Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/5/19, 2:12 PM
keep going, please
Slave Abdamelek
9/5/19, 12:35 PM
I am hard at work on the next chapter, where you will see the Pharaoh's Empire in all its glory, and how it all began.
Bimarguycnj
9/5/19, 11:32 AM
ive always love stories about being turned into someone elses cock , good story
malskin
9/5/19, 9:03 AM
a great new chapter added - the cloth is learning and growing
Anonymous
9/5/19, 8:38 AM
Looking forward to where this goes! Loves exhibitionism and embarrassment.
Anonymous
9/5/19, 8:10 AM
Thank you so much!! I guess John did not remember what Jonny said to John but they were deeply implanted to him. I wish we could have a chance to know what they were talking...
Anonymous
9/5/19, 7:08 AM
Great to learn we have two more stories!! Wish John to wear Nike football gears in the end.
Anonymous
9/5/19, 7:08 AM
Cant wait to see how this one wraps up... then again, I dont know if I'd be strong enough to pass up being a Unit 4.
Anonymous
9/5/19, 7:02 AM
oh, what a sweet story !!
Anonymous
9/5/19, 2:18 AM
i wish to learn more about those fancy supplements. hope it has ones that had changed John's personality, behaviors and metabolism : )
degoetz@yahoo.com
9/5/19, 1:15 AM
Mmmm make his hole sensitive. Make it convulse where it stretches open like it's getting stuffed even when it's empty maybe. Also would he hot to make him grow hair or lose it in certain areas.
Anonymous
9/5/19, 12:28 AM
Awesome. I hope "they" get to Jonny and he gives our hero a double dose when they meet...
Anonymous
9/4/19, 11:57 PM
This was a super hot idea. Loved it.
Anonymous
9/4/19, 11:50 PM
Most erotic fiction isnt written well enough, to enjoy reading more than the money shots. But this has a cinematic quality begging to be viewed in full. If its finished, wheres the rest of it?
Anonymous
9/4/19, 11:50 PM
absolutely love the story... it contains one of my favourite kinks ... seeing someone relatively private turn into an exhibitionist... hopefully he makes sloan feel more and more horny ... like make him come once in night and once in morning before he wakes up .. then slowly also while he is having his bath... so on
9/4/19, 9:30 PM
Clevis83: Yeah I can see that lol... I wrote it for a friend but I only felt like writing 1000 words so the result was this :)
DumbGooner
9/4/19, 8:33 PM
Loved this! So hot!
Anonymous
9/4/19, 12:16 PM
I love this! I can't wait for the next one
Anonymous
9/4/19, 10:26 AM
Football?
Aug 20, 2019
Anonymous
9/4/19, 8:29 AM
More evil underwear conversions please. make the world into a world of hot guys! how about a corporate drone? Armani boxers turned a normal person in to the best corporate slave. hahaha.
Anonymous
9/4/19, 7:42 AM
Nice development!! I like the way how you proceed the story, not so fast without detail or not so slow with too much details. Love it!!
Clevis83
9/4/19, 7:06 AM
it's a nice story and with good erotic potential, but maybe the scenes take place too quickly
malskin
9/4/19, 5:41 AM
This was good when you first published it and still good now i have read it again
Anonymous
9/4/19, 5:36 AM
Incredible story as always Mr bracken.
9/4/19, 5:22 AM
Awww. I'm so sad for Peter. But at least he has a nice butt. So there is that. hehe I do wish he had touched his butt so he could begin liking the feel of it being played with. Actually, speaking of that, I wonder if he can add if then statements to the bots. Like "if subject touches butt increase pleasure" or "if owner says good boy to subject increase pleasure." That might be fun. While I don't so much care about exhibition I do like the idea of Peter not getting sad on his body. My last comment is thumbs up on the whole defense element. I'm glad he though to protect himself. As a note though having nanites that can influence does mean in time changes can be made. Like creating a bubble butt and making a person physically fit. I know this is porn but it would be cool if he comments that his work is porn now but enhancement later. Anyway good story!
Anonymous
9/4/19, 4:38 AM
Wow, this is completely a hot story that I stumbled upon by sheer dumb luck. Such a diamond in the ruff and had all my favorite fetishes; feet, hypnosis, and statue/freeze. I especially love the part where he froze bren while the other guy face fucked him and vice versa. Please continue to post more stories!
SalaciousSister
9/4/19, 2:38 AM
10/10
9/4/19, 2:35 AM
Great Story!
Anonymous
9/4/19, 1:21 AM
so weird, but interesting! Im curious about the follow up!
9/3/19, 11:59 PM
Due to vacation I'm getting to this serious only now. I love it! I love that Dan has been transformed and yet holds memories of what was, and how he's working to deal with them. I look forward to seeing the concluding chapters.