story soon, the ring is going to change hands.
Anonymous
9/3/19, 12:22 PM
I am not Normally into twinks but you made this a very sexy story. Thank you.
Aug 31, 2019
Anonymous
9/3/19, 8:45 AM
more! awesome story. i love the deception with the remote control.
Anonymous
9/3/19, 8:09 AM
I love this! Please make more
9/3/19, 7:48 AM
Nice! Eager to read what happens with Travis and the other guests.
Anonymous
9/3/19, 7:32 AM
This was great. Please continue!
Anonymous
9/3/19, 5:44 AM
so so hot
9/3/19, 4:39 AM
Hehe. Very fun and naughty. Its gonna be a fun ride. I can't wait for fun with sliders. lol I do wonder how much control he has over body and mind. Which of course means I look forward to seeing such things. Especially that sexy butt you mentioned Sloan has. As an amusing note anyone he has sex with will get nanites. Its a naturally expanding system. :)
9/3/19, 3:45 AM
Ooh. Very interesting. Both on a sexiness level and a setting level.
Anonymous
9/3/19, 3:06 AM
captain america?
Anonymous
9/3/19, 3:06 AM
love this
9/3/19, 3:05 AM
Oh and I hope he protects himself from being controlled by anyone else if his tech falls into the wrong hands. I'd rather he stay the master rather then falling under another's control. As a note, setting wise, him having the tech would lead to him being able to improve bodies and enhance minds and cure and fix biological problems. Which would be really cool. I mean imagine his good boys being enhanced in exchange for submitting and now having super enjoyable sex with men. :)
9/3/19, 3:00 AM
Interesting start. I'm curiois as to what will happen. I do have to say I like how its from the dom's pov. Thats actually quite nice. Now obviously its your story but I hope he doesnt ruin Sloan's life. That while he makes changes outwardly and publically he rema ins normal all the while secretly being a good boy. That and I hope there is rimming. Hehe But yeah nice start.
Anonymous
9/3/19, 3:00 AM
Hope there's more soon!
Anonymous
9/3/19, 2:58 AM
So hot - just like the musk bros!
9/3/19, 2:50 AM
This story was hot.
Anonymous
9/3/19, 1:50 AM
Please keep using the same name so we know it s your story two.
Anonymous
9/3/19, 12:12 AM
Fantastic . You did an excelent job.
Anonymous
9/3/19, 12:05 AM
hmmmm what kind of statue are archer and web wonder going to make?
Anonymous
9/2/19, 11:47 PM
it's still a set-up but i've alredy got a boner!!
Anonymous
9/2/19, 9:12 PM
I love this! Please make more
Ganymedesjockstrap
9/2/19, 9:07 PM
I had no idea I'd find this story to be so hot. The transformation aspect was amazing, the cum bloating is always a favorite. I really like what you've submitted and I'm looking forward to reading more.
9/2/19, 8:58 PM
I am glad you liked it. I wasn't sure about posting it as it was my first attempt at writing like this.
9/2/19, 7:42 PM
Well I’d love to see it then, cause I definitely wrote it myself. It’s someone’s request as well, so maybe they requested it once before? If you do find it, i’m on the gss discord so shoot me a message. And the rest, thanks for the nice comments!!