Recent Comments

1/19/20, 8:15 PM
i'd like a follow-up to Dirk's noose predicament from the previous chapter
1/19/20, 7:56 PM
This is fun!
1/19/20, 7:42 PM
I liked the ideas of obliviousness to the true action, and standardized prrograms; A more in-depth description of the induction process would make it even hotter... I want to see where this goes.
Anonymous
1/19/20, 6:50 PM
glad this is continuing. cant wait to read what happens next
1/19/20, 5:29 PM
I loved that Nathan didn’t end up with the ring. Nice subversion of expectations. The slow progression was very very nice.
Anonymous
1/19/20, 12:05 PM
I love this series. I can't until the next story.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
1/19/20, 11:55 AM
continue, please
ThatOneGuy
1/19/20, 11:24 AM
Dammmnnn that was hot!!!
Jan 18, 2020
LongtimeFan
1/19/20, 10:20 AM
Ha ha ha! What a great, funny story--and I saw the Growing Pains reference, too. Fantastic!
malskin
1/19/20, 7:40 AM
Yet another great story to add to your collection. as other have said a teaching aid as well for the up and coming writers on here. the parts of the story that i enjoyed was when Ethan and his fellow nerds went to Coach Embry class to ask that they can get an excuse to get out of that scuba diving class this afternoon and 45 mins later the coach returns in a skintight black rubber wetsuit and when Ethan asked about the assignment the reply was with a contemptuous sneer spread across Coach Embry’s handsome face, “No. Freedom is no longer important. also the part where Scott returns from scuba diving with bits of hos wetsuit showing.......i did think Ethan's conversion might have been more of a struggle but liked the end result......and the cliff hanger at the end where Ethan needs to get his father to become a convert of Zindar...maybe the school needs to expand the scuba lesions to the fathers - thank you for the story
1/19/20, 5:36 AM
Love the premise of a gifting app being used to transform and subvert. A satire on guys who have Amazon wishlists for people to buy them stuff?
Anonymous
1/19/20, 4:53 AM
Thank You for another chapter, you're a great writer!
Anonymous
1/19/20, 4:44 AM
I was wondering what happened to the other characters!!!
Anonymous
1/19/20, 4:42 AM
Loved it!!!
Anonymous
1/19/20, 4:38 AM
Not a bad story the constant switching between characters was a bit jarring though
GearJock 18
1/19/20, 3:31 AM
Another great chapter of a story that hopefully goes on for a very long time. I see a future chapter called" Frathouse Makeover" Where a preppy jock frat is made over to a butch agressive DOM inked pierced gear wearing big maduro smoking PigDADDIES. It all starts with KC the quiet shy Teddy bear of a tightend. He's trying to be supportive of his 18 yr old brother who suddenly started wearing leather gear and smoking big cigars and declared he wasn't gay but a fucking queer gearpig. KC asked his brother what had happened to him and his brother smirked around his big cigar and told him he'd show him. He took KC to Pink Fridays and introduced him to Jack. The stylist that made him over. It took Jack about 2 hours and 3 loads of KC's pigcum to make him the NASTY maduro smoking gearpig PigDADDY he now was
1/19/20, 2:50 AM
Yep! I'm hooked!
1/19/20, 1:48 AM
The Ring's thoughts throughout the story: **BEGINNING:** Yes, come pick me up an- HEY! *You're* not the man whose finger I'm suppose to be on! Whelp, time for a slight change of plans. **MIDDLE:** *Yes*, LOVE the COCK, LOVE the MAN, ALL THE HOMO!!! **END:** aaaaaaaaaaaannnnnd DONE! Well, that was fun but time to move on and go back to my usual targets. But in all seriousness, great story! Loved the progression of the mental changes as well as putting an interesting twist to the usual formula. Would have liked to have the story end with them both climaxing then cuddling in each other's arms but other wise very solid story.
1/19/20, 1:42 AM
Super hot tale, would definitely love to see more, perhaps a swimming team being introduced to Zindar. ^^
1/19/20, 12:52 AM
Would love to see more of this.
Anonymous
1/19/20, 12:45 AM
awesome
Anonymous
1/18/20, 11:14 PM
Please continue !!!
Anonymous
1/18/20, 8:09 PM
“These bodies require fuel for further expansion,” <-- Ooh tell me more :P
elish11112@rambler.ru
1/18/20, 6:21 PM
очень понравился,хочу быть резиновым
Thank you
1/18/20, 5:28 PM
Aw, loved this! great chapter!
Anonymous
1/18/20, 5:14 PM
Excellent....Thanks
Anonymous
1/18/20, 3:42 PM
How about teacher and student? I think it's hot.
LongtimeFan
1/18/20, 12:06 PM
Hot stuff! I like what you say in the opener, too--it's kind of you to encourage new authors. :) Love the descriptions of the slackjawed guys in the school...brilliant!
Anonymous
1/18/20, 8:43 AM
SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL
Anonymous
1/18/20, 8:39 AM
such a great story !!! the cliffhanger at the end makes me very curious and i really like to so what happens to ethans dad or maybe even his brother ! ^^