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Brock
1/9/20, 7:46 AM
I literally just read all of these, if you stop writing, we will find you Hypnothrill hahahaha, no nut seriously these where amazing were do we sign up for the program?
Anonymous
1/9/20, 7:02 AM
I've never commented before, but I just wanted to say this was a great story and, Hypnothrill, you definitely have some loyal fans still reading!
Anonymous
1/9/20, 6:56 AM
im a big fan of your writing. you know how to make it hot 🤩
1/9/20, 6:23 AM
Fuckin hot. Now i gotta go read everything you ever wrote.
Buteo
1/9/20, 6:17 AM
Yeah, I think its worth a part two.
1/9/20, 6:02 AM
All right, dudes--its your playground now. Enjoy!
Anonymous
1/9/20, 3:52 AM
great start! looking forward to more - how many chapters will there be?
StevenCS
1/9/20, 2:55 AM
A masterful addition to one of my first and still favorite stories. Your work is excellent, as always, and am glad to see every post you make.
1/9/20, 2:51 AM
Another great story, Hypnothrill, and an excellent expansion on one of the classics. I always look forward to seeing what you've come up with. The single sour note in this chapter, to me, is in the sentence: "Still, it is up to the slavers to decide whether we can stay together; it is not a slave’s place to ask for such things." The use of the word "slavers" felt off. If, after they graduate, the various slaves are being sold off, I would have expected "masters" there as, to me, "slavers" implies those who are capturing slaves, not just owning them. That said, though, it was a very hot finale that leaves one wanting to see what else is happening on that campus.
Anonymous
1/9/20, 2:22 AM
I need more!
1/9/20, 1:20 AM
Thanks, Mreyes! (Boy, what I wouldn't give for another chapter of "Little Friends"....)
Mreyes
1/9/20, 1:15 AM
You are by far one of the most talented writers on this site. I love reading your material
1/9/20, 12:48 AM
I echo Cigarboy Cody's sentiments....who is the Master? I woll be imagining the Frat's adventures in mindscaping tonight as I lay in bed...Thank you!!!
1/9/20, 12:29 AM
I agree with absman 420 (whose name I adore, BTW); Ho9wever, I'm looking forward to the probable payoff, next chapter...
1/9/20, 12:19 AM
Ifeel myself seething with anticipation...sooo ,loving this.
1/9/20, 12:10 AM
I'm in love with this narrative pattern! I especially love the shifts in the narrator's thought patterns, tenses, syntax, etc. This gymnastically-arranged slow burn is giving me warm fuzzies and tinglies in my nethers....
Anonymous
1/8/20, 11:54 PM
hope you will continue this someday!
1/8/20, 11:50 PM
Both subtle and direct, simultaneously...Hypnothrill is at it, again!!
Cigarboy Cody
1/8/20, 11:23 PM
Write another chapter to let us know who the Master is please!! As usual another great story!!
Anonymous
1/8/20, 11:14 PM
so do I
Anonymous
1/8/20, 11:13 PM
Leaves me hot and hard; looking forward to seeing what you do next. (I'm especially hoping for the end to CockUp)
Anonymous
1/8/20, 11:11 PM
please do not make it a hypnotist gets hypnotized by his own program its way better him fucking with assholes
1/8/20, 10:55 PM
> Know that no matter what you write, you’ll always have a reader in me. :) > This is true for me as well, but I have to say this particular series had a nostalgic ring to it, easily moving it up in my ranks. I truly enjoyed the homage (or is pastiche more accurate?) Thank you for this trip through MC history. The original series was one of my first introductions to mind control and transformation and it had quite an affect on me. I appreciate you not letting yours get as out-of-control as that series went and I thought the most interesting part was the epilogue. Well done, as always.
1/8/20, 10:48 PM
Probably my favorite longer Mafisto story! I do wish the scene on the soccer field had been expanded - what's there is very hot - scorching! - but it's more a summary that's rushed through than an actual fully developed scene. Too many characters with too much happening in too short a time. That whole sequence could have been doubled or even tripled in length without it being too much. I'd love it if Mafisto did a reboot sometime!
1/8/20, 10:39 PM
This is also my favorite Mafisto vignette. I just wish the last paragraph had been expanded into more chapters, but hey, I get it's just supposed to be a vignette. Hot as hell!
Anonymous
1/8/20, 10:13 PM
Any update on when there might be another chapter? I'd love to see what happens next.
LongtimeFan
1/8/20, 9:28 PM
Hypnothrill, you truly are the best! What an incredible conclusion. I love stories that explain the change to the world as hypnosis, muscle growth, and dumbing down take control, and this delivered on all fronts. Fantastic! Know that no matter what you write, you'll always have a reader in me. :)
Anonymous
1/8/20, 9:21 PM
I love this conclusion to this series. I always look forward to reading your works Hypnothrill!
Anonymous
1/8/20, 9:09 PM
I love the shaving elements to this story. I'd love it if you made that more of a feature in anything you write in the future.
Anonymous
1/8/20, 9:09 PM
Can you have mowgli not get eaten just kept as a slave